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TITLE (EDIT)
Son Of The Sun |
DESCRIPTION
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[255 words] |
TITLE KEYWORD
Mystical |
AUTHOR
Sasu |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[November 2006] |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (49)
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Brighter Than The Eye (Poetry) - [54 words] [Motivational]
Cancel The Order (Poetry) My first entry. Please be kind.. [114 words] [Romance]
Carmen, Open That Door! (Poetry) A discreet poem about..well Im not going to spoil it, but it's cool. [293 words] [Mind]
Code Of Deadjerry (Poetry) A code to go by. [156 words] [Popular Fiction]
Deaths Door On The Gallipoli (Poetry) It's 1915, I sit in the trenches on the Aegean coast of Suvla Bay. Waiting for my enemy to rouse my fear. [430 words] [Biography]
Deep Hole, Dirty Dust. (Poetry) A wizard is trapped inside his own mind. The key is no-where to be seen. [93 words] [History]
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End This... (Poetry) - [74 words] [Mind]
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Placid Dreamer (Poetry) - [115 words]
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Review ! A Myth.. (Poetry) A blast at the lack of readers, but writers on this Forum. [108 words] [Motivational]
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Silk Razors (Poetry) I expected this world to be a bit nicer than it is, why are we so nasty sometimes? [114 words] [Romance]
Sleepy Eyes (Non-Fiction) A poem about a man who cant take it in a world full of greed, and has to end it.. I have no psychological link to my brain so this poem is totally non-fiction.:) [77 words] [Mind]
Stairway To No-Where (Poetry) A poem that climbs.....Or..descends!?!? [17 words] [Popular Fiction]
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Winter's Wisdom (Poetry) Cold and valiant. [90 words] [Fantasy]
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Son Of The Sun
Sasu
I march through the sand towards the water-hole I see
Hazy blurs and smells of water I sense are driving me,
Nothing left to give with hardly anymore life to live,
Woozy head thinking thoughts of water falling on cold granite slabs,
Feet dead, muscles sore, no energy left where I had before
Throat parched beyond repair only water now will end this despair,
I am the sun, I am your foe,
I am the reason you die so slow,
Lay down, close your eye,
Lay down, choose to die,
I march closer to the tree,
I march closer to the water that for so long eluded me,
You will be beat, for on this land I walk with these two feet,
I'm Closer than before, a stronger will grows a little more,
Believing I can explore this dimension of a thirst that I emplore,
Oh save the story you have tell dear Sun, your beam is bright enough for everyone,
I seek a little less and hope a little more further I march towards death's door,
Empty death, what is it you explore?
I am the sun, I am your God,
You will roast in Hell and drink your own blood,
Lay down, close your eye,
Lay down, be doomed to die,
Your luck is destation I have reached my destination,
Water for me and a rest under this tree,
Thoughts of simple minds feeling so free,
NO, where did you Go?
NO, where the Hell did you flee?
The water is gone and so is the tree,
This is simple minds and a mirage I now don't see,
I will now accept your invitiation dear Sun to be eternally free,
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2007 Sasu |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
April 2007 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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