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Reborn Jacson A Bevens
*Reborn
That night my heart crumbled
And the pieces fell into the between the seats in my car
They burned their way through the floor
And ended up scattered on the pavement below
In fact they’re probably still there
I wonder if you took the time to avoid stepping on them
As you left me sobbing in the driver’s seat
I planned on going back to look for my heart
To gather up the remnants
Maybe I could rebuild it into something
That slightly resembled what had beat for you so earnestly
Just days before
Instead, the Lord held me back
Turns out that heart wasn’t the one I needed anyways
As I lay curled up on my bedroom floor
With a whole in my chest the shape of you
God began to reconstruct
Piece by piece, He started to build
A monument to His grace
As He did, I came to realize
The vision of a life with you
Might not be what He has in mind
With my new heart
I tried to reach out to yours
Tried to let you know that I cared
The rift between us tore me apart
But you didn’t seem to care
And so the strength of this new heart was tested
As it literally stopped working
Whenever I got a glimpse of you
But whether you ignored me
Or snapped at me
My heart couldn’t stop caring for you
I finally went back to the place
Where you shattered my first heart
Picked up the shards, not knowing what to do
But I took them home
Put them on these pieces of paper
In the form of words
And now I present them to you
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"Very personal. I really like this kid's style." -- Adam.
"Thank you very much, Adam. This kid's glad you liked his style." -- Jacson A. Bevens, Bellingham, WA.
"I really enjoyed that one myselfd, Jacson. Well written" -- Skyler Drevan.
"Skyler, I really appreciate your comments. you're a talented writer and it means a lot that you like my work." -- Jacson A. Bevens.
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