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Hoes And Bitches August Nyghts
Hoes and Bitches
Bitches and Hoes
Oh nnnnnnn..NO
I refuse to sit back and let you criticize
because we prefer to screw - rather than get screwed
so in your eyes we're a bitch - a hoe
darlin listen up you've got alot to learn
so sit right down now and observe
See a bitch -baby- last I checked
Was a dog- female- unerect
sounds more like feening - male
always begging for that sweet tail
so if anyones a bitch -BABY it you
chasing us around on your hands and knees
sniffin our juicy fruit
Bitch please
I rarely get vicious--but you have crossed the line
now I'm coming out real-with true kick ass rhymes
those of you who so blatantly disrespect
Always seem to easily forget
that in this little box we keep - is the worlds most sought out treasure
All natural and 100% pure pleasure
you seek it, you crave it, we have it,
you love it, so check it
there is NO time for silly little name callin
put a label on our actions, you'll be the one left fallin
for the honey, cause it is sooooooo fuckin yummy
so stop your denyin,lyin and tryin
true playas - simply put- are hoes dyin
to get their hands on what we own
you can never capture the power we control
so put your tongue away- until i say yes
you can use it on this here clit-torous
shit
nothing but pimps and creeps
fully equipped with a pants rabbit
without a leash - if anything you NEED me
to cock it and rock it to sleep
peace
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"Everyone knows a woman lust a man just as much. " -- Jamie.
"What were you thinking? Whatever. At least if you are going to post it, do it right. A Hoe is a gardening tool, a metal blade with a handle. I believe what you want is Ho. Might I strongly suggest, as was pointed out to me, a warning. Kids do read these." -- Sylvia.
"More souless shite trash for kids to absorb,you forgot to mention the gun,oops!maybe you did." -- S.E.L, Belfast.
"August, i thought it was funny and sharp tongued. something lil'Kim or Missy Elliot should pick up on. good job. and oh Sylvia- technically Ho is a symbol for HOLMIUM -a rare earth element." -- p-dittiy.
"Maybe i was a bit harsh before,im not about disrespecting people i just think its so easy to brainwash kids,and it shows now that we have kids killing adults,with complete disregard for life because of certain images and lyrics and influences.Im talking about very young girls out wearing their thongs and stuff,you may as well wear a big sign for them fuking scum child abusers.Remember the devil protects the devil,just watch what your promoting,its the very opposite of cool ,or whatever you say.Be safe. Love ...." -- S.E.L, Belfast.
"Why is this on here? This is exactly the stuff the administration is trying to get rid of. Nevertheless, this will get many more hits because of it's title and subject matter, which all the immature teens out there can't get enough of. Just like reality TV. " -- Steven T.
"it got your attention ohh and triggered a response nonetheless. hmmmmm....it is on here because I am piecing together a book to be published and before I went mainstream with some certain works -I thought about which ones to post here to see what types recieved the most attention and reviews. my plan has worked and has helped me narrow what type of poems to include in my first book. by the way "storymania is a site for those who enjoy reading and writing" ".... for all types of original works not published elsewhere." lets stress the words ALL TYPES. " -- August.
"Just so you know, I think you have every right to post this. Administration is getting rid of things about specific people, directed to intentionally cause harm. That point made, I don't think children are sheltered on the whole, but I know how much I watch out for my kids, and although they are, and will be exposed to such things, that doesn't mean I think they should be. The correction I mentioned was because of the postings on the message board, not saying anything about you, but that term was used (and spelled the same way) over and over, and it made me nuts! You wrote it, and you can use any term you wish. Just thought it was a typo. I will refrain from trying to correct you in the future." -- Sylvia.
"I understand your point, August. I'm done ranting and raving, but couldn't you laugh at my reality TV joke?" -- Steven T.
"August- love your stuff. You write both beautiful (In My Garden) words as well as harsh- I enjoy them ALL. As for censoring- is poetry meant to be censored?!?! I think not. Write on!" -- Tessa.
"Sylvia - i used hoe instead of ho- to symbolize women being used as a tool. please dont refrain from criticisms or possible corrections in the future. in fact you helped me out in some previous postings.thank you. Steven T - yes your reality TV joke was laughable. :) Tessa - as always your reviews are uplifting. Thank You." -- August.
"Since this poem seemed to have generated the most responses out the collection, I'll post my two cents here. Where can an artist nowadays express themselves without being lectured somewhere along the way about censorship? I'm fortunate that I've been able to read some of August's poetry in their most raw form. Words scribbled on notebook paper, entire verses crossed out and erased, some written on bar napkins. Wonderful things. Things that would make the editors at Penthouse blush. I was dissapointed to see one poem in this collection had changed from the first version I read. Whether it was to August's disliking, I'm not sure. Shame on her if she felt compelled to change it because of big brother. Redirect your censorship issues to someone more deserving...say some moronic twentysomething executive at Fox TV, which is more easily accessible to our children. You're an amazing, inspiring, talented woman, August. As for the poems...keep 'em cumming." -- jk.
"Poetry will endure. Talent will flourish. But what of humiilty?" -- Dixie, VA.
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