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What's The Point? Jeni Jopes
You smile but there's no message sent
You cry but it's still the same again
You laugh when you have no reason to
You grin when they purposely hurt you
So where does this take you?
what road will this throw you on?
And who will this push you by?
You sit when the sun is shining
You talk when the rain is pouring
You say there's something you're finding
But to me it looks pretty boring
You think this takes you so far
YOu think the road will be straight
And you think you'll fall in love
Just stay your optimistic way
and you will soon see in the future
your life running away,
so whats the point of all the stuff
that you have done in the past
that didnt change anything or anyone?
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"*****I really liked this one, it was good. It's one of my favorites that you've written. But, why don't u try to write a poem that has stanza's and rhymes. You know, just kind of try some new styles and set ups for your poems.That way you have some variety and stuff. Just an idea." -- d donely.
"hey thanx for the suggestion!" -- Jeni Jopes.
"HEY! it's like this can relate to me. i'm so glad that another person can write same types of poems like me." -- lori-ann.
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