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Describing A Delusion Of Adequacy
This will be a story about a certain girl. Now this girl is this tall, and if you could see the height at which i am placing my hand you would most certainly know how tall she is. But you can't so just imagine you know. Her eyes are about a shade or two darker than this guy who is wearing that shirt. Now if you could see the kid that i am looking at you hopefully begin to picture the various colors her eyes could contain, but you are not viewing what i am viewing so you are not blessed with this privilege. Her hair seems to share a resemblance with a certain nut of some sort, or is a certain type of fluorescent light? Now if i was sure of her hair color than i would be more set in my ways and begin to describe it to you, but sure i am not for my vision has been known for its deceptive ways. Now she weighs just about as much as this chair that i have now placed myself in. To repeat the fact that you would have to see the chair to understand her true weight seems redundant, but to better your understanding it seems worth while. Now you should have a good perception of her outward appearance so now we should most likely discuss the inward qualities. She always seems to act a certain way, like this one person i know, she's there and then i also see her over there. Sometimes she doesn't say a word at all, or is that she never stops pouring out all the thoughts that plague her miniscule/enormous mind? Her voice seems to very softly quiet and loudly deep. So now you know not what her voice sounds, so if you hear it, please shot out so i can hear it as well. She always has these little quirks of hers, like that one that everyone seems to do, or the ones that no one does at all, but they are her own because she has tolen them from others. So if you see this girl in which i have described her physical attributes perfectly, and of course now you the way she will act if she ever comes across you. Now if you do come in contact with her, and you do realize that it is this girl. Would you be so kind to stab her in the heart, hard enough to force it out of her back. Now i am aware of the sheer awkwardness of this but knowing you and the good heart you do contain you will do me this favor. And if it's not too much to ask could you please retrieve my heart from hers as it dangles off the knife that has been carelessly shoved through her chest, letting blood drip all down her back saturating her socks. If you could just please return it to me when you cross paths with me again. Since i have described this girl so well, you will have no trouble finding who i am. Just ask her before you end the life she claims as her own.
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