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When You Left
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TITLE (EDIT)
When You Left |
DESCRIPTION
This is a poem about one of my best friends who moved to Chicago because of his father's job. I miss him like hell and im just describing what it was sort of like when he left.
[123 words] |
AUTHOR
Jeni Jopes |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
14 and I love to write.
[April 2003] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
howard_the_cow@hotmail.com |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (14)
Are You Smiling? (Poetry) This is about a selfish person that I know just read it and see. [158 words]
Go Shut Down (Poetry) This is about my worst enemy and how I would do anything to get her out of my life. thats like it. [78 words]
I Dont Think You're Alive (Poetry) This is just something I thought I would get out of my head. I try to write everything and anything down in my head and this was floating on top. [46 words] [Teenage]
Ok Again (Poetry) This is about all my problems and how I want everything back to happiness. I want it to be ok again. [221 words] [Teenage]
So Lonely (Poetry) Everyone gets lonely now and then. I just do it more often. [123 words]
The Change (Poetry) How I changed. [197 words]
The Trip (Poetry) Someplace or somewhere I go every day it sux. [70 words]
Understand (Poetry) This is about me, a girl trying to live her life the hard way and no one seems to understand how hard it really is. [72 words] [Teenage]
Unmiserablized (Poetry) This is about a boy that I went out with once that lied to me the whole time we were together and when we broke up he really hurt me. [138 words] [Teenage]
What's The Point? (Poetry) Just what was in my head. [117 words]
Wrong File (Poetry) My opposite friend. [88 words]
You Never Changed (Poetry) How my ex boyfriend never changed a damn thing when he knew it was the best thing for him. Oh well. [72 words]
You Sink So Deep (Poetry) It's about a person I know that didn't care about anything. [146 words]
You Threw It Away (Poetry) When someone says they love you, then they dont care suddenly and they just leave for no reason because they just dont want the responsibility. pathetic. [133 words]
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When You Left
Jeni Jopes
9 last days to make you see
And try to make you happy
8 last nights of crying rivers
And getting in return fevers
7 last breaths before we go
And that's one thing that i do know
6 last laughs and smiles and cheers
And not much to hide from your fears
5 last hugs to say good-bye
And apologize for starting to cry
4 last tears slip down my face
And i thought it was a good pace
3 last waves from me to you
And memories came back of what we did do
2 last calls before you hang up
And my confidence drops
1 last time I'll be with you
And I'll be there the whole way through
0 last days, nights, breaths, laughs, hugs, tears, waves, calls, and times
But I know you'll always be mine.
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"*****This was good. I liked the way you counted down from 10, that was a different style.I know exactly how you feel, i've lost tons of friends who had to move away. But, i still try to keep in touch w/them ,though it's hard. Good luck-good writing." -- d donely.
"Wow, JJ, this is really good! that's really all i've got to say about this one...(read the one I wrote under Sara Roggy called "Walking Alone:)" -- Sara Roggy.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2003 Jeni Jopes |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
April 2003 |
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