ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Hi! My name is Jasmine Batey, I was born in '94, so at the moment I'm 16, I enjoy writing poetry, lyrics and stories, I love listening to music, mainly rock and all of it's sub - genres, and i REALLY LOVE getting comments on story mania! so please leave feedback and I will update regularly! enjoy reading! [January 2011]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (31) Because You (Songs) um a song about love, when the person doesn't know that you like them [143 words] Before The Hero (Poetry) i don't know where to go with it after this [36 words] Don't Let Me Drown (Poetry) - [43 words] Ever Again. (Poetry) um.... i was angry... and yes -it is about murder. [78 words] Every One Leaves (Poetry) just a poem about how i feel sometimes. [32 words] Every Things Alright (Poetry) - [110 words] God, If You're Up There... (Poetry) My prayer [39 words] Heaven... (Poetry) Another little poem about BOTHE suicide AND love. [140 words] I Love You Baby (Poetry) A small love poem [107 words] I Want You To See Me (Poetry) - [102 words] Is It Worth Being Alone? (Poetry) Again, a sneak peak into my Life [89 words] Jack The Ripper (Poetry) a small jokey poem, written for fun as a tongue-in-cheek thing. as the title says, It's about Jack the Ripper. [77 words] Love Is A Despair (Poetry) - [92 words] My Release (Poetry) a small poem about cutting (as you probably guessed) I know some one cutting and thats what inspired it. [75 words] Nothings Wrong (Poetry) an inside view of me [13 words] Numb (Poetry) To a certain someone, you really hurt me. [43 words] One Of These Days (Poetry) I was dared to write a poem about a smile, I doubt that this is what she had in mind, but it IS a poem about a smile, so here is a poem, and i have 'Frankie' to thank for it. So thank you Frankie. [86 words] Pain. Betrayal. Hurt. Anger.... (Poetry) just a poem about how i feel sometimes... [29 words] Right Through Me (Poetry) - [161 words] Saving Grace (Songs) Love again -- funny, my songs are about love and my poetry death.... hmmmm [84 words] Take You Back Again (Poetry) - [119 words] The Cloud (Poetry) again, a challenge I accepted from Frankie, the beginning is a bit bodgy, (the first stanza) anyway, please leave advice and comments, and I hope you like! [121 words] The Devil Laughs (Poetry) - [85 words] The Nightmares (Why) (Poetry) - [61 words] The Only Casualty (Poetry) a small poem I wrote this morning -- haven't completed one about a smile yet but working on it!! -- It's not one of my best, it was a rush job so any feedback is not only welcome, but wanted. [59 words] The Rose - By Jasmine Batey (Poetry) A story of love, a rose, and in a way, a story about love. [62 words] The Screaming, The Anger, The Hurt And The Pain (Poetry) hope you enjoy and please comment -- not one of my best [108 words] To My Sister (Poetry) basically a letter to my sister that im not brave enoug to deliver to her myself. [200 words] When Summer Comes Again (Poetry) a small HAPPY poem :) [97 words] Why The Gun? (Poetry) Just a small poem [95 words] You Are The Beat (Poetry) This could also be transformed into a song...? About ome one famous -- see if you can guess who =P [84 words]
Just Open My Eyes Jasmine P Batey
You feed me beautiful lies
That I'm willing to believe
because i don't know if i'd survive
if you were to ever leave
And if i only open my eyes
I could easily see
but i keep them shut tight
cause i have so much to loose
I wish you would stay
you don't have to leave
I wish you'd be faithful
For ever and for always
I wish you were mine
and i wish i could open my eyes
but your beautiful lies
cut me to he core
my fantasies die
i don't want to pretend any more
And if i open my eyes
i can easily see
but i keep them shut tight
i know how much i have to loose
I wish you would stay
I wish you were mine
I wish you would stop
this lying all the time
I wish you knew
I see through your lies
I wish i was brave enough
to open my eyes...
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