ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am 24 year old female living in Miami, Fl. Born in Colombia, raised in Boston. I just started writing a few months ago to get some tension out, I haven't stopped since. I have always been more into art, but found this as a new form of being creative and more importantly an outlet. Thanks for all your comments. [December 2003]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (10) A Bomb (Poetry) - [59 words] [Self-Help] A Pastime (Poetry) - [123 words] [Relationships] A Touch So Innocent (Poetry) A misinterpretation between lust & love. [65 words] [Romance] Breath Of Fresh Air (Poetry) This I wrote about somebody that was exactly that. [172 words] [Romance] Destruction (Poetry) Reflection. [88 words] [Self-Help] Déjà Vu (Poetry) - [74 words] [Romance] Lonely Heart (Poetry) A heart gave up its desire to love and be loved. [119 words] [Romance] Pastimes (Poetry) - [124 words] [Relationships] Why Now (Poetry) A friend's apology that came too late. [134 words] Your Sorrow (Poetry) - [116 words] [Relationships]
Deception B Galindo
to each u lied your face masked a disquise as to a troubled soul that lurked silently inside a heart so tortured pain seemed a way to fuel its survival I never knew a trust that profound in another yet after 3 years I found myself entrapped in your treachery just another notch on your wall of innocence exposed.
READER'S REVIEWS (3) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"AWESOME!!! " -- KM (Michelle).
"I CANT BELIEVE HOWWWWW GREAT IT IS...this issss the best poem EVER WRITTEN !!!!!...sikeeee I lied what a deception huh? I lied ...again its a good poem! "pendeja escribiendo mierdas" that means YOU WRITE LIKE AN ANGEL!" -- Santana, T.U., Chile, Putamadre.
"Uh hey i just saw u are colombian if u know spanish ignore what i just said :D *wipes his forehead nervously* well if u dont know spanish then YOU WRITE LIKE AN ANGEL!" -- Santana.
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