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Why Don't We
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Part Three In The New York, New York Poetry Series. by Hayley Burdett - [22 words]
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TITLE (EDIT)
Why Don't We |
DESCRIPTION
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[102 words] |
TITLE KEYWORD
Relationships |
AUTHOR
Just A Guy |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[September 2004] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
alb2arl@bellsouth.net |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (23)
A Bit Of A Rude Awakening (Essays) Not sure exactly what this though I called it a poem. oh well. [255 words] [Psychology]
A Passing Moment (Poetry) - [63 words] [Relationships]
A Vampire Tale - Well, Sort Of. (Poetry) Seeing Harvey's piece brought to mind one I had put away. [93 words] [Humor]
Ain't Politics Grand (Poetry) It's that time of year again - VOTE or don't. [95 words] [Humor]
Another One Of Those Days (Poetry) - [61 words] [Mind]
Can't Find The Way (Poetry) - [81 words] [Relationships]
Damn Words (Poetry) - [80 words] [Romance]
E-Mail Blues II (Poetry) Been experiencing a rash of this stuff lately. [68 words] [Comedy]
End Of A Long Day (Poetry) - [147 words] [Relationships]
Hedonism....Denied (Short Stories) A true story as best remembered. this is my first attempt at a short story so any feedback will be truly appreciated. apologies for the gay slang but it's more realistic as to the way it was. Thanks ... [1,739 words] [Erotic]
Here Kitty Kitty (Poetry) Had this up - it disappeared, must be a damn cat lover in admin. I'll try again. [129 words] [Comedy]
I Wonder Which (Poetry) - [109 words] [Relationships]
Isn't There A Better Way (Poetry) - [108 words] [Relationships]
It's The Devil's Fault (Poetry) Ok admin - I offered a bribe, that didn't work. Next comes the threats! [149 words] [Romance]
Jag's Random Thoughts (Essays) Just some wanderings of the mind. [263 words]
Just A Bit Callous (Poetry) Not to be taken too seriously. [106 words] [Relationships]
Just A Little Dream (Poetry) - [139 words] [Relationships]
Maybe One Day (Poetry) Thanks to administration for finding this, thought it was lost in space. [118 words] [Romance]
No Light At The End (Poetry) - [68 words] [Relationships]
Not All That Easy (Poetry) Patience, i'm almost finished. [113 words] [Relationships]
Still Happy To Be An American (Poetry) Wrote this the day the statues came down in Bagdad and with the events of yesterday thought I'd bring it back up. [181 words]
Take A Chance (Poetry) Something about something. [170 words] [Relationships]
The Dreaded Word (Poetry) Dusted this off, made a few changes. I really don't recommend using the word guys. [88 words] [Comedy]
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Why Don't We
Just A Guy
Holding you close to me
We've been like this what seems forever
Sun will be coming up pretty soon
Replacing the man in the moon
Your heart is beating
Near fast as mine
The soft sighs, that beautiful smile
The shivers down your spine
Let me know you feel as I do
Swaying together
Like there's music playing
But it's quiet as it can be
Though I swear I can feel it
Swear I can hear it
The whole damn Boston Symphony
Hair smelling fresh as the ocean
What a sparkle in your eyes
I know the stars must be jealous
They don't shine half so bright
Everything else pales in comparison
You've made this a perfect tropical night
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"This is a very good one. keeps it up!" -- Akira NJ.
"Ok I absolutely adore the poem until the "everything pales in comparison" cause it's such cliche...and the rest had my heart racing because of the depth and sincerity of your love. If i had written it..i'd end it at "they dont shine so bright."" -- mia angello, WI.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2004 Just A Guy |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
July 2004 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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