ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am a Medical Student of DELTA STATE UNIVERSITY,Abraka,Nigeria...A PENKUP FAMILY Ambassador of Good-will,I believe in the power of expression which poetry affords every soul...it's a beautiful thing! [June 2004]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (1) No One Else (Poetry) This love-bird's full of regrets...composed 22/05/03 [125 words] [Relationships]
When You Walked Away Kennedy O Obohwemu
I couldn't believe it,
I thought it was a dream;
Such a direct hit,
We used to be a team;
I made a mistake,
But really meant no harm;
Didn't mean your heart to break,
Tried my best to keep you calm;
You said you would leave,
I thought it was a joke;
Just couldn't believe,
You disappeared like smoke;
Tears crowded my eyes
As you took your first step;
I thought they were all lies,
Wish I could cry for help;
Then you moved on and on,
You never looked back;
It was a terrible morn,
I retired to the dark;
The tears poured out then,
Nothing had hit me that hard;
There's still much to learn,
Hope it'd never be this bad;
It's not been easy for me,
Really wish you could stay;
You left pains for all to see,
When you walked away.
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"On first look at the poem it seems as if its very simple.But on a second reading i realised that how beautifully the poet has unfold his feelings of pain and despair.It really touch my soul.The poet is very straight in his writing skill,hasnt used any difficult or flowery words to confuse his reader.In plain and simple language the soul of the poet is unfolded.Its a great pleasure to get a chance to read such a piece of literature.I wish that the poet keep on writing such beautiful pieces.Best of luck.Thank you." -- sayantani mitra, kolkata, india.
"this is a beautiful poem which have the younger reader in mind, simple words and phrases inculcating everyday happenings into poetry is always a welcome just like this writer has done. please continue this goodwork and all the best in your pursuit." -- Emina Tunika Celestine, london, dagenham essex, uk.
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