DESCRIPTION
This is a poem about a woman that is in love with her ex boyfriend and they broke up because of jealousy. She remembers all the good times they pass trough together. [132 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
My name is Marcela Posada and I am a 14 years old girl who lives in Cali, Colombia. I like to write stories about things that happened in other families or at streets, and I enjoy very much doing them. I was asked at school to publish a story because it was a class project. Well any way I like to dance and go shopping with my friends. [April 2000]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (1) Once I Had A Dream (Poetry) This poem is about a person that is dreaming of another person, and that when that person wakes up he/she realizes it was just a dream and that what they where dreaming will never come true... [194 words]
You (2) Marcela Posada
Every day I see your deep blue eyes Every day I see them, they make me cry I remember those good times, The times we were together, When you seem to love me. Every day I see your photo, With your big and beautiful smile, and I remember those sugar kisses you used to give me. I get your t-shirt, that you left last time, And smell it. Is that aroma that made me fall in love with you, That seamed that left me around, to you And never let me go. I remember everything, Everything was nice, Everything was perfect. We loved each other so much, That for jealousy, We broke our hearts. I still love you and know that. But your love is not returned, Please don’t look at me any more, Don’t talk to me, Don’t sit beside me. Because I want to forget about you, And all the times we were together…
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