AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (14) Are You Smiling? (Poetry) This is about a selfish person that I know just read it and see. [158 words] Go Shut Down (Poetry) This is about my worst enemy and how I would do anything to get her out of my life. thats like it. [78 words] I Dont Think You're Alive (Poetry) This is just something I thought I would get out of my head. I try to write everything and anything down in my head and this was floating on top. [46 words] [Teenage] Ok Again (Poetry) This is about all my problems and how I want everything back to happiness. I want it to be ok again. [221 words] [Teenage] So Lonely (Poetry) Everyone gets lonely now and then. I just do it more often. [123 words] The Change (Poetry) How I changed. [197 words] The Trip (Poetry) Someplace or somewhere I go every day it sux. [70 words] Unmiserablized (Poetry) This is about a boy that I went out with once that lied to me the whole time we were together and when we broke up he really hurt me. [138 words] [Teenage] What's The Point? (Poetry) Just what was in my head. [117 words] When You Left (Poetry) This is a poem about one of my best friends who moved to Chicago because of his father's job. I miss him like hell and im just describing what it was sort of like when he left. [123 words] Wrong File (Poetry) My opposite friend. [88 words] You Never Changed (Poetry) How my ex boyfriend never changed a damn thing when he knew it was the best thing for him. Oh well. [72 words] You Sink So Deep (Poetry) It's about a person I know that didn't care about anything. [146 words] You Threw It Away (Poetry) When someone says they love you, then they dont care suddenly and they just leave for no reason because they just dont want the responsibility. pathetic. [133 words]
Understand Jeni Jopes
I hate my life
and that's that
there's nothing i can do
cuz i gotta put up with you
and if you could only see
the way i cry each night
maybe you'd understand
if only ou would leave
me alone
if you could only shut up
for once
if you could only see the way they treat me
i hope you could understand
the things they say
the way they look
it's not worth my pain
if you could only be me for now
then you'd understand.
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"Everyone has been there, everyone understands, and unless you 1. Use correct spellings/fix typos and 2. Write about something more original, no one will take you seriously as a poet." -- Wolfa.
"sorry wolfa, but this is MY poetry, this is as serious as it gets for me. i dont care if people don't like it. im asking for reviews, not suggestions to change my whole writing." -- Jeni Jopes.
"I like it because when I read I could really relate to it. Your also right about it being your poetry and it doesn't matter if people don't like it. But I just want to say it's a good poem and that I know many more people besides me can realte to it." -- Katie.
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