DESCRIPTION
The fourth volume in my sereis, and the last one to go by 'Smith & Ronalds'. The story is as follows: Detectives Trevor E. Smith and David Ronalds team ounce again with Carrie B. Moss and Cedric Madison to search for their lost friend Dr. Hector Stone. Helping them is Ella Begri, a cop in training who is unwillingy being used to help a traitor to the BPD and to Hector. She has to get through the lies around her and help new friends she hardly knows. [10,812 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am a 15 year old writer from Indianapolis, Indiana. I write poems, books, and songs. But my greatest passion is for film. My intrests range from Harry Potter, to Tarantino, to Billy Joel. I hope every one enjoys my work! [February 2005]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (14) As The Stars Streak By (Poetry) I A poem that is in my new book "BPD: Danger Rising". I figured I would post it by itself to see what people thought of it. Enjoy! [64 words] [Spiritual] Bpd: Danger Rising-Part 1 (Novels) This is the fifth book in the series that used to go by the name of "Smith & Ronalds". I changed it becuase other characters are playing a bigger role in the story than before. The story picks up righ... [6,876 words] Depth (Poetry) A poem about trying to find out who you are and what you place in the world is, an eternal struggle that we all face. [145 words] Light And Dark (Poetry) A peom about my greatest love: cinema. This poem is a celebration of the world of film. I hope you like it! [170 words] On And Offf (Poetry) A poem about confusion and distress, and the struggle to overcome it. [180 words] Significance-First Draft (Screenplays) The first draft of my script. It is the simple story of a teenage girl on a soccer team. May seem boring, but my sole mission in my sripts are to make stories that are almost completetley devoid of cl... [9,272 words] [Drama] Smith & Ronalds: A Time Of Change (Novels) The third entry in the Smith & Ronalds series. It focuses on the 1996 presidental election. Hector, Trev, Dave, Carrie, and Cedric all have to cope with the dargerous side-effects of politics. [5,620 words] [Drama] Smith & Ronalds: The Murder Of The Prisoners (Novels) The first story in my series. It is the story of two detectives who team with a Hematologist to stop a mysterious vigilante on the lose in Indiana. [9,467 words] [Crime] Smith & Ronalds: The Shawdow In The Alley (Novels) My second re-post. It is the second volume in my sereie. It ounce again takes place at S3 of the Bloomington Police Department. Dave and Trev ounce again team with Dr. Hector Stone to track down a kil... [5,969 words] [Crime] The Immortal Seed (Poetry) A poem about something that we all have within us, and something that aides us more then anything else. [149 words] The Round Dams (Poetry) A poem about concealed sadness and the reluctance to let it free. [171 words] Thirst (Poetry) "Why?": The universal question we all ask. When we ask that, we are often in need of something, something that is beyond our grasps. This poem is about that need we all feel, even if what that is is f... [90 words] Where Have The Times Gone? (Poetry) A poem about the loss of something that was always uncertain. It is about what we sometime want to lose, but should never be lost: friendship. [128 words] Winter To Spring (Poetry) A poem about hope, and the eduring power of the human spirit. [161 words]
READER'S REVIEWS (3) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"I will say this again, you show tremendous potential for being only fourteen, and your crime stories have inspired me to even try my hand at a story similar to yours. Heck, you've even made me want to read crime fiction, something I've never been keen to do! I've also noticed that you don't use swearing in your works, something that I myself don't do. I'm wondering though: Why is this particular police precinct investigating a crime that took place in California? Shouldn't it be left up to the cops in Cali? "He was a man with an overly casual dress style and was know to be obsessed with pop-culture items." That should read, 'known to be'. “How everything going Carrie?” That should read, 'How's everything going, Carrie?" "It Hector when he was but a boy." That should read, 'It was Hector...' "All of then shook their heads, curiously." That should read, 'All of them...' "He extended his right had and turned it off." That should read, 'He extended his right hand...' "Today was his first on his new case" That should read, 'his first day...' "It took Hector while to figure out what she meant by “Kill you”." That should read, 'It took Hector awhile...' "But it wasn’t as far fetched, as it seemed." The comma should be deleted. “Where are Trevor and David?” That should be, 'Where is...' “He’ll be okay.” She said." You mean to say that they aren't concerned that he'll bleed to death? I must say this also, this is probably your second best entry in the series, coming in following the very first entry. Good job. Keep up the magnificence. " -- Michael Harris, Detroit, MI.
"I am so glad that my stories have entertained you so much! It really makes me happy to hear this! Okay the reason there isn't any swearing is actually because I don't want my parents to be mad. There are places where I wanted to, and I think there are places where a cop would NEVER say 'darn' or dang'. But I feel a bit uncomfortable using cuss words. The reson they investigated Hectors case in Cali was because of a scene I completley forgot to write (it will be added shortly) where David insists on being a part of the case, and Georgeton gives in, nervously though. About the part where Derek Georgeton is bleeding, they just want to figure out where their friends are a LITTLE bit more than worry about the welfare of that jerk! He makes it though. I am wondering how much you liked the character of Ella Begri? Because she is my personal fave. Thanks again!!!" -- Collins.
"Wow, you're only 14? You show a lot of poetential. Nice job." -- km.
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