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Just A Bit Callous Just A Guy
there’s nothing so fine
as the very first time
too bad the moment can’t be saved
the feeling so intense
it gobbles you up
legs get all wobbly
kind of like standing on one leg on a fence
after all the time and effort
she finally said yes
now you wonder
how will i be
can i make her forget
all the guys that came before me
no, that wasn’t a pun
just the way it came out
though it certainly could be taken for one
hey, give me a break
this isn’t an epic
just some words i put together
time for some fun
making love doesn’t always have to be serious
all intense, mind gets delirious
it can be everybit as exciting
just knocking one off
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"hmmm..." -- mattie.
"should there maybe be one more m to that? " -- JAG.
"hmmmm...how's that? :)" -- mattie.
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