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My Suicide Kristen Gail Diana Ritthaler
My Suicide
My name shall be unknown.
My identity cannot be told.
All the information you can hold,
Is that I've commtied suicide.
All the bullying,
Could not take anymore.
Parents didn't pay attention to me,
Now that I'm dead, they'll wish they did.
My friends- only a few
Never knew much
Now that I'm dead,
They'll know a lot more.
How I did it,
Cannot be released.
I dont want anyone,
To take their life the way I did.
My name shall be unknown
That's all what you will ever know.
My identity cannot be told,
All I can tell you, that it wasnt pure gold.
The information you may take
Might make you shake.
I've commited suicide,
Now welcome to my side.
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"First off there is some very good stuff in theis poem. I really liked the first stanza and thought this should have been the beat and rythmn of the poem but some of your other stanzas lost this beat and seemed to add unneeded words. The poem needs to be sharp...like a blade giving it a sense of suicide. You can work this into a very fine poem over time! All and All I liked it." -- e. rocco caldwell.
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