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TITLE (EDIT)
The Strange Mansion |
DESCRIPTION
The story is very long and it's a scary story.
[1,329 words] |
AUTHOR
Rose Trimovski |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I have brown hair and hazel eyes, I'm 5'9" tall and I'm skinny.
[January 2000] |
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The Strange Mansion
Rose Trimovski
Ones There was a Girl named Jenni she was tall about 5' 8 with Brown hair Green eyes and she was sorta chubby looking.Her an her parents were packing there stuff and putting it in their moving van, So they could move to this really big house that was a Mansion, Jenni was soo happy because she always loved Going to different places.So as soon as they were done packing they Got in their car and drove there, it took them 1 hour to get there.So as they got there they drove up to a big gate which an old woman was standing next to. She asked "So your the new people moving here huh?" "Yes we are" said Jenni's dad an mom. The woman then told them to wait a minute, She went over to some kind of code and pressed in the numbers then the big creaking gate doors opened.The old woman said "You may pass." So they drove in.Jenni's dad stopped his engine and took his key out of the car and they all got out, as jenni's parents were unloading their belongings into the car.Jenni looked up and saw how huge the house was it was a big mansion an it was really cool.Jenni went over to the old woman and she said "Hi im Jenni whats your name?" "Im Miss Carolyn,Nice to meet you Jenni" Said the old woman. "you too" said Jenni.As Jenni was getting ready to go inside the house the old woman inturrupted her and said "Just be sure not to go in room 12 whatever you do!" Jenni's stomach started hurting and she asked frightengly "W-Why?" The old woman looked at her an said "Because its none of your buisness now go on!" Jenni got scared she nearly jumped so she ran up the steps inside the mansion.She walked inside and looked up, the ceiling was 50 feet high and there were over 100 rooms, and really long long hallways! She liked the place! So then as she was going up to her mother to help her with some of the things one of the doors in the hallway started opening slowly.....and light peered out when she turned around it slammed hard! She got scared, then she went to go see what was around she saw a room she liked with a lot of dolls in it, they were all staring at her! She picked up the dolls and smiled at it she lightly touched its hair but then the doll bit her finger she shrieked "OUCH!" she dropped the doll and as she was about to head out of the door to get a bandage Miss Carolyn was standing in front of the door and she asked "What Are you doing?Pick that doll up nicely and put it where you saw it!" She did as she was told and said "Im sorry."
Miss Carolyn said "I forgive you this time but next time I wont, you shouldnt be looking through people's stuff." "O-Ok" said Jenni. Then Jenni's mom called an said it was time to go to bed an that Miss Carolyn would show her to her room.
She walked up the stairs to her left in room 125. She got inside and put her belongings on the bed. "This is where u will be sleeping from now on." Said Miss Carolyn "Good night" So Miss carolyn left the room and closed the door.Jenni looked around her room there was a cute mirror she liked it was pink with flowers on it she looked through it and a ghostly face appeared in the mirror,she shrieked and turned around but nothing was there. She got dressed in her pj's and hopped into bed, she fell asleep that night, but woke up in the middle of the night because it was cold like ice, then she looked at the rocking chair in front of her and there was a ghostly man sitting in there the same man in her mirror that she saw hours ago, the man that was rocking back and forth was staring at her with Wide open eyes!He was suddenly getting off of his chair To get her she Freaked out and jumped out of her bed she went over to her door to open it but it was locked,she turned back and he was walking towards her!She then jumped on her bed and under the covers crying! When she peered out he was gone, "Maybe its j-j-just a dream she said to herself" She fell asleep.The next morning She went down stairs and into the kitchen to get something to eat,but Miss Carolyn wasnt in the kitchen.She ran into Miss Carolyn's Room But then she saw that same ghost man and he said "Dont worry Miss Carolyn wont bother you no more because shes already dead hahahahaha!!!" She looked at Miss.Carolyn's body there all bloody with worms crawling out of it and her head was Missing!She ran down the hall into the kitchen crying!Her mom ran in and said "Whats wrong Honey?" She said "Mom Miss Carolyn is Dead!" "Dont be crazy said her mom, you probably didnt get enough sleep last night because of all that excitement about the new house, now eat something and go out and play dear!" Jenni wondered why her mom didnt believe her maybe because the ghostly figure of the guy hipnotized her or something.As Jenni was getting out her food it was Spaghetti and MeatBalls,as soon as she was about to eat it she screamed and dropped her fork to the floor!It was Miss Carolyn's hair and eye balls!!!!! She threw the food away and ran to her mom to tell her what was going on, her mom ran into the kitchen to see what was going on,so when her daughter showed her the food there was nothing there. "Young lady I told you not to be playing these kind of Jokes now go to your room!" Jenni ran the mansion stairs to her room and laid on her bed crying because Miss Carolyn was Gone forever.Then she smelled Something sick like dead people she followed the scent down the hall into a room she opened the door and then saw lots of worms with Miss.Carolyn's body hanging there and a lot of skeleton bones,It was sick, she slammed the door immediatly! Then she ran back to her room.Her mom was Walking down the hall when she suddenly tripped on the slippery floor and started rolling down the steps next to her was Miss.Carolyn's head she screamed and died because her neck cracked really bad as Jenni and her father ran out to see what was happening they both saw a ghost pulling jenni's mom into the dead people room.Jenni told her father not to scream because if the ghost heard them they would die. But Jenni's father said "NOOOOOOOOOO LET GO OF HER!!" Jenni grabbed her dad running down the hall because the ghost was chasing after them.Then they went into the library suddenly all the books came out of the shelves and some of the books sliced into Jenni's Father's stomach.The blood was gushing out soo bad that Jenni ran out of there.Then She heard a voice "I GOT U NOW LITTLE GIRL!!!" she screamed and ran off behind her was a man with a chainsaw and he was chasing her because he wanted to kill her.Then as she was running so much she tripped over a stick on the ground and the man caught her and slit the chainsaw through her and chopped her in half! The man took her in the dead people room with the rest of the people. That was the end of that family they all died, But soon those people will turn into ghosts and they will haunt other families and kill them too we will see if other families can survive in the house with living horrors.
The end
Story made by,
Rose
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"I LOVED THE STORY ITS SOOOO GOOD AN COOL, I WOULD SAY GOOD JOB TO THE PERSON WHICH IS ROSE THAT MADE IT, GREAT JOB!" -- Joanna Rodis, Chicago, ILLinois.
"I really liked your story it was da bomb!!" -- KiKi, Miami, Florida.
"Your fixation with physical descriptions, in all of your work, is rather odd. For example, you could have written "Jenni was a tall girl, with straight brown hair and striking green eyes," instead. It's a better attention-grabber." -- Wolfa.
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STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
January 2000 |
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