ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
My name is Kristen Antia, and I am 13 years old. I live in Colombia, South America, and I am in the eight grade in the Bolivar School. I love to write my own stories. And I really enjoy English Class. [April 2000]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (1) Summer Of My German Soldier (Chapter 22) (Short Stories) I read a book called "Summer of my German Soldier" and for a project I did a continuing chapter. My story follows with facts from the stories, with the same person speaking, and the same vocabulary, e... [1,270 words]
To My Love Kristen Antia
To My Love My dearest, my love, you will always be Within my heart, inside of me. You're in me and I'm in you. One we have become from two. Though we have to be apart I carry you inside my heart. I love you more than words can say, And in my heart you'll always stay. With you I want to share my life. I want someday to be your wife. For now, remember that I love you, And I'll remember you love me too.
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"You write much older than a 13 year old...It's a very special poem! Keep up the good work..." -- RHONDA DEPIETTO OCASIO, CENTRAL ISLIP, NY, USA.
"13? Doesn't look like it. You have great English as well!" -- R. Bennett Okerstrom.
"This poem is very basic and has been written probably hundreds of times. That's not bad, though. It shows that you are thinking along the lines of a lot of other writers. I would like to see something more personal, more creative. It's clear that you write well and may have talent. Let's see it. And remember that you are a youngster....you have 80 or so years ahead of you to write...plenty of time to wow the world with your words." -- Innagroove.
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