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TITLE (EDIT)
The Chimera |
DESCRIPTION
This poem is about the rejection the writer suffered from a girl who was his dream.
[73 words] |
AUTHOR
Tunde Alabi-Hundeyin Ii |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[March 2006] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
tundehundeyin@yahoo.com |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (15)
After Two Days (Short Stories) After Two days is about a promising girl who suffers from an unknown disease in rural Nigeria. It points to the neglect that such people encounter in the country. [1,881 words] [Fan Fiction]
devil In Us (Poetry) This explains that God is an expert in removing the evil (here dubbed: ‘dEVIL’) or the devil (whichever is the reader’s preference) in us when we call on Him to do so. [51 words]
For Juwura 16- A Little Bed Lamp (Poetry) A love poem for the poet's sweetheart. He's looking forward to their first night together as a couple. [103 words] [Erotic]
For Juwura 1- Beholding You From The Poet's Island (Poetry) A love poem to the poet's sweetheart. [66 words] [Relationships]
For Juwura 2- G A P (Poetry) A love poem. [68 words] [Relationships]
FUNny FUNeral FUNctions (Poetry) A lampoon of sort on how Africans spend a fortune on funeral ceremonies. In the writer's view, funerals should be solemn. [36 words]
God's Nature (Poetry) This poem is a mirror of God’s relationship with the author. [85 words] [Spiritual]
Here Comes Poetry (Poetry) The muse is calling the poet to action! Here is the result. [35 words]
I Drove Up The Hill (Genres) This is a superimposition of this writer’s visit to his old school on the ‘hard times’ he had endured at least 5 years before this writing. His visit resuscitates memories of the hill and valley in t... [320 words]
Oh What A Dream! (Poetry) Using the archetype of furniture making as style, the writer writes a book in this dream. He wakes up & it’s not as true as he just experienced. [120 words]
Poetry For Seun (Poetry) A poem of friendship and love for Seun-the author's friend. [228 words] [Relationships]
Secret Place 2 (Poetry) This is a cry of desire of God’s transforming presence, which is encountered through earnest prayer to Him. [83 words] [Spiritual]
The Book (Poetry) The last line of the poem summarizes its theme. [61 words]
The Harmattan (Poetry) This is about the harsh weather conditions endured by Nigerians and some other Africans during the harmattan season, which is usually around November and January. [60 words]
The Year's 1st Rain (Poetry) The title explains the theme of the work. Ara- in line 8, is a Yoruba (South-Western Nigeria language) word that means Thunder. ojo- in line 9, means Rain. Ojo- in line 10 has another pronunciation f... [74 words]
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The Chimera
Tunde Alabi-Hundeyin Ii
Like a deer -
shot in the limb. My dear,
i trudged to oblivion, suffering
the canisters of your shot.
So agonising the pains, my heart
broken.
Like the Niger –
my blood flowed, pumped out
of its arteries.
Shivers of hopelessness shocked my medulla. Pandemonium reigned.
I never knew your “No” could wreck much havoc.
Woman, love is all I crave! Wave
the “Yes” wand, please.
Unbearable – my plight, my misery – agonising. Friends ridicule me
The encounter of yesternight lingers…
sleep has eluded my bed.
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READER'S REVIEWS (2)
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"I like your choice of words, especiially your use of simiilies ("Like a deer- shot in the limb; Ln.1-2) and and methaphors. However i believe you last line of the poem kills the intensity of the second to the last line. I supose use of '...' in the second to the last line is to express the lingering of your pain from the heartbreak. Nothwithstanding, your choice of words has effectively described the 'intensity' of your heartbreak. Your use of the exclamation mark in Ln 12 also reveals not only your helplessness but also your frustrations and hopelessness "Woman, love is all I crave!" One can view the arrow shot at the deer and begin to imagine the heartbreak 'NO' has caused. Your choice of the upper case for 'NO' also reveals the intensity of the girl's words. You have succeded in expressing the themes of helplessness, heartbreak, and frustration one expreiences from 'a love unreturned'. Why the choice of "The Chimera" for the poem's title, fine it may sugesst that it is a events of the day ia a mere daydream but it kills the seriousness of the poem. I suggest another title. Well done." -- Bilewomo Ademilola, Nigeria.
"the poem is touching and i'm sure those who have experienced rejection will understand why you used a capital NO but why the title?" -- bukola adeyemo, lagos, lagos, nigeria.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2002 Tunde Alabi-Hundeyin Ii |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
February 2003 |
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