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Just a poem about feeling inadequate about yourself, ad who you are, to the point that you have become a ontradiction to yourself and unsure of what it is you are, and yet still trying to take care of the people that surround you. [34 words]
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Confusion Sets In A Delusion Of Adequacy
i will never consider
to write letters
and capitalize my i's
for i now lack
what you call self content
so if you hear from me
check to make sure
that i've dotted my eyes
so confusion does not find you
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"There is a simplicity and understatement in this piece that seems familiar. Comforting somehow. Watch your syntax." -- AJ Magy.
"IMAGES! Give us beautiful horrible, Dirty rust-lined, greasy with adjectives clumpy IMAGES! You obviously CAN - make us SEE what you want us to" -- _________.
"you love to watch me.......your turn at the feeling soon...privacy is just a drifting memory" -- sean, anaheim, ca, usa.
"Well, I can say that it is simple. And, I can say that the reader is confused, because this can be meant to be humourous, statements and other things. It all depends on the readers' point of view and through that you will get different comments. Positive or negative comments. You must be able to let all your readers feel the same about the poem and not mumbo jumbo. Of course, this is my point of view, you needn't heed it, but think about it. My comment is neither a negative or a positive one. Just think about what the others and myself wrote." -- Cherie, Singapore.
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