AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (36) Autumnal Longings (Poetry) Just got a whiff of blackberries and I remembered my place in the woods where I went to think. [104 words] Bananas (Short Stories) A very short short story [180 words] [Animal] Butterfly Love (Poetry) - [90 words] Changing (Poetry) Can't ever decide anything - just jotted down the meanderings of my mind! [120 words] Chorus Of Love (Poetry) My first attempt at a proper old school rhyming poem - one about losing 'the one' [116 words] Destiny (Poetry) Waffly brain fart about how going back is easier than picking yourself up and moving on [153 words] Dreams Of Reality (Novels) Thought I'd give it a try... opening chapter of a plot I've been thinking about for a long time. [659 words] Eternal (Poetry) - [80 words] Four Little Words (Poetry) Out the words tumble - this one is about relationships. [114 words] He Laughs At Me (Poetry) OK being told off for not posting so here's a rubbish poem for you. [86 words] Healing The Pain (Poetry) That feeling of uselessness you get when someone gets bad news. [105 words] Heartbreaker (Poetry) Another attempt at rhyming - bit of a jokey one (makes a change from my terminally depressive ones!) [97 words] How It Feels (Poetry) - [141 words] I Cling To Hope (Poetry) Thank you MK, a little changed but still the sentiment is yours. [77 words] I Haven't Got A Clue! (Poetry) Who does know the answers? [139 words] Italy (Short Stories) this is a piece I've written for my Mum - PLEASE can you provide some feedback? [805 words] Mouse Brain (Poetry) Weird little thing written whilst bored! [238 words] Nidiot (Poetry) - [142 words] Purge - Goodbye (Non-Fiction) - [487 words] [Mind] Raindrops And Memories (Short Stories) - [804 words] Reaching For The Moon (Poetry) Just a little thing I wrote in about ten seconds when a friend bowed down to everything her bloke wanted. [96 words] Scourge Of The Future (Poetry) Inspired by Colin Baker - you can make a poem from anything, even an old lady rant at litter louts! [75 words] Shall I Tell You What I Really Think? (Poetry) Grr angry poem. [94 words] Sticky Taped Heart (Short Stories) - [844 words] Swan Dive (Novels) A little attempt at the opening chapter of a comedy (loosely) based around me [418 words] Swan Dive - Chapter 2 (Novels) Part two of my pants comedy novel. [1,553 words] Swan Dive - Chapter 3 (Novels) Part 3 of my stupid novel - I will put it into the first person - when I can be bothered! [732 words] Tears And Beauty (Poetry) Sad that people are so concerned with looks. [126 words] The Final Battle (Short Stories) Read it and you'll see! Any comments on anything I do are hugely appreciated - even if it's just to tell me to give up! [348 words] The Mythical Creature (Poetry) Bit cheeky! [94 words] Tiny Dreams (Poetry) As with the rest.. five minutes of brain splurge! - please please review some of my stuff - even if you think it's utter bobbins! - just amended it to have less 'she's' in it, thanks KM for the advise... [150 words] Verbosity (Poetry) Got bored and fancied writing a silly poem for a giggle! [53 words] Waiting In Limbo (Poetry) For my mum. [89 words] Where You Live (Poetry) Blah blah fed up of work! [151 words] Who Knows What Tomorrow Will Bring (Poetry) - [68 words] You're My Shoe! (Poetry) How I feel. [83 words]
Brit Boys Briony Carvalho
If only I could understand
the complex simplicity that makes a man
I try to work them out and then
they go and change it all again
‘I care for you’ I hear him say
Then flirts with others anyway
‘I really don’t want this to end’
‘Oh, I’m moving 200 miles this weekend’
Another guy I used to date
Told me I was still his soul mate
I felt the same right since the end
But then I found out about his girlfriend
Another guy I used to know
So fragile I was afraid to blow
I’d ask, what would you like to do?
He’d say, I don’t mind, as long as it’s with you
Not a bad idea I hear you speak
But we’d only be dating for a week!
He told me he loved me after three
at five I ran when I heard ‘baby’!
Another guy, who gets a verse
Seemed to just get worse and worse
Nice enough, kind and funny
But he always stole my money!
I sound like an ungrateful witch
With all my moans, a little bitch
But is it really too much to need
I guy who I don’t have to leave?
All I want is someone who
Will be my friend and act a fool
Have a laugh and no evil trait
Someone who is my soul mate
He doesn’t have to be Brad Pitt
I just don’t want a total sh*t
Share a romantic meal and wine
Slob out with a pizza at mine
Someone who till talk til three
Hold my hand and laugh with me
trust me, never cheat and lie
Just an average normal guy!!!
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"I like the song very much. I also like your writing style. Briony write on!" -- Cedric McClester, New York, NY , USA.
"this was terrific, funny but soulful. have to open a lot of oysters to find one pearl unfortunately, sounds like you are about due. anyhow the destination is only part of the trip, getting there is where the excitement is." -- curious.
"Thanks Curious, penned whilst sitting in an exam! I seem to keep travelling but fingers crossed I will get there soon! Thank you for inspiring me, you don't know how much your words crossed the space and touched me - thanks" -- Briony.
"I don't get men either and not gonna come to england to find me one either!" -- Jenna, USA.
"This was indeed funny, but I'd just like to reassure Jenna that not all us Brit Boys are of this ilk!!!" -- Pip, Oxford, UK.
"men are full of piss and vinegar lol. men are jerks, i should know i am one, dammit!" -- Danny.
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