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Are You Smiling? Jeni Jopes
If i had one day to tell you my life
I dont think you could listen that long
Cuz you really don't care about anything
but yourself
If i could show you my world
what would you say?
you wasted a beautiful day.
Maybe someone could turn you around
Make you see you're not that great
Make you feel real pain.
If i would waste my time on you
telling you how you're so immature
Then i'd be pretty dumb
Cuz you don't care
You don't listen
So why do you say you care?
Why do you take time to worry?
When everyone is down,
are you smiling?
You think it all will work if it's done your way
Well wish for a better day cuz you're wrong
If you could feel sorry for anyone,
Who would it be?
better not be me.
You have it so good
have you ever thought of how lucky you are?
But the sad thing is you haven't gotten far
I'm not saying you're lazy
You just don't seem to care
is that really fair?
And when nobody's happy,
Nobody's laughing,
Are you smiling?
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"*****I just thought I'd read some of your poems, since you read mine. I'm glad I finally found someone who's my same age. So, that's cool. I liked this poem, it completely describes some people that I know. I really hate people like that, so selfish and stuck on themselves. I also liked the way that you ended it, smooth and clean. " -- D Donely.
"hey thanx d donely! at least someone appreciates my work! " -- Jeni Jopes.
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