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TITLE (EDIT)
Forsaken |
DESCRIPTION
This poem seeks to describe the despairity, hopelessness, and wrenching pain endured by women when their lovers submit to forbidden desires, and they are left for a younger woman. It was inspired by a personal heartbreak in 1993.
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AUTHOR
Laura Mae Oldham-Brownell |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[August 2003] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
mandie@carrollsweb.com |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (10)
B.E.T.R.A.Y.A.L.(Revised) (Poetry) An Acrostic Poem that seeks to describe the emotional state of a betrayed woman. [30 words]
Beware The Banshee (Poetry) This piece delves into the supernatural. Hopefully, it will take the reader's mind back in time to an old Irish tavern, where an old-timer lends his wisdom. [120 words]
Cancerous (Poetry) Confonting the disease. [65 words]
Confession Of A Fool (Poetry) Innocence lost. [146 words]
G.R.A.N.D.C.H.I.L.D. (Poetry) An Acrostic poem dedicated to my grandchildren both present and as yet unborn. [22 words]
In Mourning (Poetry) Losing a loved one. [83 words]
Miss Lavinia's Portrait (Short Stories) This piece is set in Europe during the late 1800's. Hopefully, it will take the reader back in time to witness a brief scene in the life of an artist and his young subject. [479 words]
Sinner's Reward (Poetry) An eternity in the grave. [67 words]
Soul Mates (Poetry) A short poem about finding true love. This is dedicated to Edwin with love. [31 words] [Romance]
The Reunion (Poetry) Desperation begets tragedy... [365 words]
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Forsaken
Laura Mae Oldham-Brownell
Meaningless words were spoken with ease
from blasphemous lips content to deceive.
Words of commitment, adoration and trust,
insignificant words revealed as unjust.
Well versed in deception with lies most “sincere”
he eloquently said, “I’ll always love you dear.”
Emotional wounds gouge unfathomably deep.
Diminished in his absence, discarded, I weep.
He vowed fidelity, "until death do we part,"
but chose to wander, betraying my heart.
Indiscretion has shattered all of our plans;
devastation too painful to solely withstand.
Bittersweet memories dictate every thought.
Emptiness defeats me, cast aside, thus forgot.
The bloom of youth deserts me; age maligns my face.
My heartfelt pleas ignored he leaves me in disgrace.
Our time together ended, scorned by his misdeeds,
an unsuspecting fool, relinquished, my hope bleeds.
Enthralled by other women he revels in their flesh.
Held hostage by depression I wallow in its depths.
Shaken by reality my consciousness falls numb,
disowning those tomorrows I pray will never come.
Bereft of his affection sworn forever mine,
banished to oblivion, my scars may heal in time.
Estranged, I wane in silence remembering yesterday,
certain he once loved me, uncertain why he strayed.
Unworthy of forgiveness he summons my disdain.
Averse to love another, I withdraw, scarcely sane.
Within this realm of misery my soul profoundly suffers;
abandoned for the wanton bliss of his younger lovers.
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"Wow... I'm blown away by the feelings you've shared... Very powerful stuff! Write on!" -- Tessa.
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"Thank you both for your kind comments." -- Laura Mae Oldham-Brownell, Lindsborg, Kansas, USA.
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© 2003 Laura Mae Oldham-Brownell |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
June 2003 |
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