ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Just an aspiring horror writer from the UK [August 2004]
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Emotion P J Francis
Emotion
Count the feelings on one hand,
tossed around
like grains of sand.
Left alone without a doubt
Is this what life
is really about?
Morning comes
I breathe a sigh
to live like this
is but a lie.
READER'S REVIEWS (3) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"at first i thought your poem was good, but after reading it a couple of times, it seemed not as tight woven. in particular the line, left alone without a doubt, does not fit in at all. i sense you are talking about emotions and i can vaguely picture a person sitting up all night thinking about something, but the pictures or emotions in my head are not clear. the poem is a muddle." -- sunny, dc, usa.
"Don't pat attention to this Sunny guy. He hangs out at New Titles (nothing else to do) and has made himself the "appointed critic", when all that he writes, is third world drivel. He hasn't posted anything new this year (hope he has permanent writer's block). He will be dealt with!" -- Brian.
"I have seen sunnys postings to a number of stories. He seems bent on putting other peoples work down. Brian, it is good to see someone else pointing this out! As for your poem PJ,I personally like it a lot - but then I have enjoyed all your work on this site. Do not be demoralised by jerks!!!" -- Erasmus Flynt.
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