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I'm Losing Control
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TITLE (EDIT)
I'm Losing Control |
DESCRIPTION
I spent many years suffering from the dark demons of depression.I wrote this poem during that time.Don't make me out to be a Devil worshipper or anything like that,it's just a poem that expresses the dark side of me.
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TITLE KEYWORD
Horror |
AUTHOR
David Daniels |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am a retired New York City Corrections Officer that is currently attending Nassau Community College. I am studying creatve writing, and I hope to make my living as a writer now that I'm retired.I am 41 years old and currently divorced and living in Long Island.
[April 2011] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
MrPoetic@hotmail.com |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (31)
Apparently, I've Gone Insane (Poetry) Just a pleasant little poem that came to me one night while listening to the radio. [296 words]
Brave Soldier (Poetry) A poem about love and war. [208 words] [Romance]
Captain Courageous (Poetry) This poem is about my older brother who is a retired Captain of the NYC Correction Dept.This is not another Rikers Island experience.It's about a man with an addiction who found the courage to enter r... [597 words] [Spiritual]
Day Of The Drunken One (Poetry) About 20 years ago I got engaged and my fiance and I threw ourselves a nice engagement party.I got totally wasted and made a complete asshole of myself.So I thought I'd write a poem about it. [424 words] [Relationships]
Feel The Blade (Poetry) This poem is about a young girl named Lisa Fernandez. She was an inmate at Rikers Island hospital. She was hospitalized because she took a 'shank' and cut herself up. [330 words]
Forever, I Will Always Love You (Poetry) This poem is dedicated to my partner in life,my best friend and the greatest woman I know, my wife Ann. [291 words]
God's Hands (Poetry) Okay,I know I said I was going to write poetry that was more positive.But when I feel sad I write and this poem reflects that. [280 words]
Happy Songs (Poetry) A poem about child abuse. [279 words]
Hoping For A Resurrection (Poetry) Just a poem that came to me about relationships.It seems when I write about relationships I always write about saying goodbye.This one is about a broken hearted person that still has hope. [250 words] [Relationships]
Hoping To Find Happiness Again (Poetry) Many years ago I was diagnosed with manic depression.These last couple of days I've been really feeling the effects of my illness.So I thought I'd write a poem about it. [543 words] [Psychology]
I Wish The Darkness Would Disappear (Poetry) Just a poem that can to me one night when I couldn't sleep. [487 words]
In My Mind (Poetry) This is a poem written by my 17 year-old niece,Andrea.Her grandpa passed away from cancer last November.She wrote this poem in memory of him and read it at his funeral.I was so moved by the poem that ... [375 words] [Spiritual]
It Is Time To Say-Goodbye (Poetry) This is a poem about something we've all been through, breaking up with a loved one. [297 words] [Drama]
Junkie (Poetry) Another Rikers Island experience.This poem is about an inmate named Robert Ramirez. He was carried to the clinic one night by the riot squad where they handcuffed him to a bed because he was violent a... [395 words] [Crime]
My Brother Is Dead But I'm Doing Fine (Poetry) No need for words the poem speaks for itself. [375 words] [Psychology]
My Daddy (Poetry) This is a poem by the love of my life, my 8 year old daughter Daniela Jane,she wants to be a poet just like her dad.The piece was written word for word the only thing I corrected was the spelling. [114 words]
My Sad Little Boy (Poetry) A poem about the hardships of fatherhood and raising a son. [379 words] [Relationships]
My Sweet Daniela Jane (Poetry) A poem about the love of my life, my 8 year old daughter. [149 words]
One Heart (Poetry) I was taking a writing class at Nassau Community College and one of my class mates,a girl named Lenora,wrote an essay about how her heart belongs to Jesus.Her essay is what inspired me to write this p... [278 words] [Spiritual]
Separate Ways (Poetry) Another poem about how hard relationships can be especially if you love someone and they don't love you back. [371 words] [Romance]
Tales Of Tito: Essay Of An Inmate (Essays) Are you a fan of the movie,'Goodfellas?' Then check out this story about the life of a criminal named Tito. [2,718 words] [Crime]
Temporarily Misplaced (Poetry) Felt like writing a blues rock song.If any of you rock musicians want to use my lyrics in a song, don't plagiarize me!Just leave me a message in the review section and I'll get in touch with you.Hopef... [480 words]
The Game Of Life (Poetry) It took me a week to write this poem and I think it's one of my best.It's about the hardships of life,the difficult world we live in and the current events that surround us. [832 words] [Drama]
The Light Of Tomorrow (Poetry) I think I'm going to go in a different path and start writing poetry that's more positive.Even though I suffer with depression does that mean every poem has to be sad? This one is a start on that new ... [162 words] [Motivational]
The Mystery Of My Mind-Subtitle:The Things I've Tried (Poetry) I was just about to go to my son's baseball game when suddenly I stopped and sat down to write this poem.My wife thought I was crazy but what else can you do when you get an urge to write but write.Ne... [469 words]
The Preacher And His Friend (Poetry) I truly feel that this is one of the best poems I've ever written because it tells a story as well.However, because the poem tells a story, the sentences are rather long. So I hope the structure of th... [319 words] [Drama]
The Questions Of Love (Poetry) Questions we must all ask ourselves. [455 words]
The Smoke Inside You (Poetry) A poem about the fears I have about my wife's pack a day cigarette habit. [231 words]
Unanswered Questions (Poetry) Don't mind this one because I just wanted to see if I could write a poem with three consecutive rhyming words.So the poem might seem a little forced.I've been reading a lot of poetry on this website a... [340 words]
Wighead (Poetry) I went bald at the age of 20 and it devastated me.Then I did a stupid thing and went out and bought a toupee.Yep,that's right, I was a wig wearer.It was the most horrible time of my life.Can you imagi... [543 words] [Comedy]
Your Prison Cell (Poetry) Another Rikers Island experience.This poem is about an 19 year old inmate named Ralph Porter.I discovered him hanging in his prison cell one night while I was working the graveyard shift. [382 words] [Crime]
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I'm Losing Control
David Daniels
Out on the streets the bloody bodies lay rotting in the gutter
The knife pierces my heart like a hot blade through butter
The Grim Reaper is breaking down my door
My blood seeps from my veins and drips to the floor
The Queen is dead,she was murdered by the King
All I see is fire as the Devil spreads his wings
The foul stench of death lingers in the air
I hear Satan's voice in my mind telling me to beware
The Dark Demons that haunt me tear into my chest and rip out my heart
Now I lay dying in the hot sun and the vultures gather and feast on my body parts
I feel lost and confused and I have nowhere to turn
The Devil sets my body on fire and he laughs as I burn
Every person I meet becomes an enemy and not a friend
Every path I take turns out to be nothing more than a dead end
Every living thing I encounter ends up dead
I have the loaded gun in my hand and it's pointed at my head
I feel trapped in a cage with no way to break out
The Devil has made everything an illusion and I don't know what reality is about
I once had a heart filled with love but the love within me has died
My soul is empty,drained by the millions of tears that I've cried
The Hounds of Hell lift their hind legs and urinate on my soul
All is lost-All is black-My only option is suicide because I'm losing control
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""The hounds of hell lift their hind legs and urinate on my soul" That is one fuckin' amazin line.I love this poem!" -- A Fan.
"Devil worshiper? I don't get that from this piece...but rather a dark moment. Wish they never happened! We all have dark moments. Hope it is lighter and brighter for you now. :)" -- mattie.
"Now you have given me some incentive to come back David. I loved this poem and alike matty said, I never derived anything like a "devil worshiper" from this merely a state of undeniable pain and as always along with that comes anger and confusion. Wonderful poem but undeniable painful to read, packs a powerful punch" -- Rebecca.
"SO glad you're passed all that...I missed ya. Maybe you can sell this one to Ozzy. dom " -- dom.
"When you find youself lost and confused, just run from the devil inside your head !!!! This poem hit home too much....." -- Christine.
"Ask Mom, she'll explain.........." -- Christine.
"I liked the positive hope you offered in your new work...but cant help but see this as more natural for you...either way you have talent" -- Samara.
"We all have our dark times... I feel it in this one. Finally got a chance to check out your work... Write on!" -- Tessa.
"Good stuff. In all honesty? I think I could sell this for you to a musician I know. You are embarking on what I's say will be a great career in songwriting or poetry. Keep it up." -- Christian Loche.
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STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
March 2005 |
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