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TITLE (EDIT)
The Cloud |
DESCRIPTION
again, a challenge I accepted from Frankie, the beginning is a bit bodgy, (the first stanza) anyway, please leave advice and comments, and I hope you like!
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AUTHOR
Jasmine P Batey |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Hi! My name is Jasmine Batey, I was born in '94, so at the moment I'm 16, I enjoy writing poetry, lyrics and stories, I love listening to music, mainly rock and all of it's sub - genres, and i REALLY LOVE getting comments on story mania! so please leave feedback and I will update regularly!
enjoy reading!
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My Release (Poetry) a small poem about cutting (as you probably guessed) I know some one cutting and thats what inspired it. [75 words]
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One Of These Days (Poetry) I was dared to write a poem about a smile, I doubt that this is what she had in mind, but it IS a poem about a smile, so here is a poem, and i have 'Frankie' to thank for it. So thank you Frankie. [86 words]
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The Cloud
Jasmine P Batey
broken free from my old life,
I've run away,
I've escaped,
Now I'm free to be me
As I lay here,
in a park some where,
and I look to the sky,
to see a cloud passing by.
It's Beautiful,
I'm Ugly,
It's proud,
I'm ashamed.
It floats,
I sink.
It's sure,
I'm doubtful.
It's Light,
my head is heavy
Its care free,
I'm careful.
That was the old me,
and the reason that I left.
It is free,
and I was caged.
I have a chance,
a chance to start new.
Like a rainy cloud,
I can drop my load,
and disappear...
to start again,
somewhere new.
It's lovely,
I'm lovely.
It's pure,
I'm pure.
And we're both free.
and now,
every day,
I'm fluffy, light
and pretty too,
confidant calm,
and careless.
And when I get down,
I look up to the sky,
and remember that cloud -
the cloud that gave me the hope
to keep living every day.
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"hmm... I like it. BUT I think you've used one to many 'away' s in the first stanza. But good job girly!" -- Frankie.
"I agree... so i have changed it, any one else got feed back?" -- Jasmine, The Auther.
"Pretty...definitely inspiring." -- Kris.
"Thank you! I was a bit worried about this one..." -- Jasmine, The Auther.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2009 Jasmine P Batey |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
July 2009 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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