Diagnosed by Cynara Moore This is basically reancting a persom being diagnosed with a chronic illness. [235 words]
What Else Can Sunrise Do by E Rocco Caldwell Driving to work I see the sunrise nearly everyday...it's a wonderful death and life ex... [60 words]
Place's End by E Rocco Caldwell This is an old one I posted a while ago but thought I would re-write it and re-submit it. [137 words]
Zadkine's Diana by Jersey Mike Inspired in the Brussels Fine Arts Museum a few years ago. [48 words]
Will He Won't He by Diana Venditti - [61 words]
When I Think Of You by Megan Quesenberry This one is for David too... [95 words]
What Is......It by G N I tried something new for me...hope it works. [35 words]
Waterfall by Amber A Whitman A scenic poem about nature. [31 words]
Watching Me Fade by Skyler Drevan - [54 words]
War Of The Clans by Diana Venditti - [93 words]
Walk On The Wild Side by Diana Venditti She was a wild one. [109 words]
Waiting For Sally by Joe Newton - [74 words]
Until There Was You by Victoria Taginod Tangan How you can't manage the feeling that suddenly grew inside you that no matter how much you ... [172 words]
Two Parents Within A Matriarch by Cynara Moore This poem is meant to symbolize our strong single mothers and depict their abi... [80 words]
Transition In Relation by Inchara This is about the change in relationship between parents and children when children grow... [110 words]
Traces Of Us by Dri Cook To accept with serene indifference ghosts from the past, is the best medication to scare them away... [37 words]
To Thee On High by Penkup Family Describes the work-function amd prospects of PENKUP FAMILY... [123 words]
Tiger by Diana Venditti To one of the most beautiful creatures on the earth. [91 words]
Thoughts Of You by G N Love speaks. [54 words]
The World Keeps Turning by David Con - [60 words]
The Witch by Diana Venditti A story of a witch. [267 words]
The Tender Loving Smile by Penkup Family "The joyful testimony of my infancy in the hands of my mother..." -Obohwemu O. Kenned... [119 words]
The Spinner Of Time by Diana Venditti - [58 words]
The Sistrum by Diana Venditti For he who loves Africa. [79 words]
The Rat by Diana Venditti A secret fear. [142 words]
The Mermaid by Diana Venditti For those with children. [111 words]
The Masterpiece by Victoria Taginod Tangan For nature lovers who loves to appreciate the beauty of nature... [78 words]
The Last Star In The Last Galaxy by Diana Venditti This kind of poem is new to me see what you think. [114 words]
The Kiss by Diana Venditti Keep wishing girls. [120 words]
The Killing Fields by Diana Venditti - [230 words]
The Key To My Heart. by David Baker Key to the truest/purest feelings inside of me. [85 words]
The Indian by Diana Venditti - [211 words]
The Hunted Hunter by Diana Venditti A lttle justice sometimes. [131 words]
The Hand by Diana Venditti Has it happened to you? [76 words]
The Ghost by Diana Venditti Goose bumps. [102 words]
The Frog by Diana Venditti A freaky frog story. [110 words]
The Fire Is Almost Out by Skyler Drevan - [100 words]
The Final Solution by Diana Venditti Never forgotten. [61 words]
The Elevator by Dri Cook Not always friends are supposed to use words to communicate, are they? [199 words]
The Countess Of Storymania by D G Williford Everyone knows. [13 words]
The Cascade Hills by E Rocco Caldwell In Washington State, there is nothing more lovely than the Cascades in the dawn. Another inst... [67 words]
The Bill by Dri Cook To Jim Cook. [69 words]
The Arm-Chair by Dri Cook Even an old chair can hold deep emotions. [75 words]
The Angel by Diana Venditti I believe in angels. [59 words]
Sunday by Diana Venditti - [87 words]
Sunday Snow by Diana Venditti A brief encounter. [85 words]
Street Music by Diana Venditti Sometimes fate does the right thing. [153 words]
Still Image by Nesam Pillay - [151 words]
Spiderman by Jersey Mike Just one night last month. the wife was off to a party. I was contemplating going to a soccer game.... [125 words]
Someone Special by Diana Venditti - [97 words]
Soft Touch by Nesam Pillay First Experience. [18 words]
Small World by Skyler Drevan - [137 words]
Simba by Diana Venditti Another to my faithfull friend who loves Africa. [67 words]
She Lays Dreaming by Joe Newton I am new here, I just write what I feel,hope it is not too boring. [63 words]
Shadow by Inchara Creepy shadow. [92 words]
Seven Months by Nesam Pillay - [47 words]
Sentinels Of Time by Diana Venditti A yearning to return. [91 words]
Sent To Heaven by Victoria Taginod Tangan A poem for a friend who's so dear, who died without saying a sweet goodbye.... [115 words]
Seduced by Amber A Whitman A slightly more sexy poem than I usually write. [89 words]
Scorching Sun by Victoria Paul - [283 words]
Satisfaction Guaranteed: Refundexchange by Skyler Drevan - [70 words]
Reminisce by Amber A Whitman - [45 words]
Red Rose by Diana Venditti - [58 words]
Red Lights by Jersey Mike Out my window, about a half mile away is a tall antenna with red lights. [52 words]
Plunge by Skyler Drevan This is one of my final seven submissions to this site for a while. [173 words]
Pain Is My Friend by David Con A man realizes with depressing clarity that pain is his closest companion. [52 words]
Out Of Nowhere by Diana Venditti - [154 words]
Noble Loss by Kellie Barqs One young woman's ramblings of whether what she did was noble or just retarded. [144 words]
My Poems by Jersey Mike Where they come from! [48 words]
My Cat by E Rocco Caldwell What exactly is a habit any ways? [135 words]
Monday Again by Diana Venditti I hate mondays. [127 words]
Missing Him by Nesam Pillay - [32 words]
Miss Winterbottom by Diana Venditti This was made into a song. [133 words]
Melody Of Praise by Victoria Taginod Tangan A poem that shows how positive we had to think of the blessings we receive, that among anybody... [104 words]
Man And A Tree by D G Williford What happens in a relationship when a man tries to contain a woman and not let her be herself. [215 words]
Luvin You by Megan Quesenberry This is for David... [75 words]
Love On A Rainy Afternoon by Diana Venditti Long live rainy afternoons. [81 words]
Love Ended A Long Time Past by E Rocco Caldwell Another poem in my series of the usage of sunlight [97 words]
Lost In Me by Adam Wieland - [182 words]
Looks Like Rain by Diana Venditti Well got to laugh sometimes. [100 words]
Looks Like Rain Part 2 by Diana Venditti Come on in now ya hear! [104 words]
Let Me Be A Woman by Dri Cook "My darling, I am yours, and you desire me..." - Song of songs. Thought about this one as a s... [95 words]
Ladies And Gentlemen Your Comments Please by Diana Venditti We all need feed back. [134 words]
Kissed By An Angel. by David Baker - [166 words]
Just Sunday by Jersey Mike Thinking about what really happens on this holy day. [53 words]
Just Me And Giov And The Olive Grove by Diana Venditti - [77 words]
Just A Feeling by Jannah Akira Imagine yourself as a feeling. [68 words]
Isn't It Strange? by Skyler Drevan - [24 words]
Is It True by Diana Venditti Words that disturb sleep. [98 words]
Ihy by Diana Venditti Magic and myth. [85 words]
If I Could Do It Again by Skyler Drevan Regret. [96 words]
I Should Have Known by Dri Cook I'm back! Had to give my brain a rest for so much work. I wrote this one from a male perspe... [151 words]
I Fall by David Baker Falling in love..... [59 words]
I Cry by David Baker Crying lol..... hard to explain. first poem I ever wrote so yeh.....lol. [66 words]
I Am by Dri Cook I love to be what I have become and still working on it. Thanks to the great I AM [73 words]
How Can One Start Writing A Poem?? by Shiladitya Sengupta - [142 words]
He's Done It Again by Diana Venditti - [49 words]
Here's To You All by Diana Venditti A little ditty to you all. [94 words]
Hell Riders by Diana Venditti In the night they come. [93 words]
Hatshepsut by Diana Venditti Attempted assassination of a queen. [147 words]
Hanging With Jack Day by E Rocco Caldwell Jack Day was a friend of mine who shot himself one afternoon....at times I think of him. [182 words]
Hallowed Ground by Diana Venditti Beware when you walk in a graveyard after midnight. [103 words]
Haiku by Inchara It is a collection of Haikus. [46 words]
Go West Young Man Part 1 by Diana Venditti A new kind of poem would like your opinion to say if it works. [165 words]
Getting To Know Me by Diana Venditti For all my new friends. [201 words]
Gaurdian Angel. by David Baker - [83 words]
Friday Again by Diana Venditti A magic moment. [59 words]
Freedom Riders Of 1966 by E Rocco Caldwell After a rally in a southern town in 1966 four SNCC kids are heading back to Vermont. [83 words]
Forever Mystery by Skyler Drevan - [136 words]
For England And King Harry by Diana Venditti - [158 words]
Fifteen Friends And A House On The Hill by Diana Venditti Paradise found. [207 words]
Fear At It's Worst. by David Baker Fear of life and loosing a loved one in hospital. [64 words]
Falling Again by Dri Cook He melts my heart, charms me, how could I resist? I bet you too would fall for him. [153 words]
Fairy Tale by Victoria Taginod Tangan The love had found only by chance, so accidental that it will make you realize that you are falling ... [146 words]
Every Step Of The Way by Megan Quesenberry This is a poem I wrote for my bestfriend Ciara the day that her and her boyfriend broke u... [109 words]
Eulogy For Superman by Anthony S Maulucci A tribute to Christopher Reeve. [60 words]
Eternity by Dri Cook Are you ready for it? [91 words]
Engagement by Inchara This is about the engagement ceremony of one of my friend. [63 words]
Endless Slumber by Ari Bush - [54 words]
Enchanting Journey by Inchara Its about life and its perplexity. [71 words]
Don't Know by L A Walters How I feel. [37 words]
Diamond Dreams by Amber A Whitman A fantasy poem. [31 words]
Demons Gods And Heros by Diana Venditti - [73 words]
Death Of A Godking by Diana Venditti - [142 words]
Daughter Of The Sun by Diana Venditti - [175 words]
Dancing In The Dark by Dri Cook I grew up under the beat of his music. A tribute to someone who has always been part of my ... [305 words]
Congo Stopover by Diana Venditti A true story. [134 words]
Collapse by Hayley Burdett - [61 words]
Cold by Nesam Pillay - [160 words]
Cheek To Cheek by Dri Cook One of those moments of heavenly insanity. [68 words]
Changing Lanes by L A Walters - [52 words]
Cameo Of My Psyche. A Collection by Ulysses Hero Says exectly what it is in the tittle. [1,288 words]
Bottled Up Inside
Bonny by Diana Venditti A dedication to a dear friend. [114 words]
Black Night by Adam Wieland - [64 words]
Beauty Without The Beast by Dri Cook The battles are supposed to lift our spirit. Let the beast go and if it's meant to com... [96 words]
Bath Time by G N Nothing can refresh the mind or soul like a hot bath. [127 words]
Autonomía. (Poema Que Nunca Verá La Luz) by Martin De Leon - [50 words]
Attila by Diana Venditti - [78 words]
Asphyxiate by Skyler Drevan - [169 words]
Asleep by Skyler Drevan - [170 words]
As It Is by Jersey Mike Started this last autumn in Turkey while watching TV in Oludeniz in the hotel. Finished it several mo... [187 words]
April 31st - Belgium by Jersey Mike One written back a few years ago on april 31st. it was a very stormy night that refused t... [146 words]
Another Routine Day by Dri Cook A boring and dull routine day can also become special. It all depends on the way we look at... [141 words]
An End To Her Missery by Melissa Milonopoulos - [57 words]
About A Girl. by David Baker A girl I recently met, although I've only known her for little time I'm soo happy each time im wi... [83 words]
A War Somewhere by Diana Venditti Will man ever learn. [158 words]
A War Of Wills by Diana Venditti - [81 words]
A Walk By The Ocean by Dri Cook Again, the SHE part is my unconscious and it talks about our interaction and the healing pr... [160 words]
A Sparrow Falls by Diana Venditti For hostages killed in Irak. [79 words]
A Search For Words by Diana Venditti - [57 words]
A Random Sample Of Senryu by Higgins A cross section of Senryu poems. [152 words]
A Perfect Affair by Diana Venditti Eat your heart out. [94 words]
A New Feeling by Diana Venditti Sometimes we have to find the courage to walk away. [170 words]
A Great Many Words by Penkup Family Tries to picture in its entirety, the great depth of a mother's love...Dedicated to mother. [114 words]
A Fight Against Time by Diana Venditti Based on a true event in south africa, No.1 shaft western holding, welcome orange free sta... [152 words]
A Fairy Tale by Diana Venditti For all of you with children. [105 words]
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TITLE (EDIT)
Bottled Up Inside |
DESCRIPTION
Amounts of mixed feelings all trying to come out at once.....
[244 words] |
TITLE KEYWORD
Mind |
AUTHOR
David Baker |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[January 2006] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
bakes_7@hotmail.com |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (18)
About A Girl. (Poetry) A girl I recently met, although I've only known her for little time I'm soo happy each time im with her n yeh the poem sais it all. [83 words] [Relationships]
Fear At It's Worst. (Poetry) Fear of life and loosing a loved one in hospital. [64 words] [Mind]
First Day Of My Life (Poetry) It's been a loong time but i'm back hahaha, this is my newest poem, have a read hope u like it..:):) [89 words]
Gaurdian Angel. (Poetry) - [83 words] [Mystical]
I Cry (Poetry) Crying lol..... hard to explain. first poem I ever wrote so yeh.....lol. [66 words] [Mind]
I Fall (Poetry) Falling in love..... [59 words] [Relationships]
Kissed By An Angel. (Poetry) - [166 words] [Suspense]
Most Beautiful (Rebecca) (Poetry) Poem I wrote for Rebecca (poet on this site)and one of my best friends and what I see when I look at her.. [169 words]
Speak From Your Heart (Poetry) Listen to your heart..... [74 words]
Tear Of Acid (Poetry) I duno bout this one, it's different, plz have a look and let us know what ya think :-) :-) [57 words]
The Key To My Heart. (Poetry) Key to the truest/purest feelings inside of me. [85 words] [Relationships]
The Monster In The Closet. (Poetry) A bit different for me I think, bout closet monsters lol, check it out :-):-)..... [120 words] [Mystery]
The War Within My Heart (Poetry) Sorry wasn't in a good mood last night. Lots of stuff has been happenin. My aunty is sick n yeh. [95 words]
Where Am I?? (Poetry) Have u ever tried to reach out for someone but you felt they didn't notice you?? let us know :-) [61 words]
..Darkness.. (Poetry) I guess the title sais enough... I duno bout this one.. check it out n if u can tell us wat u think :):) [109 words]
..Empty.. (Poetry) How can u have everything yet still feel empty inside?? .....havn't writen for a while here's a new one check it out..... [81 words]
..For You.. (Poetry) This just came to me last nite,i duno if it's good lol, let us kno wat u think :):) [106 words]
...Only You... (Songs) Its my first song lol I only got poems on here untill now .. have a look tell us wat u think if u can :) cheers....its bout this girl I met [235 words]
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Bottled Up Inside
David Baker
For every time that ive been hurt,
For every bruise been give.
For every time life seemed to fade,
When my eyes were all but living.
I’ve never shown any sign of anger
No-ones ever seen me cry
Ive always kept things to myself
And now I wonder why?
Why ive always bottled things up,
Why all I’ve ever done is hide.
When now I feel I’m coming to the point
Of breaking up inside.
It always seemed so very easy to swallow all the pain.
Though I did not know,
My heart could over-flow
And now it’s driving me insane.
For every endless breath,
That my lungs struggle to take,
As my chest begins to fill with air,
It feels like it’s about to break.
My life-source travels through my body,
With an endless flow of hate,
For all these feeling kept inside,
Which my heart just can not take.
Just around the corner,
Is the day I’m waiting for.
When my eyes let go of all these feeling,
That are trapped behind this door.
In a river of tears,
They shall flow down my face,
These tears built from anger
The purest of hate,
Tears shed through sadness,
An endless cry of pain,
Please let this day come,
When my eyes turn into rain.
Until this day is brought upon
I shall not see the rising sun,
For my eyes are to blind
To see such a sight,
To thick are the tears,
They make everything night.
Please let these tears free,
Please help me to start,
Give me the strength to cry,
Please give back my heart,
Cuz without it I’m nothing,
I’m trapped in a dream.
One of my endless nightmares.
With no escape so it seems.
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"This poem was okay, not the best, you just really wrote what you were thinking without much expression. Please don't take this the wrong way, just trying to help" -- Kelly.
"OK Dave I thought this one was better than "I cry". The rhymes arent as forced. Nicely done. Could this be a song?" -- km.
"yeh "i cry" was the first poem i ever wrote, this was a bit further down the track n i thaught it was alot better aswell, thanx for the feedback it is very much appreciated hope to hear more from u" -- baker.
"This piece does just express the thoughts of mind, BUT this is a style i like and therefore i think it is great, keep writing ;)" -- Josh / Axey.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2004 David Baker |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
October 2004 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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