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My first entry. Please be kind..
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AUTHOR
Sasu |
ABOUT
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[November 2006] |
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Sasu
The windows slam in a gale like thunder,
Harmony folds like an intrusive wonder,
The night is cold, and the company even colder,
I can feel her looks Im beginning to smolder,
Dance with me the trees plead to waltz,
Surrounding ambition was only then a second thought,
The fire was burning in the rear of my ear,
The hole I left filled my soul with fear,
Begin your storm and lets finish it now,
Lets talk like the wind, and cherish it somehow,
Our chariot awaits in the dawn of the day,
I've already packed my bags, and you want to stay,
Saddened by such decisions have never left me right,
Your face I embrace like some burning light,
Im not here when your there!!
To Louise X
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"Well as your first submitted writing...I like it. I kind of think you have a nack for writing and I think you should do more. Hope to read alot more of your work. " -- Arayka.
"Good for a first entry, it made me feel oddly serene." -- christine Tricarico.
"If you want "kindness" stay home with mommy and daddy, and stop writing. This is drivel with very little impact. You are reaching in the right direction, but have absolutely no training in the craft of writing. Please stop, until you gain somewisdom and some craftsmanship." -- morte.
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© 2003 Sasu |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
December 2003 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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