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It was her journey, her destiny to find the castle and to get the sword that had powers of the whole world set in her hands. She knew she could do it, Her name was Melody the Amazon Princess, and she was the bravest of them all, she left her family at the age of 11 to go and train until the time came for her. But only would she not face the castle, but she would face the demon himself, that haunted her in her dreams at night, that was her fear, that made her abandon her parents to fight the evil powers of the world, and yet again she was alone, alone in the world to fight and to free the dead souls, could she do it? Or could she stand away to watch the world die in her hands. [8,992 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I have brown hair and hazel eyes, I'm 5'9" tall and I'm skinny. [January 2000]
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"This is a good story start, I think it has a lot of potential, the imagination, plot and characterisation is all good. But it needs a tight edit. Two things I noticed in particular were tenses and word repetitions. Great start though Rose, I'd like to read more when time allows. And speaking of which if you have the time please could you have a look at something of mine, thank-you." -- Sooz, Dalton, Cumbria, England.
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