ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I'm 22. I'm a grad student at the University of Florida. I play guitar and have been writing songs for the last 6 years. I recently have tried my hand at poetry and short stories. Any feedback is really appreciated. Thanks guys. :-) [August 2003]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (17) A Foreign War (Songs) A song I wrote about a relationship I was in. [92 words] [Relationships] A Lost Conscience (Poetry) I recently had a bit of drama in my life. I ended up sleeping with a girl that my best friend really liked. I know, not good. But I think it help explains the poem. Any feedback is really appreciated. [173 words] A Midnight Journey (Poetry) I wrote this poem after getting lost in the woods while camping. It ended up kinda as an allusion to death too. By the way, try not to drink and wander. [131 words] [Mind] A Simple Night (Poetry) I wrote this about when you're in a fight or broken up in a relationship and you know it is time to go back. I guess just read. [126 words] [Relationships] By My Soul (Songs) This is a song I wrote about being swept away by the girl of my dreams... only a dream though. [229 words] [Romance] Castles (Foreign) We place these castles on the wall. Never thought they’d crumble, never thought they’d fall. [191 words] [Relationships] Dressed In Black (Poetry) I started this one out as a song and changed it around into a poem. I guess it was just a compilation of feelings I get when being with that special person. [155 words] [Romance] I Killed Her (Poetry) A short poem I wrote about screwing up a relationship. [64 words] [Relationships] Love & Hate (Poetry) Well this is about the darkest thing I've ever written. It's about betrayal and hurt. [307 words] [Relationships] On Her Knees (Always) (Songs) A song about having patience in and after a relationship. [146 words] [Relationships] Rise And Fall (Poetry) This is just a poem I wrote about the ups and downs of love. You know you want to r/r. [106 words] [Romance] Second Thought (Poetry) A poem about not having the courage to talk to someone you see... and the regret that follows. [109 words] [Romance] Seventeen (Songs) Song about the past. [121 words] [Mind] The Gambler (Poetry) Not sure why I wrote about this... I don't gamble much. [132 words] The Winding Road (Poetry) I wrote part of this a long time ago and decided to rewrite and add to it.....And here it is for your reviewing pleasure. [168 words] [Relationships] Unrefined (Poetry) A little self exploration piece. [158 words] World Of Color (Poetry) We live in a world of color but nothing is brighter than our shades of grey. [137 words] [Mind]
Until Now Eric Richards
Until now I was a desert
No friend to any sea
Until now I was the present
But the past is not through with me
Until now I saw in black and white
Colors were for the free
Until now I would fight
If I was inclined to disbelieve
Until now I was alone
No purpose could there be
Until now I saw no hope
A broken door without a key
Until now I saw life as tragic
But indeed I'm starting to see
Until now my favorite habit
Was to tell you about me
Until now I was a desert
No friend to any sea
Until now I was the present
Still the past is not through with me
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"*****I really like this poem, it's great! I especially like the 3rd stanza, "Until now I was alone//No purpose could there be//Until now I saw no hope//A broken door without a key". The rhyming was good and so was the rhythmn. Great job. It kind of reminds me of the way I write sometimes." -- d donely.
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