DESCRIPTION
This is about a girl that is told by everyone that her man is cheating on her, but she doesn't believe them until she finds out for herself. [122 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
My name is Naadira rushing and I am a 17yr old high school student from Newark, New Jersey. I enjoy reading books and writing poetry in my spare time. [April 2000]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (2) Innocent Betrayal (Short Stories) - [160 words] Mislead (Poetry) This poem is about a young girl that was lead on by this guy that considered her as just a friend. [95 words]
Through My Own Eyes Naadira Shante Rushing
EVERYWHERE I GO PEOPLE ARE TELLING ME THAT YOU ARE SEEING ANOTHER GIRL AND I THOUGHT HOW COULS THIS BE WHEN I GAVE YOU EVERYTHING INCLUDING THE WORLD
SO I IGNORE WHAT THEY SAY AND DO WHAT I GOT TO DO TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I CARE AND WILL NEVER STOP LOVING YOU
NOW YOU ARE STARTING TO COME HOME EVRYDAY LATE FROM WORK AND I START TO BELIEVE THAT WHAT PEOPLE ARE TELLING ME IS TRUE AND THAT REALLY HURTS
IT HURTS ME TO THINK THAT YOU ARE MESSING WITH SOMEONE ELSE WHEN I GAVE YOU EVERYTHING INCLUDING MYSELF
WHEN I WALKED IN THE DOOR WHAT I SAW WAS NO SUPRISE I KNEW THAT YOU WERE CHEATING I JUST WISH I COULD HAVE SEEN IT THROUGH MY OWN EYES
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"I am really feeling her poem and can understand where she is coming from. I hope she continues writing poetry and never gives up this gift she has. you r great, not better than me though sike nah you know who this is bye sis" -- Irisha, Newark, NJ, USA.
"I LIKE YOUR POEM, ANDI THINK THAT YOU ARE VERY TALENTED KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. KILLA CAM" -- KILLA CAM.
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