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I like to write stories for children and adults alike. Please enjoy my writing and leave feedback for the ones that you like or dislike. Thank you and have a nice day. :) [March 2002]
The Blue Bird On A Snowy Day In The Light Of The Moon H
One day there was a blue bird
Who liked to fly on the sunniest of days
She was a very happy little blue bird
She liked to sing
She liked to fly
She would perch on a branch by my window
I would watch her sing a happy song
It made me very happy to watch her
One day she did not come to my window
It was a snowy day
I put on a coat and walked outside
Only to find my blue bird dead
Her ebon cone beak clamped shut
Frosted over with the blood of struggle
And glistening in the light of the moon
One wing snapped as if one tried to wrap it
Around her entire little frame
Her various bird bones broken and exposed
Poking through her thin skin like flowers
Emerging from the ground as it thaws
For Spring's delight
Jesus Christ, who did this to me?
Who killed my little blue bird?
Why did they do this?
So I went into my house and got my axe
I walked through the forest for hours
Face frozen with tears, hair frozen with sweat
Until I came upon a fox with bloody maw
I raised my axe to strike him down
One blow between the eyes was all it took
To split his skull like a fractured egg
The pinkish "yolk" pouring from within
I fell to my knees and devoured the brains
Face covered in gore, I looked up at the sky
That moon that had followed me with wicked smile
Such cunning guile had she that she had tricked me
Into murdering not a fox, but a woman
My wife
Oh god
Oh god
Oh god
Oh god
Oh god
Oh god
Oh god
I must hide the body.
Oh god
Oh god
Oh god
Oh god
Oh god
Oh god
Jesus save me
I've done a terrible thing
And now no one must know
Except for those that read this story
The admission of my guilt
For I murdered the fox
Who was innocent all along
And in my walking sleep killed the bird as well
That is all well and good
Because I will get away with it
(I will be at the old coal factory downtown.
That is where the missing gold is.
Catch me if you can, detectives.)
READER'S REVIEWS (7) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"ARAAHAHAHHAHA! I love LA. We love it!" -- Adrian Barbobot.
"This story touches me in places only that only nuns have before. The fifth and sixth "Oh god" send me deep into a trance where I begin shaking and reciting the entire Ace of Base album from beginning to end. With verse comparable to that of Petrarch and Shakespeare, you should think of becoming a troubadour. By the end of the poem I was genuinely worried for your well being, but realizing there are so many old coal factories, I now know those stupid detectives will never find you. I miss you so much. Please come back to the orphanage where we can play tiddlywinks until dusk. You are sorely missed. Bedtime at 7:30, after many reruns of Who's the Boss and a Macaroni and Lard dinner. The key is under the mat. Come back, or I'll do something awful to myself. Never stop crying." -- Quene Doppelpopoulos.
"You are going to warp the fragile little mind of any child who reads this. It was good. " -- Alison.
"Great, but a bit graphic for small children, but I loved it." -- Kate, Florida.
"This is truly!!! sick!!! how could you even write, such a Thing??? you had some very good images!!! and this lost them!!! at the quick! I never read anything more twisted in my life! How can you say this is for "Children?" Truly grotesic!!! this is the kind of stuff, adults shouldn't even read!!!! It's know wonder "Why" theres so much "Killing" in the "World!" "I would be ashamed to even put my name on this "Title" and even more to say..."It's for, "Children"... disgraceful!!! and, to ask Jesus to save you? yuck!!!! " -- Rena .
"you are a sick fuck" -- Brian O Neil.
" "You said it! "Brian!" hit the nail, right on the --- head! " -- Rena .
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