DESCRIPTION
It talks about way back in 1949, about this girl named Martha, who thought she'd never be able to have a boyfriend until one day this boy changed her life forever. [3,032 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I have brown hair and hazel eyes, I'm 5'9" tall and I'm skinny. [January 2000]
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READER'S REVIEWS (5) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"hey your story was really good and i thought it was sad at the end cuz it made me cry i was like "nooo" and it really was good. Great Job!" -- Sarah, Miami, Florida.
"Good story, but the details were very strange. Horse drawn carriges, mentions of the gold rush, and attacks by indians? That belongs a good deal before 1949. Also, shorts and t-shirts wouldn't belong with that." -- Katie, Rhode Island.
"Um. First of all, I think you need to brush up on your writing skills a little. This could possibly, with some work, be a very touching story. And the details were distracting and detracted from your story. 1949 wasn't quite the dark ages you make it out to be. Here's an easy reference point for thinking about the technology of those days: WW2. Fought using tanks, planes, etc. Planes are a bit more complicated than cars, so I think that it would be safe for you to assume, without any research, that cars were around in 1949. Good luck on your writing." -- Wolfa.
"rose, you are amazing at writing. I was drawn into the story as martha went to the forest and saw george and how their friendship grew into love and the tragic ending, she didn't deserve to lose the one she loved. sad story.you did a very good job rose at writing the story" -- Nelson.
"heyz.! your story is very good.. it is very touching..i was like crying in the end of the story.. it is ver y sad ..Boo Hoo.. :( i t hink you better write more stor y cause i am wi lling to read it one day.. you r story is GREAT..!! Excellent Job!" -- syafiqah, singapore.
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