ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Dark imagination, things that slither in the night, the dark side of existence ... Fascinating. I imagine, I write, I dream ... [February 2003]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (55) Descent To Hell (Poetry) This is actually a song I wrote for a novel. [233 words] Do You Feel Me? (Poetry) - [84 words] [Erotic] Don't (Poetry) - [91 words] Edge Of Eternity (Poetry) Loss and redemption. [189 words] Epilogue (Poetry) - [35 words] Eternal Curse (Poetry) Vampires... again. [124 words] [Horror] Evil (Poetry) Another song? What's up with this? [118 words] Fantasy .... Reality (Poetry) Written after a rude awakening. [73 words] [Relationships] Freeky (Poetry) Feelin' kinda dirty ... feelin' kinda mean ... [81 words] [Erotic] Games (Poetry) - [103 words] Happenstance (Poetry) A little silly, perhaps? [66 words] Heaven Bound (Poetry) As did Sylvia, I felt the need to express my feelings on this day of national tragedy, and as she so aptly stated, no reviews necessary. [124 words] Imaginary Lover (Poetry) - [74 words] [Erotic] Immortal Obsession (Poetry) Immortal cravings. [94 words] In The Eventide (Poetry) - [100 words] Insanity Part Un & Insanity Part Deux (Poetry) I believe I've lost it .... [155 words] Interlude (Short Stories) Chance encounters can be dangerous.... [172 words] [Horror] Lycanthrope (Poetry) Poem or short story... you decide... [197 words] [Horror] Mezmerized (Poetry) Oh, the lure of the darkness. [165 words] [Horror] My So-Called Life (Poetry) - [99 words] Not Quite Haiku (Poetry) Just what it seems... [49 words] Nothing Left (Poetry) Love realized. [138 words] [Erotic] Only Words (Poetry) - [61 words] Onslaught Of Love (Poetry) Secret yearnings ... [137 words] Pandora's Bottle (Short Stories) First love, last love... [5,004 words] [Horror] Player (Poetry) When the player tires of the game.... [57 words] [Relationships] Please Now (Poetry) - [49 words] Post Mortem (Poetry) In Memory of Mark Whitney Davis 1960-2001 You left me here alone ... WHY? [68 words] Predator (Poetry) - [84 words] Primal (Poetry) - [26 words] Ravenous (Poetry) - [47 words] [Horror] Requiem (Poetry) -Perhaps a final goodbye [40 words] Reverie (Poetry) - [100 words] Sacrificial Lamb (Poetry) - [94 words] Sisters Of The Heart (Poetry) In Memory of Joey Callihan 1949-1999 [120 words] Soliloquy (Short Stories) A woman seeking love, finds more than she expected. [173 words] [Fable] Soul Of A Dove (Poetry) - [73 words] Spontaneous Combustion (Poetry) A little heat.... [72 words] [Erotic] Steam Heat (Poetry) A little something to warm a winter's day? [20 words] Super Bowl High (Poetry) I've been a Bucs fan from the first inauspicious fumbling in the dark to tonight's awesome Super Bowl win ... This is dedicated to all of us diehard fans! Go Bucs! [109 words] The Bell Tower (Poetry) Unrequited love ... [169 words] [Romance] The Callous Heart (Poetry) Those lying guys... I mean eyes ... [89 words] [Relationships] The Looking Glass (Poetry) - [155 words] The Memory Book (Poetry) A real departure from my usual ... [155 words] The Mists Of Dreams (Poetry) Sensuality. [69 words] [Romance] The Portrait (Short Stories) A painting with a dark secret ... [1,352 words] [Horror] This Man Of Mine (Poetry) - [95 words] Those Eyes (Poetry) Can fantasy become reality? [68 words] [Erotic] Traces Of You (Poetry) - [99 words] Transformation (Poetry) I know, I know, vampires again.... [152 words] Vamp (Poetry) I know, more vampires, I just can't seem to help myself... and who said vampires have to be male? [158 words] [Horror] Vampire (Poetry) - [70 words] [Horror] Where? (Poetry) Lost love [97 words] Whispers On The Wind (Poetry) Something ghostly this way comes... [92 words] [Horror] Winter Wind (Poetry) Alone. [128 words]
I Am Sin Judith Goff
The stars were flung across the skies
Reflected in his ebon eyes
His lips were full and deeply red
And whispered things most mortals dread.
But I who lay in his embrace
Felt no such fear, no not a trace
As his cold hands caressed my skin
He murmured to me "I am sin"
My passion flared, a bright hot stain
Upon my soul, his lust to gain
I gave myself to his desire
That seared me with unholy fire.
Beneath a moon, so pale and far
The shadows cast a jagged scar
Across my body, white and gleaming
A scarlet sea of blood was streaming
His hungery mouth drank in my life
His fangs stabbed into me like a knife
I surrendered to his savage bite
As a mournful howl impaled the night ...
READER'S REVIEWS (8) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"Very good!! I'm glad I have influenced you at least a little and have inspired you to write at a furious pace!" -- R. Bennett Okerstrom.
"You have !!!!!! You've awakened a sleeping monster (:o)" -- Judith.
"Judith...this is brilliant. I love Vampire pieces and this one and one by L.A. Winterburn called "Tender" (its on storymania also) are just brilliantly written. Great Job!!! I llok forward to reading more of your work. p.s. Thanks for the review for "Little Pieces of Me"." -- Michelle.
"Thanks so much, Michelle ... There are more vampires, hope you enjoy them" -- Judith.
"Hey Judith! You seem to be one of the vamp experts on here so thought you could read my poem "Thirst" and tell me what you think. Thanks! " -- Michelle.
"A momument to creative potentiality...your voice is clear and language poetic, but you could have made the scene more subtle, and thus more sublime, by incorporating less (so that the reader can fill in the gaps with his/her knowledge of vampire mythology)." -- Cole, Amherst, MA, USA.
"Cole, thank you for the critique ... I wonder, however, why you resorted to vulgarity and cruel adolescent taunts when reviewing 'The Bell Tower. Constructive feedback is appreciated ..." -- Judith.
"Wow Judith this was excelent and gave me goose bumps. I dont agree with Cole either, I think that some poems do require subtle immagery to allow the reader his own immagination to take over. But I also feel that there is a place, for poems that set a scene and tell a story, describing things in details to allow a build up of tention. Check out my "A wolf's tale and a Bunny's tale." Any way, again very nice work I liked it alot." -- Lee Winterburn.
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