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TITLE (EDIT)
I Dont Think You're Alive |
DESCRIPTION
This is just something I thought I would get out of my head. I try to write everything and anything down in my head and this was floating on top.
[46 words] |
TITLE KEYWORD
Teenage |
AUTHOR
Jeni Jopes |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
14 and I love to write.
[April 2003] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
howard_the_cow@hotmail.com |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (14)
Are You Smiling? (Poetry) This is about a selfish person that I know just read it and see. [158 words]
Go Shut Down (Poetry) This is about my worst enemy and how I would do anything to get her out of my life. thats like it. [78 words]
Ok Again (Poetry) This is about all my problems and how I want everything back to happiness. I want it to be ok again. [221 words] [Teenage]
So Lonely (Poetry) Everyone gets lonely now and then. I just do it more often. [123 words]
The Change (Poetry) How I changed. [197 words]
The Trip (Poetry) Someplace or somewhere I go every day it sux. [70 words]
Understand (Poetry) This is about me, a girl trying to live her life the hard way and no one seems to understand how hard it really is. [72 words] [Teenage]
Unmiserablized (Poetry) This is about a boy that I went out with once that lied to me the whole time we were together and when we broke up he really hurt me. [138 words] [Teenage]
What's The Point? (Poetry) Just what was in my head. [117 words]
When You Left (Poetry) This is a poem about one of my best friends who moved to Chicago because of his father's job. I miss him like hell and im just describing what it was sort of like when he left. [123 words]
Wrong File (Poetry) My opposite friend. [88 words]
You Never Changed (Poetry) How my ex boyfriend never changed a damn thing when he knew it was the best thing for him. Oh well. [72 words]
You Sink So Deep (Poetry) It's about a person I know that didn't care about anything. [146 words]
You Threw It Away (Poetry) When someone says they love you, then they dont care suddenly and they just leave for no reason because they just dont want the responsibility. pathetic. [133 words]
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I Dont Think You're Alive
Jeni Jopes
THe way
you smile
the day
you die
will be
for me
a sad
time
you want
to be
everything
you can be
well try and see
your day
won't come
you push
too hard
you walk
too fast
you think it will
but it won't last
good luck
on life
good job
on trying
but what
you did
won't change
a thing
the way
you smile
the day
you die
will not
be here
for me
to see
because
i dont
think
you're
alive.
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"I just think that the layout of this makes it quite hard to read, although it`s a simple poem, and robs it of any impact it might have." -- Peter Rivendell.
"While the layout is difficult to follow at first, the rhythm in this poem is very nice. I particularly liked the "you push/too hard/you walk/too fast/you think it will/but it won't last" section. But there are some awkward sections, and it could use a good edit. " -- Wolfa.
"Jeni- I read through your poems and this one stands out as one of the better ones. I agree with Peter and Wolfa, a little tweaking is needed. Keep at it though, you'll improve, especially if you listen to the constructive criticism the other writers give you i.e. spellchecking. Good luck! " -- Tessa.
"*****I liked this poem. The set up's different from most poems. It's good to try new things. :)" -- D Donely.
"hey thanks guys!" -- Jeni Jopes.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2003 Jeni Jopes |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
April 2003 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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