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TITLE (EDIT)
You And Me Poem |
DESCRIPTION
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[88 words] |
AUTHOR
Michelle Jones |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I just write, and I try to write stuff I think people will like, but I think that I mostly write for me.
[November 2001] |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (1)
The Legend Of Yin (Short Stories) A story of an assassin in ancient China, out for revenge on his father's murderer. [2,940 words] [Action]
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You And Me Poem
Michelle Jones
The tears are gently falling
Like the snowflakes on the ground
I'm wishing you could be here
With the love that we both found
You don't remember who I am
Because you chose to just ignore
You're just pretending to like her
When it's me that you adore
How could you do such a thing to us?
To me, to you to her?
I wish that things were back,
Back to the way they were
But I guess I've got to accept it
That it's her you like not me
I miss the way it was
Just us, Just you and me
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"The poem's idea was good, but your rhythym kinda sucked. Actually, it was just plain bad. You REALLY need to work on that" -- Larrisa.
"ok your peom was a good idea. it was pretty good, but is it true? like have you ever been actually in love or something? " -- christy.
"If you try to write things that people LIKE, try not to write crappy poems, okay?" -- Daphne.
"I tihnk that your poem is great. True, sometimes your rhythm was a little off beat, but I still think it was all around good. I really liked the idea. " -- Callie.
"My God, that sucks" -- Letitia.
"Jesus Christ! Are you TRYING to butcher poetry and everytihn about it? "I write for me"? B.S.! You write manufactured shit! So, I just suggest you stop writing now and GIVE IT UP! Before you get more hate mail." -- Emily Jones.
"Michelle...the people who gave u these reviews are obviously freaks and u need to delete those reviews. I am a published poet and I thought your poem was very sweet and sincere and the rhythm was fine. You'll get more polished with time and experience but u need to rid yourslef of people who have no class or education. Just go to the edit your work section of storymania and go down to the point where it says edit your title and scroll down to manage reviews and delete what these horrid people said. Good luck Michelle...only write for yourself no one else." -- A worried peer.
"Nice poem, Michelle. I happen to review this poem of yours on the way to searching a classmate with the same name. Your poem is as endearing as it tugs at the heart strings -- simultaneously. And you certainly don't seem to mind all that criticism, treating it like water off a duck's back! Never mind who you write for. When the words flow, put pen to paper and keep going. Good luck with your future." -- Jay.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2001 Michelle Jones |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
November 2001 |
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