Confusion 1 by Peter Rivendell A game with destiny? You decide. [169 words]
Threats by Peter Rivendell Sometimes, even in a crowded place you can feel totally alone... [73 words]
You Deserved It All by Toluwalope Olugbenga Ogunlesi A poem about anger. [143 words]
What Whales Dream by Stuart Eric Longridge A 500 million year old reincarnated whale day dreaming what it was like when he was a stupid ... [124 words]
Wake Up Sleepy Dead by Stuart Eric Longridge Dont fall asleep at the wheel. [175 words]
Trapped In The Masque by Peter Rivendell A dark hymn for troubled times. [120 words]
Trails, A Collection Of Verse by Akanihu C Wilson A collection of verse. [1,051 words]
Thoughts At An End by Eric A Hofmann Met a girl. It didn't work out like I thought it would. She was my first love. It is a pr... [179 words]
The Waking by Keri McGriff - [16 words]
The Mists Of Dreams by Judith Goff Sensuality. [69 words]
The Maya by Stuart Eric Longridge Lost but not forgotten. [221 words]
The Internal Storm by L A Winterburn A poem about what its like when I get a panic attack and the hope that I feel, that things w... [96 words]
Subliminal Messages by Stuart Eric Longridge Don't talk crap. [114 words]
Spirit Dancer by Sue (Sooz) Simpson - [514 words]
Sisters Of The Heart by Judith Goff In Memory of Joey Callihan 1949-1999 [120 words]
Requiem by Judith Goff -Perhaps a final goodbye [40 words]
Real by R Palooza - [137 words]
Please Now by Judith Goff - [49 words]
Performers by Peter Rivendell When you feel like an outsider, sometimes you hope no one ever notices... Written when I was 18. See... [239 words]
Paint My World by Paula Poland A woman struggles with depression and self-isolation. From a strange dream I had. [111 words]
Only Words by Judith Goff - [61 words]
Nothing Much by Pearl S - [328 words]
Nightscape by Peter Rivendell - [100 words]
Night's Sorrow by Rose Trimovski A poem about a man, who has no friends, is all alone... [101 words]
My Friend by Michael Allen Rosendo This poem is about a girl. I liked her, and she told me that she wanted to date me. At the same time... [160 words]
Marching Band by Peter Rivendell When love fades... a lyric as much as a poem... [96 words]
Mans Dust by Stuart Eric Longridge Under the cosmic carpet. [106 words]
Lycanthrope by Judith Goff Poem or short story... you decide... [197 words]
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Jinny by Sue (Sooz) Simpson - [176 words]
Iraq Attack by Stuart Eric Longridge Don't believe the hype. [209 words]
Freeky by Judith Goff Feelin' kinda dirty ... feelin' kinda mean ... [81 words]
Flow by Peter Rivendell - [106 words]
Expedition by Peter Rivendell A view of the future? Or a view of the past? Is there any difference? [170 words]
Evil by Judith Goff Another song? What's up with this? [118 words]
Earth Bound by Stuart Eric Longridge Again more origins. [220 words]
Descent To Hell by Judith Goff This is actually a song I wrote for a novel. [233 words]
Crop Crap by Stuart Eric Longridge I made one with my face. [95 words]
Creation Copyright by Stuart Eric Longridge Over my head. [40 words]
Children Of The Night by David B Doc Byron Vampires! Dark shadows! Ghosts! Blood sucking! I'm sorry, I couldn't resist! [108 words]
Cave Man Monkey Stinker by Stuart Eric Longridge Monkey magic not. [143 words]
Burn Out by Alan T Geake This was written after hearing about a rock singer's suicide. [88 words]
Book Of The Dead by David B Doc Byron A sinner signs their soul away. [81 words]
Blue Jean Kangaroo by Michael Allen Rosendo Surrealistic poem. [103 words]
Blind Faith by Stuart Eric Longridge Giving away your mind. [274 words]
Art Thou Art? by Mia Angello - [44 words]
Adventure Playground by Peter Rivendell - [113 words]
A Verse Of Doubt by Eric A Hofmann - [41 words]
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TITLE (EDIT)
Lets Get High!! |
DESCRIPTION
My new year's resolution and The title speaks for itself LOL.
[88 words] |
AUTHOR
L A Winterburn |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[April 2003] |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (28)
A Bunny's Tale (Poetry) The Bunny rabbit's view of what happened in AS wolf's tale. [443 words]
A Freind To The End (Poetry) A poem for my best friend. [61 words]
A New Baby Born (Poetry) A poem for a friend's baby boy. [83 words]
A Perfect Night (Poetry) A very sweet love poem. [118 words]
A Prayer For Lovers (Poetry) As the title suggest's. [30 words]
A Wolf's Tale (Poetry) Ever wonderd what its like to be a wolf hunting his prey? NO! Well I have so I hope you enjoy it hehe. [465 words]
An Ode To My Love (Poetry) - [72 words]
Are We Nearly There Yet? (Poetry) A really funny poem that I am sure all parents who have ever gone on day trips can relate to. [129 words]
Dont Let The Bastards Get You Down (Poetry) A funny poem about the stresses of life. [114 words]
Earths Plight (Poetry) A poem about what we are doing to the planet. [111 words]
Everything Will Be Fine (Poetry) Short prose. [52 words]
Holding On To Life (Poetry) One mans fight with suicide. [109 words]
Holly Marie (Poetry) A poem done for a friend of mine who has recently had a baby. [58 words]
Let The Madness Cease (Poetry) - [49 words]
Love Hurts (Poetry) Poem about a man who loves to much. [92 words]
Missing You (Poetry) - [21 words]
Soon (Poetry) A love poem. [61 words]
Tender (Poetry) How far one woman goes for the man she loves. [63 words]
The Internal Storm (Poetry) A poem about what its like when I get a panic attack and the hope that I feel, that things will get better. [96 words]
The Plan (Poetry) One plan to wipe out humanity. [74 words]
The Traveller (Poetry) - [88 words]
The Visitor (Short Stories) Short horror story. [4,918 words]
There Must Be More To Life Than Customer Service! (Poetry) A morbid but shit funny short poem of what its like to work in customer service. [50 words]
Waiting (Poetry) Poetry about a man who wants to commit suicide. But why? [184 words]
What A Morning (Poetry) - [302 words]
What Do You Do (Poetry) short childrens poem .br>[183 words] [183 words]
What Makes Me Wait? (Poetry) - [85 words]
Who Is My Mom? (Poetry) A soppy poem I wrote for my mom on her birthday. [65 words]
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Lets Get High!!
L A Winterburn
Another year; A year of hope
Another chance to smoke some dope
This green weeds great; this green weeds cool
As I fall into a multi-coloured whirlpool
I need this stuff I need this thing
Escape I want; I am the king!
It’s started now, my head spins fast
My mates skinning up but I wont last
And so I lay on my floor
Come on guys. I can take some more
You cant get hooked I hear them say
And getting stoned just makes my day
So all this year I’ll make a pact
To stay completely stoned and facked
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READER'S REVIEWS (9)
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"lol....you're gonna give the wrong impression of yourself darling." -- Me.
"relax me, it just a poem. nothing is wrong with it. i tried to find something negative about it. silly me." -- lori-ann.
"Umm...erm....This is..well, the Dumbest poem that I've ever read. Personally, to me you sound like a prick in your other poems. And...this one makes you sound like a stoner. But, stoners don't write poems about bunnies, animals, wolves, love, etc. So...uh...you suck. It sounds like you wrote this just to fit in or something. So, all in all, I rate your poem as a ...a...0. , oh, no offense or anything. " -- Me.
"Errrrrr you don’t mean to cause any offense? What were you trying to do then? But its ok, you didn't. Obviously you are someone that feels there own work is so inadequate that you have to try to totally dishearten someone you have never met. Is that why you didn't put your real name (ME)? Oh and just incase you were wondering, which I bet you probably aren’t, this poem here was meant as a joke, and I do admit it isn’t my best work. But if you have read most of my other poems, (and from your review I am guessing you have) then something must have kept you reading." -- The Author.
"You think MY work's "inadequate"? Actually, i don't write. So, sorry, that little line of yours didn't hurt a bit." -- Me.
"And why would I want to put my real name anyways? What would that prove.."hey, i signed with my real name!Yay!!I'm so proud!"..uh..I don't think so.Besides, you could be some crazed stalker, so, why would I want to give you my name?HUH?" -- ME.
"LOL you don’t write (me)? Then how can you comment on my work? Well I guess you can try to comment, but obviously I have a better imagination and more talent than yourself to be able to make something out of nothing IE write poems and stories. Oh and I wasn't trying to hurt you by writing my response to your review I was just trying to make a point that for someone who has wrote such a harsh and vindictive review should have more guts to tell me who the review came from. So at least I can look at the work you produce. But as you said, you don’t have any imagination to be able to do that. In your first review, you called me a few names that I thought were uncalled for, as you were supposed to be reviewing my poetry, not just slagging me of and trying to second guess my character. This I believe shows a lot of immaturity in your self, and I would appreciate it if you would not review any more of my poems unless you are going to give me some constructive feedback, (Thankyou)" -- The author.
"It's good that you credit yourself with such imagination and talent, flattering will keep you happy. And obviously your a closed minded person if you think that writing is the only way to express yourself.FYI, it's not. And you don't think that a person who DOESN'T write shouldn't have the brain to review?uh.....most people who read DON'T write, and so if they can't make comments..well, you writers are out of luck. And I think that whether a person choses to put words down on paper has nothing to do with their being able to chose what they like and don't like. A person who has absolutely NO experience would still be able to decide what they thought was good/bad. And uh.... your comment "But as you said, you don’t have any imagination to be able to do that", confused me a tad. Uhm..as I recall, I never said this about myself..so....i dunno, you should really try to get your facts straight. And I called you "names that were uncalled for"? Prick, and Stoner? Um..ok, to me they're not harsh...but then again my generation is used to it. So, if that hurt you, I'm sorry. And by the way, I can be immature if i want to, I'm mature enough to make my own decisions. Bye.Bye." -- Me.
"good grief...*sigh*...look "ME" the author is just trying to say that if you cant be constructive, ie: work on flow, rhyme, etc..... then shut the FUCK up!!" -- michelle.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2003 L A Winterburn |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
January 2003 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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