Eat Away by Katherine Smith Just another random poem. [159 words] Im A Loser by Scotty Cleary ssds [1 words] Let's Go To Bed by Dri A husband to his wife says: "Let's go to bed". When love is to commit for a life time. [115 words] Words' To Say by Brian C Lebron - [16 words] Cathartic by Desi Williams Contains SI. Is short and choppy in some places for effect. Don't know if it will work. Let me kno... [95 words] Changes by Holly This poem is about someone who has been treated badly and has had enough, Enjoy! [94 words] Race by C R Woods Im only young so check this out and please give me some feedback. [74 words] .The Carousel by Josh Anderson The carousel will always go round, till you make it stop. [162 words] Your Going Away? by Josh Anderson Why are you leaving me here? [76 words] Yet It Calls by Franklin Rapheal Its about anxiety for nothing , having everything yet some thing is aways missing.you dont know it... 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[114 words] The Garden Of The Dead by Jeremy Ray Dunlap We pass by them in our lives. Do we stop to think who they were? As the generations pro... [55 words] The First Fruit by Penkup Family To our lovely elder sister,Edirin. [110 words] The Cry Of A Lamb by Penkup Family "It's plane...dedicated to my chidhood..." -Obohwemu O. Kennedy [114 words] The Bright New Penny by Penkup Family To one of our cowboys,Clement. [113 words] The Best Of The Best by Reborn Clayborne The greatest poem ever. [38 words] The Allegory by Katherine Smith - [113 words] The Active Quicksilver by Penkup Family To one of our cowboys,Nelson. [114 words] Sun Sonne by Josh Anderson Also originally written by me in German. If you want me to post the German version, let me know :) [244 words] Still Glory by Katherine E Krahl - [48 words] Speak From Your Heart by David Baker Listen to your heart..... 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[241 words] On Winter's Deathbed by Brian C Lebron - [14 words] On And Offf by Patrick Collins A poem about confusion and distress, and the struggle to overcome it. [180 words] Oh Love! by Inchara Its about love. [66 words] Nine Months In The Stream by Penkup Family Just provide the link...Dedicated to my infancy. [137 words] Nightly Embrace by Josh Anderson Sad, sweet sentiment to my friends. All of you distant, faceless, unreachable, or that I see a... [191 words] New Iraq by E Rocco Caldwell Repost of a poem I did yesterday. [45 words] My Troubled Youth by Ian Tronco - [66 words] My Recurring Dream by Katherine Smith A type of texture that even made me stop and think while I myself, was writing it. [204 words] My Place by Dri Inner peace. [33 words] My Heart In A Hand by Josh Anderson Love. The girl 'o my dreams exists! And this is how I feel :) [79 words] Mute Angel Canvas by Josh Anderson What happened to my dear angel? [452 words] Music Box Beginning by Josh Anderson A music box plays a haunting tune... [521 words] Maybe Someday by Desi Williams I don't think it's very good.... It's about someone... you don't know them... I think ;) [63 words] Lovely Phoenix by Josh Anderson I think love has found me. Maybe. [130 words] Love Shiver by Josh Anderson Romance Poetry I Suppose. [147 words] Look At Me Now by Josh Anderson When I go... [180 words] Little Glass World by Josh Anderson - [70 words] Light And Dark by Patrick Collins A peom about my greatest love: cinema. This poem is a celebration of the world of film. I hope y... [170 words] Letting Love Go by Lisa Cardwell - [339 words] Let's Fall In Love by Dri "fly me to the moon, be my knight throughout the night" [52 words] Journey Into Music by Jeremy Ray Dunlap An journey into music and the emotions, visions, and dreams it brings. [289 words] Josh (Haiku) by Desi Williams What does Josh mean to me? [10 words] Is It Fate Or What? by Dri - [76 words] Is It Enough? Industrees by Glendora Rider A poem paraphrasing Joyce Kilmer's famous "Trees" as a 2005 environmental protest. With apologies t... [70 words] In Life by Franklin Rapheal Its tyhe thoughts of the maker watching his siblings. [73 words] If You Really Want To Cry by Jaaffar Munasip - [44 words] I Wish I Were... by Dri For a friend of mine, a poet too, who lives in the UK. [179 words] I Will Be There by G N For You. [34 words] I Want by Dri Focus on gladness not simply on euphoria. [55 words] I Want To Die by Emma Barton One of my best poems I have written please review it so I know if it is good. [56 words] I Find Peace In You by Dri - [60 words] Hymn Of Rage by Josh Anderson Poetic Manifestation Of Rage. [245 words] He by Dri - [56 words] Here Comes The Manifestation by Katherine Smith Just a brief recap on where the road of life will take us. [173 words] Heaven In Your Arms by Dri - [77 words] Front Row Seats To My Own Insanity by Josh Anderson Feeling crazy? I am. [157 words] Freak Show by Brian C Lebron - [66 words] Foggy Stream by Josh Anderson Love / Emotion / Mind poetry. [135 words] Fluttering Crush by Desi Williams Description of feelings to a special person in my life, who does not return the gesture :( Loo... [345 words] Flaw by Josh Anderson Im not sure how do describe it, other than a flaw... [123 words] Fences by Brian C Lebron This poem is about the day I escaped out the front yard when I was three. [70 words] Farewell,Gentle Stream! by Penkup Family Can you link it...to infancy? [135 words] Falling In by Charles Walitzki A story about a poem. "...so through patience, persaverance, luck and that sort of thing (I can on... [335 words] Faith Is A Wall by Buxton A light in the darkest hour. [92 words] Faceless Friend by Dri Dedication - to each one of you. [98 words] Eins Exorcise by Josh Anderson Originaly I wrote this in german. If you believe I should post the German version also, please te... [818 words] Don't Stand There ! by Sasu - [49 words] Disjointed Hatred by Josh Anderson I Think It Has Something To Do With Hatred... [96 words] Dice by Josh Anderson Experiment; I would like you, personally, to fill every second line with the word that Comes to mind, whet... [56 words] Daybreak by Rae - [75 words] Crimson Butterfly (The Wounded) by Josh Anderson This is like usual my mind on a page, *but* this poem was inspired by an avatar... [143 words] Crazy Children by Josh Anderson Pyro children, roam your street. [69 words] Chest Of Pain by D G Williford What happened to me but not this bad to make me quit smoking... it stinks, but so did I then. [69 words] Cheers To Love! by Kennedy O Obohwemu Happy cheers to the greatest of all... [105 words] Caress 2 by Josh Anderson Yeah... that. [167 words] Can I Ever Know You? by Dri "In a happy marriage there is a continuous dense magnetic sense of communication". [142 words] Born Again by Brian C Lebron This was inspired by a poem on this website.This actually has 35 words not 13 [13 words] Beloved by Ian Tronco - [41 words] Battle Of Fear by Dri When enemies are members of our own family. [124 words] Another Chance by Dri - [184 words] Angels Of God by Dri Divine creatures always there for us.(ed). [207 words] All I See Is You by Josh Anderson Pretty self explanitory, love poetry. [111 words] All Alone by Vanessa Moya - [49 words] Affinity by Josh Anderson I think I have an affinity for certain people and things. It's cool... I think. [89 words] A Thorn In My Heart by Dri - [31 words] A Sunday Drive by Brian C Lebron - [85 words] A Sigh by Franklin Rapheal The thoughts of man while watching those around him in a bar. 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TITLE (EDIT)
Is It Enough?
DESCRIPTION
Love is priceless. [79 words]
AUTHOR
Dri
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
My name is Adriana, and though I have a nickname, an American friend has told me I have a beautiful name, and uses only my full name. I am a woman, a dreamer who has a passion for life, and loves writing, and I must say, that I breathe words in and out. I started writing in 2003, as I was internally urged on to do so. Poetry is a natural outcome of my life, and I felt that I was guided or maybe even destined to write, a feeling that took over and could not be stopped. I love writing all types of poems and am glad when emails arrive from other people on the web, telling me that I put into words exactly the way they feel. Helping people is a nice way to forget about one's own personal problems and keep on going. Another reason that I have been writing is to improve my English. As English is not my native language, writing in English is another way to be even closer to this beautiful language. It has always come so naturally to me, that I can consider it a gift from Heaven. I was born and raised in Brazil. In marriage, I spent some time in the USA with an American citizen. Sadly though, it did not work out, and I returned to my native land, Brazil. Memories of the time I lived there are nice, and one day I hope I am able to go back to that beautiful country to visit and enjoy all the good things it has to offer. Teaching is what I do as an occupation and have a love for it, while writing is not only my love, but a hobby and a friend as well. As life's trials come I realize just how blessed I am in God and that He is everything to me. My children are grown and are young adults now. One is currently living in Italy and works as an Architect, and the other is a psychologist and lives here, in São José dos Campos. Soon, I will be a grandmother and will continue writing poetry and enlighten people's lives with my gift. My ultimate dream is to have one of my original poems used as lyrics in a song, and then hear it on many radio stations. [May 2008]
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
drinossaura@yahoo.com
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (157)
3 Little Words (Poetry) - [167 words] [Romance] A Friend In Need Is A Friend Indeed (Poetry) A very special dedication to a special friend that I don't even know if he is still alive or not. [191 words] A Place Around The Corner (Poetry) - [172 words] [Mind] A Place To Hide Myself (Poetry) Mind. [131 words] A Thorn In My Heart (Poetry) - [31 words] A Time To Fall In Love (Poetry) - [46 words] Am I Right? Or Am I Wrong? (Poetry) - [107 words] [Mind] And I Believed (Poetry) - [201 words] And I Still Believed... (Poetry) - [201 words] [Motivational] Angels Of God (Poetry) Divine creatures always there for us.(ed). [207 words] Another Chance (Poetry) - [184 words] Around The Corner (Poetry) - [147 words] [Romance] As Long As We Are Together (Poetry) - [142 words] [Romance] At Peace (Poetry) - [26 words] [Mind] Battle Of Fear (Poetry) When enemies are members of our own family. [124 words] Beautiful Land (Poetry) A new beginning.....just trying to register my experiences of living in a foreign country, the USA. [108 words] Blue Moon, Why Do You Still Feel So Blue? (Poetry) A tribute to one of my favorite songs - a love poem. [123 words] [Romance] Brazil, You Are The Best (Poetry) A tribute to my homeland, my Brazil. I dedicate this poem to my dear friend Roberto, in CA. [188 words] Can I Ever Know You? (Poetry) "In a happy marriage there is a continuous dense magnetic sense of communication". [142 words] [Relationships] Caress My Soul (Poetry) - [120 words] [Romance] Come (Poetry) Pseudo romance or not, you're still the one, oh, the only one I have always loved. [100 words] Dance With Me (Poetry) - [151 words] Dark Clouds In My Heart (Poetry) A big transition in my life. Trying to overcome the cultural shock of living in another country and another culture that are far different from mine. Just venting. [159 words] Desire Of My Heart (Poetry) - [191 words] [Romance] Devoted Love (Poetry) - [155 words] Don't Steal What's Mine (Poetry) Nobody has the right to interfere in our choices. [99 words] Driming Of You (Poetry) Playing with my name which is pronounced Dree. Just being silly myself. [84 words] Endless Flight (Poetry) - [117 words] [Mind] Endless Love (Poetry) Eternal love.... [190 words] [Romance] Enigmas To Ponder (Poetry) I wrote this one from a male's perspective. [127 words] [Mind] Entwined Hearts (Poetry) - [89 words] Exquisite Rose (Poetry) - [66 words] [Mind] Face In The Mirror (Poetry) - [80 words] Faceless Friend (Poetry) Dedication - to each one of you. [98 words] Feast Of Love (Poetry) - [146 words] [Romance] Finding Myself (Poetry) I'd love to put this one into lyrics for a song. [159 words] Floating Feather (Poetry) - [84 words] Follow Your Dreams (Poetry) - [119 words] [Motivational] For My Niece With Love (Poetry) - [281 words] [Relationships] Forbidden Fruit (Poetry) - [296 words] [Romance] Friend Without A Face (Poetry) A dedication to my fellow poets [115 words] From Head To Toes (Poetry) That's the way I love you, baby! [94 words] [Erotic] Gravestone (Poetry) A cute love poem. [155 words] [Romance] Harbor Of Dreams (Poetry) - [77 words] [Romance] He (Poetry) - [56 words] Heaven In Your Arms (Poetry) - [77 words] Her Turn (Poetry) What the world sees in us does not necessarily mean that they see what's right. [207 words] Hold Me In Your Arms (Poetry) - [232 words] [Romance] Home You Are Always Sweet (Poetry) - [157 words] Hometown Memories (Poetry) - [200 words] Honeymoon Cruise (Poetry) It was not meant to be humorous until my cheeky muse pops us... [415 words] [Humor] Hymn Of Praise (Poetry) Being thankful. [161 words] I Find Peace In You (Poetry) - [60 words] I Found Love, I Found You (Poetry) - [55 words] [Romance] I Found You, I Found Love (Poetry) - [189 words] [Romance] I Love The Way You Love Me (Poetry) - [127 words] I Love You Because I Just Do (Poetry) - [181 words] [Romance] I Love You So Much... (Poetry) - [41 words] [Romance] I Love You With All My Heart (Poetry) - [131 words] [Romance] I Still Am (Poetry) I like to think that I am still the same person I used to be before I came to the US. It was based on my previous poem I AM. [51 words] I Still Love You So... (Poetry) A strange type of love, but it is still love, isn't it?:-) [193 words] I Want (Poetry) Focus on gladness not simply on euphoria. [55 words] I Wish I Were... (Poetry) For a friend of mine, a poet too, who lives in the UK. [179 words] If I Could... (Poetry) - [155 words] If It Weren't For That Beer (Poetry) a silly one as a dedication to Leah and her boyfriend. [81 words] [Mystical] In The Still Of The Night (Poetry) When I find peace, when to wait is never a waste. [75 words] Inner Journey (Poetry) A journey to the very deep of myself. [206 words] Intimacy Of Love (Poetry) dreaming... [154 words] Is It Fate Or What? (Poetry) - [76 words] Is That All You Think About?:-) (Poetry) - [115 words] [Humor] It Had To Be You (Poetry) Romance me, baby, romance me... [301 words] It Takes Courage (Poetry) It takes courage to live a decent life. [287 words] It Takes Two (Poetry) - [163 words] It Was All In Vain (Poetry) To live life in a sentimental "coma" state, may be devastating. [107 words] It's Not My Imagination (I Did Belong To You) (Songs) The words of another song. [162 words] [Romance] Just An Ordinary Day (Poetry) - [127 words] Just Dri (Poetry) We can delete a name but we can never delete someone from our hearts. We can only try to resolve this someone. New ME, just Dri. [88 words] Just One More Kiss (Songs) The words of a song. [130 words] Kiss Me One More Kiss (Poetry) Back to my country, I decided to repost an old one ..... [126 words] Knock And I Will Open The Door (Poetry) - [131 words] Let Me Be Your Dream (Poetry) I wanted this one to become lyrics for a song. [250 words] Let's Fall In Love (Poetry) "fly me to the moon, be my knight throughout the night" [52 words] Let's Go Home (Genres) A tale. My first one. [320 words] Let's Go To Bed (Poetry) A husband to his wife says: "Let's go to bed". When love is to commit for a life time. [115 words] [Relationships] Life Is A Many Splendored Thing (Poetry) That's about it.... [128 words] Love Connection (Poetry) - [238 words] [Romance] Love Me, Baby (Poetry) - [106 words] Love Me Like No Other (Poetry) - [154 words] [Romance] Love Never Dies Of Natural Causes (Poetry) - [122 words] [Motivational] Love Of My Life (Poetry) Special dedication. [254 words] Moments Of Intimacy (Poetry) - [72 words] My Baby Is Having A Baby (Poetry) the anticipation of becoming a grandma. To Lucy. [184 words] My First Love (Poetry) - [114 words] My Garden (Poetry) We all should have a place like this......a place of our own. [279 words] My Life With You (Poetry) - [91 words] My Lips (Poetry) - [41 words] [Romance] My Love Forever (Poetry) - [239 words] [Romance] My Perfect Love (Poetry) "Where have you been, my love?" - [294 words] [Romance] My Place (Poetry) Inner peace. [33 words] My Reason (Poetry) - [101 words] My Romance (Poetry) - [43 words] Night Stalker (Poetry) A little dark voyerism. [69 words] One Day At A Time (Poetry) Reflections on my new life in the USA. Starting all over again is not always easy but not entirely impossible. [123 words] Our Dream For Love (Poetry) - [97 words] Our Love (Poetry) To my son. [392 words] Private Thoughts (Poetry) A special dedication to a friend... [148 words] Reflections Of My Soul (Poetry) - [223 words] [Mind] Relationshits (Poetry) Sometimes relationships can be like that. Sorry for the title but I could not resist. [144 words] [Relationships] Rest Assured (Poetry) - [64 words] Romance Me (Poetry) - [151 words] Sail Away With Me! (Poetry) - [190 words] [Romance] Sea Of Misery (Poetry) - [85 words] [Mind] Second Thoughts (Poetry) - [237 words] [Romance] She'll Make It Thru (Songs) - [278 words] Sleepless (Poetry) - [107 words] Slow Dance Of Love (Poetry) - [107 words] [Erotic] Stormy Weather (Poetry) - [200 words] Sweet Abandon Of Love (Poetry) - [200 words] Sweet Intimacy Of Love (Poetry) - [251 words] [Romance] Sweet Nostalgia (Poetry) I just know you're going to be fine. [182 words] [Romance] Taste Me (Poetry) An ode to the tongue. [63 words] The Answer To Your Love (Poetry) - [268 words] [Romance] The Envelope (Poetry) An unexpected surprise.... [109 words] The First Time (Poetry) - [183 words] [Romance] The Lighthouse (Poetry) I wish I were like you, my cute light house... [146 words] The Love I Need (Poetry) - [236 words] The Phone Call (Poetry) Dim and distant. [62 words] [Romance] The Rose (Poetry) Rose, you're a miracle, always so sweet, always so strong. Know that you're born to shine. [51 words] [Mind] The Sanest Thing On Earth (Poetry) Why don't you help me to increase the list? [87 words] The Show Is Over (Poetry) When I feel homesick I sit here and I type away. It`s been so hard to adjust in another culture (USA)... just venting. [47 words] This Is My Love For You (Poetry) This is for when I meet him...one day, hopefully! [239 words] Three Coins In A Fountain (Poetry) A tribute to the beautiful land of my ancestors... [152 words] [Romance] Through The Looking Glass (Poetry) - [22 words] [Mind] To You I Give, For You I Would (Poetry) - [195 words] True Love Never Dies (Poetry) - [70 words] Unborn Lament (Poetry) this could just be a poem about that person who knows they could be something better but circumstances have kept them away from making goals or having dreams [90 words] Unfairness (Poetry) - [148 words] Unlock My Heart (Poetry) - [71 words] [Romance] Unlocked Secrets (Poetry) - [179 words] [Romance] - Wanted - (Poetry) Just being silly myself. [95 words] [Humor] What's Wrong With You? (Poetry) - [187 words] When I Lay My Head Upon My Pillow (Poetry) - [184 words] [Romance] Where Does Your Heart Dwell? (Poetry) A love poem. [122 words] While She Dances (Poetry) - [143 words] Why To Regret? (Poetry) - [216 words] Wings Of My Soul (Poetry) - [168 words] [Motivational] With You I Feel Complete (Poetry) Another one that I wanted to become lyrics for a song. [140 words] Wonderful Dream (Poetry) Dreams come true. [161 words] Words Of Devotion (Poetry) - [104 words] X-Ray My Heart (Poetry) - [150 words] You Flew Your Love To Me (Poetry) - [174 words] [Romance] You Loved Me From The Start (Poetry) - [146 words] [Romance] You're My Addiction (Poetry) - [103 words] [Romance] You're My Dream (Poetry) And will always be. [89 words] [Romance] You're Not Alone (Poetry) We never know how far a kind word can go, do we? [148 words] You're The Sunshine Of My Life (Poetry) When moon and sun walk hand in hand. [159 words] [Romance] You've Got Male:-) (Poetry) Just being silly myself. A satire to a darling movie. [268 words]
Is It Enough? Dri
What I can give you
is priceless,
it goes
beyond
any word can tell,
it's not money,
it's not possessions,
I can't give you
stars from above
nor can I give you
the colors of
a rainbow,
I wish I could pick
the clouds from the sky
and give you
but not even that
I can do,
I can only give you
my heart,
my entire being,
it's precious,
please accept
this gift,
is it enough
to say that
I can give you
all of my love?
my lust
my loyalty,
the most
beautiful,
intimate feelings,
take it, darling,
it's for you,
and it's just me,
is it enough?
it's priceless,
unbreakable,
unchangeable,
you'll have it
forever
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"Hey,I noticed the style of your writing has changed slightly,what happened?Whatever it was,definitely is working to your advantage.Great job,keepem' coming." -- Brian L.
"Is that right? Why do you say so? To me, I'm writing the same way but it's great that you noticed this little change. Thanks, Brian, for such a positive feedback. " -- Dri.
""Those such warm lines bring up some memories and fantasies, and put me back on the track again, really touchable...takes my breath away" (I think Brian might be right, your writing has changed slightly!!!! Could you be by any chance deep into some "falling love" spot?????")" -- roberto, b, California, USA.
"The question: is it enough? The poem,too. I like this short poem but feel it isn't enought. IMO I can't help but feel you owe it to the reader to develop this more ,add more words,retain current structure but enhance the meaning. perhaps something like: What I can give you(you haven't got) is priceless,(free but worth a lot) that sort of thing. IMO So now it's up to you. " -- Cleveland W.Gibson, Faringdon, Oxon, England.
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