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Review ! A Myth.. Sasu
When you think about what you do
When you think about how long it may sometimes take you
If you want the best out of people
Then they need to know the way
If there's no-one to show them
They will surely all fade away
It's as simple as a poem
It's as justifed as a life
It makes no sense anymore
Where have you all gone
Everday gets harder and harder
Feelings not as strong
So click on the title above you
Have a read and a write
Just tell them the truth
Tell them if their wrong or right
Where reading is the game
Where writing all seems the same
Dont just write about your view
Were here as one to give a review!
READER'S REVIEWS (7) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"Yeah I totally agree with the point of this....Yhere seems to be too many people on this place not willing to give their opinion, where it's needed most. CMON SLEEPY HEADS RISE AND SHINE.....EVERYONE NEEDS A REVIEW NOW AND THEN." -- Buxton.
"there is no doubt you are correct with this when Ifirst stated to post here I reviewed a lot of writing mostly songs and some poetry and very few of those people ever returned the favour ,now I reveiw a handful of peoples work and they reveiw mine so I know where your coming from ,maybe some people are that good they don't need feed back or want to help us less then perfect writers anyhow nice idea and great point" -- fh, canada.
"Posting reviews are like opinions, and everyone has those. Though I read a great deal of the postings here I do not review every post, only the ones that stand out, or have some special meaning for me. So in all fairness to those who do not post reviews, perhaps they have nothing positive, or constructive to say? " -- Mattie.
"I agree that there should be more reviews, but I'm still happy that people take time to read my poetry. Let's not forget that true expression is not a method of getting praise or recognition, it's for getting something out that you need to. This site serves that purpose perfectly. " -- Bryan.
"I'll have to agree with you and the others. We all love reviews, and we all want/need to know where we need to improve. So hopefully everyone will wake up and start talking! Thanks for this..." -- km.
"I like the subtle sarcasm that you employ in this piece. :)" -- Tamsin.
"Awesome. and you are correct." -- Alvin Gladstone.
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