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TITLE (EDIT)
Thoughts At An End |
DESCRIPTION
Met a girl. It didn't work out like I thought it would. She was my first love. It is a pretty personal poem and I am surprised to be writing this for some to read. Do not look at the pushing as physical, but more as a metephor for the struggles in the relationship. I know it isn't that poetic, but it really helped to get some thoughts on papaer.
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TITLE KEYWORD
Relationships |
AUTHOR
Eric A Hofmann |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Student at Colorado State University majoring in Technical Journalism. Dream job would be to work for Car and Driver, Motor Trend, etc. I like reading and writing about the mystical, but often personal issues of our lives. I hope to write a book when I go back to Europe next year and to someday teach in higher education.
[January 2003] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
Hofamange@hotmail.com |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (4)
A Verse Of Doubt (Poetry) - [41 words] [Mind]
Misguided Man (Poetry) I wrote this poem in my Study of Lit. class. It is about my bad relationship with my father. notice the metephor of the hand throughout the piece, and a I hope you can gain a better understanding of ... [67 words] [Relationships]
Our Ignorance, Our Sight (Poetry) I just sat down and wanted to seek out the big picture of why we believe and act the ways we do. I know that it really has no structure, but I was searching for words more rapidly than my mind could ... [106 words] [Psychology]
Twenty-First Century Mankind (Short Stories) I chose to write a modern day myth which tackled subjects that I thought should be looked at more clearly. This was for my LB170 class at CSU and gained much attenetion. It is my first work of real ... [1,273 words] [Mystical]
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Thoughts At An End
Eric A Hofmann
Try and push me and I will push back
Try and punch me and I will lean back.
You don't really know me so why do you try
To misconstrue me in the whites of your eyes.
Everything was true at that time
But everything changed in my life, is that such a crime?
I can't help myself and I can't help you,
So don't push me and I won't push you.
I sing "Let It Be" when times get the worst
But break down and cry when I see I am lost.
Your selfish nature took all of my love
I was confused, and soon began to shove
So all the letters I wrote were recieved
and all the letters you wrote- no, I just don't believe.
Do they exist and did you keep them?
That's right, you did, so I can't see back then.
All I'm saying is how did you expect me to try
When I couldn't share in the beauty between our eyes
You want me as a friend and that I can respect
But are you saying this because you see my sincerity, or to prove that you won't push back.
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"i liked this. it's deep, i'm not sure i understand it all the way, but it means something. i like the stanza about the letters." -- pearl.
"This poem kind of hits home. I have two friends that are going through a similar emotional situation. I like the tone: it's sincere like you just want the other person to understand." -- Majen, PA.
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STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
January 2003 |
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