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TITLE (EDIT)
The Monster In The Closet. |
DESCRIPTION
A bit different for me I think, bout closet monsters lol, check it out :-):-).....
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TITLE KEYWORD
Mystery |
AUTHOR
David Baker |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[January 2006] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
bakes_7@hotmail.com |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (18)
About A Girl. (Poetry) A girl I recently met, although I've only known her for little time I'm soo happy each time im with her n yeh the poem sais it all. [83 words] [Relationships]
Bottled Up Inside (Poetry) Amounts of mixed feelings all trying to come out at once..... [244 words] [Mind]
Fear At It's Worst. (Poetry) Fear of life and loosing a loved one in hospital. [64 words] [Mind]
First Day Of My Life (Poetry) It's been a loong time but i'm back hahaha, this is my newest poem, have a read hope u like it..:):) [89 words]
Gaurdian Angel. (Poetry) - [83 words] [Mystical]
I Cry (Poetry) Crying lol..... hard to explain. first poem I ever wrote so yeh.....lol. [66 words] [Mind]
I Fall (Poetry) Falling in love..... [59 words] [Relationships]
Kissed By An Angel. (Poetry) - [166 words] [Suspense]
Most Beautiful (Rebecca) (Poetry) Poem I wrote for Rebecca (poet on this site)and one of my best friends and what I see when I look at her.. [169 words]
Speak From Your Heart (Poetry) Listen to your heart..... [74 words]
Tear Of Acid (Poetry) I duno bout this one, it's different, plz have a look and let us know what ya think :-) :-) [57 words]
The Key To My Heart. (Poetry) Key to the truest/purest feelings inside of me. [85 words] [Relationships]
The War Within My Heart (Poetry) Sorry wasn't in a good mood last night. Lots of stuff has been happenin. My aunty is sick n yeh. [95 words]
Where Am I?? (Poetry) Have u ever tried to reach out for someone but you felt they didn't notice you?? let us know :-) [61 words]
..Darkness.. (Poetry) I guess the title sais enough... I duno bout this one.. check it out n if u can tell us wat u think :):) [109 words]
..Empty.. (Poetry) How can u have everything yet still feel empty inside?? .....havn't writen for a while here's a new one check it out..... [81 words]
..For You.. (Poetry) This just came to me last nite,i duno if it's good lol, let us kno wat u think :):) [106 words]
...Only You... (Songs) Its my first song lol I only got poems on here untill now .. have a look tell us wat u think if u can :) cheers....its bout this girl I met [235 words]
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The Monster In The Closet.
David Baker
You try to sleep,
But you know it's there,
Lurking in the dark,
Waiting quietly behind the door,
For a chance to make it's mark.
You close your eyes,
And to no suprise,
The door begins to creek,
The monster is on the move again,
And it wants your fear to eat.
Your body shakes in terror,
Fingers tipped by sweat,
You know now by the sounds you hear,
It's moved under your bed.
To scared to close your eyes,
Yet afraid to know what's there,
This monster from your closet,
It walks within your ear.
At last, your saviour,
The bedside lamp,
It will distinguish all your fears,
As soon as this weapon is put to use,
The monster disapears.
You live to fight another day,
But you know you're on your own,
This creature strikes in darkness,
When it knows you're all alone.
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"Great, loved it. Glad it came out so well, keep it up." -- Josh / AxeY.
"cheers, thanx josh.." -- bakes.
"This sounds like a closet homosexual to afraid to come out and show his true(rainbow) colors. The first stanza: Trying to live a lie, sleep on it, but it's still there...lurking. Second stanza: Close your eyes, but it is still trying to come out, "The monster is on the move again, it wants to wat your fear." The truth wants to come out and is fighting. Third: This is the first gay sex expierence; "Your body shakes in terror, fingers tipped by sweat." This lie is beginning to become a reality. Fourth: To scared to come out with it, afraid to know the truth, "It walks within your ear" The truth isn't leaving without a fight. Fifth: Your saviour, the ability to date a girl to hide everything, to cover it all up. As soon as this "weapon" is put to use the rumors disappear. All is forgotten. Sixth: You live another day considered a straight man, another day to lie, but you're still on your own with this one. "This creature strikes in the darkness, when it knows that you're all alone." Nice work with this one, very clever even if you weren't going for this. I thought it was fun." -- Brodie J Hughes.
"WTF!!,that's nowhere near the point of the poem, but thanx for the review anyway i guess.." -- baker.
"The gay thing I don't see...unless it has something to do with the closet thing...lol. But anyway this was great. I liked the imagery...took me back to the days when monsters in my closet were all I had to fear :)" -- mattie.
"thanx mattie, yeh that was what i was trying to do, i'm glad it worked with someone, i admit i was a victim, i used to sleep with the light on lol, thanx heaps for that :):).....cheers" -- baker.
"Hm... ok.... i think maybe Brodie is a closet gay BAHAHA, judging that from the piece, LMARO! that is some funny shit. I dont quite think Baker was going for that... u suspect individual!" -- Josh / AxeY.
"great work, it reminded me of Darkness Falls with the whole light thing." -- Amber, Tamps, Fla., U.S.A..
" awesome poem david, I've read your work, the style of this particular piece is quite different as opposed to many of your other writings, none the less its great, keep it up!" -- katy, Tampa, Fla, u.s.a..
"Hey I thought it kicked a**,great read.Nice job,man." -- Brian L.
"thanx josh and no i wasn't goin for that lol, thanx aswell to amber, katy, and brian i'm really glad u liked it and cheers for the reply it means alot...:):)" -- baker.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
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STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
March 2005 |
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