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Break-ups should be permanent. Ever had a guy (girl) come crawling on their knees begging for your forgiveness? Well... this is what inspired this poem. [76 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
*****sitting here "trying" to write.... [June 2003]
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Don't Bother D Donely
scream until your
throat goes dry
crawl on your knees
until you bleed
wimper non-stop
until you cry
you said sorry
one tear too late
did you really
expect me to
sit here and wait?
second chances
yes
third chances
sure
fourth chances
no
I can't take
being thrown
back and forth
my heart can only take
so much
my love can only be
tested so far
I'm tired of your
apologies
I'm sick of your
excuses
can't you see
they tear me to shreds
they rip me to pieces
my arms
are no longer open
so before you
say sorry
before you try
I think you should know
-Don't Bother
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"boring/trite/no point!" -- mark.
"*****You're telling me that there's no point to this poem?uh..err..ok.... Thanks for reading at least." -- d donely.
"i think what mark was trying to say is that it seems you knocked this off like singing in the shower...its only really good if the effort and feelings come through in a special way. the less you say the more we should feel. but it was a good try." -- sunny, dc, usa.
"Well, I like it. I like how fast it reads - and the words really hit you when you read them, too. " -- Emily S.
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