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TITLE (EDIT)
A Touch So Innocent |
DESCRIPTION
A misinterpretation between lust & love.
[65 words] |
TITLE KEYWORD
Romance |
AUTHOR
B Galindo |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am 24 year old female living in Miami, Fl. Born in Colombia, raised in Boston. I just started writing a few months ago to get some tension out, I haven't stopped since. I have always been more into art, but found this as a new form of being creative and more importantly an outlet. Thanks for all your comments.
[December 2003] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
Bonnilinda@yahoo.com |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (10)
A Bomb (Poetry) - [59 words] [Self-Help]
A Pastime (Poetry) - [123 words] [Relationships]
Breath Of Fresh Air (Poetry) This I wrote about somebody that was exactly that. [172 words] [Romance]
Deception (Poetry) This talks about a friend that deceived people along with myself. [53 words] [Relationships]
Destruction (Poetry) Reflection. [88 words] [Self-Help]
Déjà Vu (Poetry) - [74 words] [Romance]
Lonely Heart (Poetry) A heart gave up its desire to love and be loved. [119 words] [Romance]
Pastimes (Poetry) - [124 words] [Relationships]
Why Now (Poetry) A friend's apology that came too late. [134 words]
Your Sorrow (Poetry) - [116 words] [Relationships]
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A Touch So Innocent
B Galindo
A touch so innocent
A breath so soft
A heart left open, eyes closed shut
Two energies locked in a moment that was unsustainable
It's time before long was over
How could this sensation so deep have been an illusion
A taste of pure pleasure, but with the rising of the sun turned sour
A touch with no feeling
A breath with no meaning
A heart closed shut, it's eyes now open
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"First post huh?, nice job and welcome. could see the affair from start to finish." -- Just A Guy.
"i think this poem is very touching" -- stephanie, miami, fl.
"absolutely exquisite..." -- km .
"I love those lines "a touch with no feeling, a breath with no meaning" Damn good writing." -- Jason Terrell.
"wow! you have such a talent, the transition from one emotion to the other was so smooth and flowing, i absolutely love your style. keep writing" -- Cristina, Vancouver, BC, Canada.
"WOW! Reading this gave me Shivers! Keep it up! And like we say in my country when something is outstanding "Conche tu madre" 4 ever! " -- Javier S., Canada.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2003 B Galindo |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
December 2003 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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