Old Brindle by Nathaniel A Miller A story of my Great Grandmother in Cica 1936 rescuing the family cow, their only source of milk dur... [1,559 words]
Ethel by Ekaterina Alexandrova Ethel by Kate Alexander. A man's struggle with his emotional demons finally ends in death of his much be... [1,407 words]
The Old Man by Tony De Lima A story on the end of a great man's life. [775 words]
My First Lifeline by Joe Pena The true story of a young boy who learns the greatest life lesson from his grandfather. Publ... [1,774 words]
Alone In Blood by Christina Aspears A girl is on a bus to see her parents. Little does she know, there's a surprise waiting for her.... [2,212 words]
The News by J Shartzer A young woman tells her husband she is expecting. [361 words]
Closet Space (Revised) by J Shartzer A teenage girl learns her father's dark secret... [2,498 words]
The Slaughterhouse Electric H2o by Stuart Eric Longridge A walk in my reality. [1,312 words]
The Mysterious Stars by Somdev Mukherjee A short story about Akash's quest for knowing about the heavens and his enlightenment. [859 words]
Words To Die For... by Harvey Kennett The story of one man's obsession with words.... [571 words]
Whittlin' by Gypsey Teague Even the dead need company from time to time. Daryl learned the hard way that friends are often for ... [959 words]
What A Bad Day! by Emma The Apprenticeserialkiller It is a bad day today. Note - Skippy is a person. [1,598 words]
Viewing Essential by Geoff Nelder New job, new town and a completey bizarre set of new problems for teacher John Forrister. Wha... [3,744 words]
The Stairs Of Woman Hill (Phnom Srei) by E Rocco Caldwell It's time we brought home all our missing Americans from the Vietnam War.... [1,208 words]
The Rear View Mirror by Brotherman A story about a man who blew his chances in life. [2,427 words]
The Old Man And The Tree by James T Algo A remembered incident at a Christmas tree lot where a young man worked as a young man. [2,213 words]
The Last Revelation by Harvey Kennett An alternative look at when we die... [883 words]
The Honor Of A Lady by Susan Brassfield Cogan Steel is drawn when the honor of a lady is besmirched. [321 words]
The Fallen Arc by Brotherman A story about a Brother with no excuses. Absolutely no excuses. [2,319 words]
Somewhere Else Than Here by Krige Van Rensburg This is a fast-paced story that beheads dull moments. (For lack of a better phrase) [3,361 words]
Not In My Name The Conclusion by E Rocco Caldwell He confronts the fireman in death that couldn't save him in life. The fireman hop... [1,402 words]
Not In My Name Part 1 by E Rocco Caldwell A spirit from the terrorist attack on the World Trade Towers must let go of the living in... [2,458 words]
New T.V. by Evilderry A brief glimpse into a married couple's decision to buy a new tv. [2,178 words]
Mr Brown, A Mentoring Tale by Brotherman A story to all of my mentors, who were better men than my father ever was. [2,972 words]
Manborg Menace by Randy Johnson An intelligent alien and his girlfriend travel to thirty-first century Earth and help the humans... [2,786 words]
Love's In Need Of Love Today by Brotherman A story about a grandmother and her grandson. [2,655 words]
License by Shelley J Alongi Aviation Story 14. Will Andrew ever get to hear the news that his niece has gotten her private pilot's... [2,947 words]
Ike And Lou's Barbershop by Brotherman A story dedicated to Sam and terry's barbershop in Tacoma washington. [2,842 words]
Forgive Us Our Debts...Part2 by E Rocco Caldwell - [1,525 words]
Forgive Us Of Our Debts So We Can Be Debt Free by E Rocco Caldwell A gunman owes a debt that he's come to town to pay in the old we... [1,241 words]
Forgive Us Of Our Debts...Part 3
Forgive Us Of Our Debts...Finale by E Rocco Caldwell This ends the first two chapters of the Novel I hope you enjoy it. [1,472 words]
Finality by Lissa N Metz-Gomez - [727 words]
Emerald Green by Emma The Apprenticeserialkiller Someone life is ruined. [1,924 words]
Egalitarianism by E Rocco Caldwell We must pay for the sins of our enculturation that tells us we own the world one way or another. [750 words]
Don't Kill Mother! by Stoyan Valev A story by Stoyan Valev, Translated from Bulgarian by: Nevena Pascaleva. [4,706 words]
Bloody Mary by E Rocco Caldwell Sometimes slumber parties games can get the best of you. [564 words]
Abilene And Beyond by E Rocco Caldwell Further adventures of Bob Coltrane's war against the railroad in the Old West. [932 words]
A Requiem For Ruby Ellen Daniels by Brotherman A short story dedicated to my grandmother. [4,307 words]
A Rainy Night In Baghdad by Susan Brassfield Cogan This rain is the piss of Satan! [812 words]
A Father And Son Chat by E Rocco Caldwell Are racists born or are they made? [278 words]
What Lies Beneath The White by Alyssa Vonputtputt The Tooth Fairy. Those three words can mean a lot to one person, a little to anothe... [701 words]
Under The Full Of The Moon by Norman A Rubin A love goddess looking for new seed for the renewal of life. [1,771 words]
Uncle Willie's Gift by Frank Dunsmore An old Greek regrets he never did more with his life. He wants to give money to his church ... [3,317 words]
The Reckoning Zone by E Rocco Caldwell A place we all must give a reckoning for the deeds you have done. [491 words]
The Conductor by E Rocco Caldwell What exactly is death? Is it the release of our spirits or just the recycle of energy? One person... [920 words]
The Character by Sheryl Hanna This is a story about a woman who is an author who has previously written a story about a vampire... [1,673 words]
Sirens by E Rocco Caldwell - [682 words]
Pick A Pocket Of Sunshine by Susan Brassfield Cogan What a beautiful day for petty crime! [379 words]
One More Highway Song by E Rocco Caldwell Racial hatred can burn both ways and be all consuming no matter what color your skin is! ... [3,735 words]
Life, Death, And A Guitar by Susan Brassfield Cogan Life can turn on a dime and sometimes the guitar doesn't make it. [480 words]
C.C.'ed by Tom Scanlon A salmon engineer returns home from work to find his wife is cheating on him with . . . him. "Why does ... [1,929 words]
Cassius-The-Leg, Part Two by Buxton After an encounter with wild shop owner Dargeta, our young furry friend is in recover... [369 words]
Cassius The Leg, Part Three by Buxton Cassius had faced death at least 17 times, but his life was more under threat than ... [543 words]
Behind The Wheel by Harvey Kennett Tirenedness kills...take a break ! [556 words]
Another Crummy Day by Chris Flynn A seventh grader's view of a school day. [2,158 words]
Algolagnic by E Rocco Caldwell What happens when you replace total pain with total pleasure? One woman is about to find out! [2,768 words]
Alchemist. by Durlabh Singh Short story with Indian settings. [1,187 words]
A Caustic Silence Amidst Noël by Benjamin Allen Hale A short suspense story. This was written inspired by my friend Winny. The story... [1,489 words]
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Forgive Us Of Our Debts...Part 3 |
DESCRIPTION
A company of US soldiers block Coltrane's way into Topeka but going around isn't an option. What's a man to do....?
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TITLE KEYWORD
Western |
AUTHOR
E Rocco Caldwell |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
[April 2005] |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (124)
58th And L (Poetry) Becoming a man [95 words] [Drama]
A City Pineapple (Poetry) - [117 words]
A Fair Brown Maiden (Poetry) - [155 words] [Erotic]
A Father And Son Chat (Short Stories) Are racists born or are they made? [278 words]
A Good Vision Demands Keen Insight (Essays) This is a part of a larger work entitled the New Union Standard. [1,302 words] [History]
A Grand New Age2 (Novels) The final chapter of a middle reader novel I am about to submit. [1,531 words] [Fantasy]
A Matter Of Faith (Novels) This is a small section of a piece I'm tossing about entittled "Calling all Angels". [408 words] [Fantasy]
A New Iraq- Repost (Poetry) For the brave Iraqis who chose liberty over fear and voted in the first democratic election ever! [45 words]
A Peaceful Sabbath (Short Stories) A reflection on modern times. [915 words] [Psychology]
A Seattle Dawn (Poetry) - [41 words]
A Sense Of Timing (Short Stories) - [564 words]
A Shooting In Iraq---Part Two (Short Stories) The special opts his ranger squad conducted was illegal and may have resulted in the death of a teenaged girl. [400 words] [Crime]
Abilene And Beyond (Short Stories) Further adventures of Bob Coltrane's war against the railroad in the Old West. [932 words] [Western]
Algolagnic (Short Stories) What happens when you replace total pain with total pleasure? One woman is about to find out! [2,768 words] [Fantasy]
Appomattox (Poetry) What is love can be domination too! [23 words] [Drama]
At A Wto Rally (Short Stories) - [853 words] [Fantasy]
At A Wto Rally 4 (Short Stories) Joe confront the internal workings of the consortium. [723 words] [Fantasy]
At A Wto Rally (Part Three) (Short Stories) Joe gets his first lesson as to what is the consortium. [435 words] [Fantasy]
B B C (Poetry) I just love the English accents.... [70 words] [Humor]
Back Page News (Short Stories) The thoughts of a dying US soldier on the road to baghdad. [805 words] [Drama]
Bird In The Hand (Short Stories) Gothic story of two men on a battlefield dealing with racism. [5,695 words] [Mystical]
Blackout-Part One (Short Stories) A detective that suffers from alcoholic blackouts is hired to discover the affair of a client's wife... [1,140 words] [Mystery]
Bloody Mary (Short Stories) Sometimes slumber parties games can get the best of you. [564 words] [Horror]
Business Card (Short Stories) Madness can be in a simple telephone call. [723 words] [Thriller]
Cascading (Poetry) - [57 words]
Clean Things..Part 2 (Short Stories) Brenda is horribly murdered and the police think it's Ryan who did the deed. [570 words] [Crime]
Clean Things...Part 3 (Short Stories) Ryan is surprised when the person he believe did the murder ends up murdered himself. [578 words] [Crime]
Clean Things...Part One (Short Stories) Unchecked desire can lead a man to the dirty things in humanity. [463 words] [Crime]
Clean Things...The Conclusion (Short Stories) There's one thing with being right...being dead wrong! [734 words] [Crime]
Colloquium Part Two (Short Stories) Ryder arrives at Moon Base George W. Bush in the 21st century. [349 words] [Science Fiction]
Colloquium...Part One (Short Stories) Inhabitants on a planet prepares to travel in time in order to save their own world [431 words] [Science Fiction]
Colloquy (Poetry) - [37 words]
Comatose (Poetry) - [92 words]
Cool Moonlight Outside My Hospital Door (Poetry) Ponder life as death lingers [86 words]
Droit Du Seigneur (Poetry) - [98 words]
During A Nursing Home Visit (Poetry) A poem of reflection. [92 words]
Egalitarianism (Short Stories) We must pay for the sins of our enculturation that tells us we own the world one way or another. [750 words] [Fantasy]
Equivocation (Novels) The Sage of Scarbourgh is more powerful than Rye thought. [748 words] [Fantasy]
Equivocation Part 2 (Novels) Rye and the sage confront each other. [822 words] [Fantasy]
Fear Of Water (Short Stories) What's is in out drinking water anyways? [637 words]
Fighter (Short Stories) In a moment of weakness one can find strength to endure. [561 words] [Drama]
Forgive Us Of Our Debts So We Can Be Debt Free (Short Stories) A gunman owes a debt that he's come to town to pay in the old west. [1,241 words] [Western]
Forgive Us Of Our Debts...Finale (Short Stories) This ends the first two chapters of the Novel I hope you enjoy it. [1,472 words] [Western]
Forgive Us Our Debts Part 5 (Novels) Confrontation between two of Coltrane's gang and Lincoln Washington. [1,022 words] [Western]
Forgive Us Our Debts...Part2 (Short Stories) - [1,525 words] [Western]
Form A Vision To Success (Essays) This is a speech I am going to give to Junior High Schoolers today 1/16/04 for Martin Luther King Jr day. [759 words] [Self-Help]
Freedom Riders Of 1966 (Poetry) After a rally in a southern town in 1966 four SNCC kids are heading back to Vermont. [83 words]
Gambling (Poetry) - [100 words]
Gay Marriage Is Constitutional (Essays) - [807 words]
Georgia Peaches (Novels) This is a portion of a novel I'm working on. [963 words]
Global Part Four (Short Stories) Some clones are like bad pennies...they keep turning up even when you don't want them to! [610 words] [Science Fiction]
Global Part One (Short Stories) It's in the near future and human organs are in great demand...to make money you have to get them anyway you can. [655 words] [Science Fiction]
Global Part Three (Short Stories) Clones can bleed and have emotions and what's worst they can have babies..... [792 words] [Science Fiction]
Global Part Two (Short Stories) One way around the problem of made organs and real organs is a line straight line! [585 words] [Science Fiction]
Hanging With Jack Day (Poetry) Jack Day was a friend of mine who shot himself one afternoon....at times I think of him. [182 words]
Heaven And Earth (Poetry) A poem about life and death. [75 words]
Hell (Poetry) - [181 words] [Spiritual]
If There Are Two (Poetry) - [59 words]
Instincts (Short Stories) A young reformed gang member is trying to just survive the night and make it home. [3,398 words]
Laborer (Poetry) - [86 words]
Lady America (Poetry) - [146 words]
Lead In Walls (Poetry) - [72 words]
Love Ended A Long Time Past (Poetry) Another poem in my series of the usage of sunlight [97 words]
Madness In The Dark (Short Stories) Insanity creeps up the spine of a shunned lover during a blackout in New York. [660 words] [Psychology]
My Cat (Poetry) What exactly is a habit any ways? [135 words]
Mystery (Novels) A Private eye and Catholic Priest attempt to find out what is really behind New Orleans. [888 words] [Mystery]
Mystery Part2 (Novels) The seeds of voodoo grow in New Orleans. [605 words] [Crime]
New Iraq (Poetry) Repost of a poem I did yesterday. [45 words]
Not In My Name Part 1 (Short Stories) A spirit from the terrorist attack on the World Trade Towers must let go of the living in order to cross over with the dead. But he is held to the living by the revenge of love ones. [2,458 words]
Not In My Name The Conclusion (Short Stories) He confronts the fireman in death that couldn't save him in life. The fireman hopes he can convince him to let go of the living and embrace heaven and finally peace! [1,402 words] [Fantasy]
One More Highway Song (Short Stories) Racial hatred can burn both ways and be all consuming no matter what color your skin is! One eight year boy learns one night during the Newark Riots in 69 [3,735 words] [Drama]
Pieces Of The Pie (Novels) This is the first three pages of a novel I am just about finished with...it is 189 pages in length and is targeting high school readers. [650 words] [Science Fiction]
Place's End (Poetry) This is an old one I posted a while ago but thought I would re-write it and re-submit it. [137 words]
Poltergeist Inc. Part One (Short Stories) One corporation has figured out how to defeat it's competitors...cut all energy cost and convert to seemingly endless energy....there's a catch...ghosts [683 words] [Science Fiction]
Poltergeist Inc. Part Two (Short Stories) Hilliard Aerospace has a secret.... [390 words] [Science Fiction]
Ripple Effect (Short Stories) A scientist has discovered time travel or maybe his own descent into insanity. [838 words] [Science Fiction]
Scarborough Fair (Novels) This is a portion of one of the chapters of the novel Scarborough Fair. It is a place the people there aren't completely sure what it is. The chapter is entilted Brenda. I will submit it in portion to... [657 words]
Scarborough Fair Part 2 (Novels) Further portion of the chapter Brenda. [701 words]
Scarborough Fair Part 3 (Novels) Further portion of the chapter entitled Brenda. [888 words]
Semantics (Short Stories) A police interview. [305 words] [Drama]
Shooting In Iraq (Short Stories) - [466 words] [Crime]
Should I Look Within (Poetry) For my mother. [125 words] [Spiritual]
Silicone (Short Stories) (The centralized theme of the story is to ask the question in a marriage how much of it is companionship and how much of it is sexual? Is there a balance? On the psychological level, what is the balan... [3,012 words] [Psychology]
Sirens (Short Stories) - [682 words]
Space, The Final Finale -Repost- (Short Stories) What happens in space can be inside or outside the mind. [1,008 words] [Science Fiction]
Stains (Poetry) - [120 words]
Standing On A Monterey Pier (Poetry) - [59 words]
Stephanie (Poetry) - [63 words]
Tacoma (Poetry) A poem about the city I love and believe has potential. [111 words]
Tangled Berry Bushes (Short Stories) In the style of Edgar Allen Poe. [1,892 words] [Crime]
Tempered Tools (Poetry) Healing is always a miracle [30 words] [Spiritual]
Tenements (Poetry) - [58 words]
The Adventures Of Roco Clay (Novels) A man hunts the takers of his wife in the Sudan. [1,128 words]
The Axe Man (Poetry) A professional on his way to work. [113 words]
The Cascade Hills (Poetry) In Washington State, there is nothing more lovely than the Cascades in the dawn. Another installment of my sunlight collection. [67 words]
The Christian Thing To Do (Novels) Lincoln Washington sits in ambush for two outlaws from Coltrane' s gang. [1,021 words] [Western]
The Clearing (Short Stories) A simple ghost story that happens to be true. [783 words] [Horror]
The Conductor (Short Stories) What exactly is death? Is it the release of our spirits or just the recycle of energy? One person will soon discover the truth. [920 words]
The Dawning Of A Seattle Morning (To Doc Bryon) (Poetry) I wrote this poem a bit ago but never liked it. With the passing of my friend Doc it seemed to all come together. [78 words]
The Game (Short Stories) A contractor contracted to knock down the last vestment of baseball learns the power of the game. [1,838 words]
The Hunter And It's Prey (Short Stories) - [446 words]
The Manipulatory Factor (Novels) The only man that can save Known Earth struggles to save his sanity. This is a section of the chapter titled The Manipulatory Factor in book one of the DayStar Trilogy. I started writing this my first... [1,160 words]
The Penalty Is Death (Short Stories) A Private Investigator is hired by a client to find out if his wife is having an affair. What he finds will change his life for good. [4,184 words] [Crime]
The Phantom Group (Novels) Portion of one of the chapters. [2,308 words]
The Quintessence Of Death (Poetry) - [96 words]
The Reckoning Zone (Short Stories) A place we all must give a reckoning for the deeds you have done. [491 words]
The Stairs Of Woman Hill (Phnom Srei) (Short Stories) It's time we brought home all our missing Americans from the Vietnam War. This story is for all who fought in that damn war! [1,208 words]
The Stigma Of A Race (Poetry) - [79 words]
The Strength Of Six Million (Short Stories) A young man is confronted with death but calls upon the strength of Six Million. [746 words] [Fantasy]
The Trees On Mckinley Avenue (Poetry) - [153 words]
The Union Chronicles (Novels) This is a portion of a chapter of a novel I wrote some time ago. I was re-reading it and thought it might be a nice read. [790 words] [Fantasy]
The Voyage Of The Kyle Mayes (Poetry) This is a poem in 5 beat meter as a part of the poetry contest mentioned in the Advisor. [78 words]
Title Less (Poetry) - [95 words]
Union Chronicles (Novels) Just a little more of the story. I enjoy this section the most. [645 words] [Fantasy]
Wal-Mart Wants To Rule The World (Essays) Someone left a message that this article was racist and I would like the site's opinion. [917 words]
Wanning Colors (Poetry) - [102 words]
Wanning Vivid Colors (Poetry) - [140 words]
What Else Can Sunrise Do (Poetry) Driving to work I see the sunrise nearly everyday...it's a wonderful death and life expereince. [60 words]
Where The Struggle Has Gone (Poetry) - [86 words]
Who Are We (Poetry) I wrote this after my mother past away Are we spirits or just a portion of the universal constant...energy? [124 words] [Spiritual]
Who Are We -Revise (Poetry) For my mother. [124 words]
Wto Rally The Final (Short Stories) Joe has a rude awakening. [548 words] [Fantasy]
Ze Zen Ta Continue (Novels) - [545 words] [Science Fiction]
Ze Zen Ta (The Way Of The Thinking Fist) (Short Stories) First part of a potential novel. [692 words] [Science Fiction]
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Forgive Us Of Our Debts...Part 3
E Rocco Caldwell
The Shawnees spoke of the northern crest of Kansas as life giver. It contained rich soil and plenty of water. That was before the good Reverend JT Peery Christianized the lot of them and for their conversions out of paganism the railroad moved them from the beauty of the north to a piece of land in the south called Council Grove. The Aurora Borealis over the Northern Kansas sky was green filtering to yellow and ending orange at the horizon. The crest of land at night was black and indistinguishable. Coltrane followed a portion of the Oregon Trail knowing it would eventually lead him to Topeka. The night air chilled his bones but the lingering memory of Skinny-Jen's body gave him resurgence so he pulled the collars of the duster to his face and settled deeper into his saddle. He normally wouldn't attempt riding at night because of the dangers that his horse could step in a hole and break its leg but the trail was smooth and well traveled. He hated to sleep anyways with the nightmares of his wife. He discovered her body two days later filled with maggots as he lay disfigured in their bed. He never told Lincoln Washington that though he owed him a debt his true motivation was and has always been revenge on the railroad. Bennett was sent by the railroad to kill him that horrible afternoon because Coltrane had fought the railroad since his family was destroyed by the railroad in 1855. He had sought out a campaign to stop the railroad and bring certain individuals to justice namely Charles Caldwell. Coltrane tried legal channels because he father was a Quaker and believed in nonviolence. He should have known that in Kansas the law was on the side of the railroad. He tried rallying the farmers and good people of the area but that only resulted in his wife being murdered. Violence worked the best, Coltrane had tallied seventeen killings and all were associated with the Union Pacific. It was divine intervention that his debt to Lincoln could be paid by fulfilling his thirst for revenge.
The company of soldiers took up camp near the trail. Coltrane was impressed that the officer of the company realized Coltrane hadn't reached Topeka and would take the most direct route from Sweetwater. The troops drew a line from the wetlands to the open plains; maybe a good 300 yards. Coltrane knew the wetlands were out completely with its quicksand. The open plains made him a sitting duck so he had to go straight through the center of the company. He tipped his grandee as if he tossed down his gauntlet. It was going to be a hell of a night. Coltrane held the element of surprise simply due to the idiocy of one man attacking a company of troops. No one would be expecting it. He also had dynamite in his saddle bags and all he needed was to break through the thin line and create enough confusion it would take the soldier several minutes to figure out what was occurring. The army moved slowly anyway so before they started after him at least an hour would have passed. A man riding was faster than a company. He would reach Topeka and kill Caldwell before the troop was an hour away.
He removed the five sticks of dynamite and jammed the fuses in the ends remembering his army training. There would be several sentries but a walking horse was harder to hear than a riding one. Coltrane led his horse by the reins close enough for him to use the moon light. He held the Spencer up and looked into the scope placing the cross on the head of the sentry standing in the night cold. He took a deep breath and pushed down reservations over killing the innocent soldier. Coltrane told himself that the money in the soldier's pocket was money from the railroad just recycled out of Washington DC. Sure it came signed by President Grant but it was the railroad's money nevertheless. He squeezed the trigger and the bang shattered the silence of the night and the soldier's head exploded like a melon dropped against the floor. Coltrane swung his body effortlessly onto the back of his horse. He lit a match and kicked his spurs into the belly of the horse. It reared on its hind legs and galloped forward. Shouts of alarm came from all over but no shots and that was bad because the soldiers he faced were veterans. They didn't panic easy. He tossed a lit stick of dynamite towards what appeared to be a grove of tents. The light painted the night and the explosion shook the ground. Now panic settled in among the soldiers and Coltrane tossed another stick right after another. The fury and sound was deafening. He was through the line and on his way to Topeka.
Captain Williams never saw action in the Civil War. He was a West Point graduate with all the right political connections that was why he was one of the youngest Captains in the US Calvary. He returned his pistol to the holster at his hip. His men were still in a panic and the scent of gun powder reeked staining the night air. At his boots lay the Colonel's only son or what was left of him. The dynamite had blown him almost in half. Williams vomited at the sight.
"I know that was Coltrane," his first sergeant said stepping up to the Williams. He didn't mention the vomit because he too had done the same thing the first time he saw death.
"That's right you would know his ways being that you fought with him," Williams said wiping the chuck off vomit from his mouth. "The man has killed seventeen people did we know of, Sergeant."
"If we don't stop him he's kill a lot much, sir."
"Give the order to break camp." Williams stared up at the Kansas night. "Only the sheriff of Topeka can stop him now!"
As the company prepared to leave a sentry fired a shot indicating someone approached. Williams and his first sergeant reached the sentry to discover the remaining posse. Pete Jones tried to explain they were after a man that ambushed them but Williams detained them anyways.
Lincoln Washington couldn't sleep so he held his light brown wife in his powerful arms. He carried a burden. The man he saw in the saloon was a devil. What was worst, he was a devil doing the work of a vengeful angel. Lincoln knew he had to be stopped. He knew that he couldn't live with the fact that Bob Coltrane killed people to settle a debt he owed Lincoln. He rose and retrieves the saber and holster that he wore when he served with the Massachusetts 54th. In an hour he was riding directly to Topeka in hopes he reach Coltrane before he killed again. It wasn't long before he was on Coltrane's trail. He followed Coltrane to the rocks refused to approach him knowing that he could pick him off with the Spencer so he waited and saw what Coltrane did dropping three riders. He knew Coltrane had left maybe two hours later. He picked up Coltrane's trail maybe an hour later and that led him to a cow town. He knew he was perhaps a half hour behind Coltrane. It was verified when Coltrane struck the company of soldiers. Lincoln decided the wetlands would keep him concealed and he knew them well enough to get through at night.
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"This is very good. I'll be glad when it's published. Purchase a Writer's Market for 2004. Do a query letter and synopsis for your novel, if you haven't already. The first thing editors notice when you send sample chapters are punctuation, grammar and spelling errors. You must minimize these errors in order for your novel to be given a chance. In June, I sent the first three chapters of my novel, and Genesis Press wrote me back stating that my work received a favorably review from the acquisitions reader and they requested my entire manuscript. My novel is currently in the second reading now, which is a very good sign that they'll most likely publish it. The first two or three chapters of any novel must always introduce the main characters to the reader. If the characters aren't interesting, the publishing company many times won't accept the manuscript. Another reason why a publisher won't accept a person's manuscript is because the editor(s) may not care for the type of genre that was written. Racism is prevalent in the book publishing industry, like any other industry. Keep that in mind. But I believe your book will do well. Westerns and war-type novels are in high demand. Rocco, I have at least 25 rejection letters from publishers. Some said my work was good, but they're currently not taking on new projects at the moment. Rocco, what you should do is send out your query letter and synopsis to many publishers within the first five months of next year. I believe this will give your novel more chances. Please understand that your query letter and synopsis must be written in a way to make a great impression, to inspire the editor to want to read what you've written. If it's littered with punctuation, grammar and spelling errors, they're not gonna give your novel a chance. " -- Alberta , Atlanta .
"I appreciate such kind words, Alberta. I'm glad to hear about the progress of your novel. You are a very fine writer with a keen mind. Something that's lacking in our field. I agree with everything you said. I have been writing this at a frenzy because the thoughts are there and I don't wish to lose them. This section I've presented so far is only the first two chapters of the books. I have one more section I wish you read. I will post today. This is my first attempt with a western but I found it refreshing and a special venture to voice many of the themes I carry inside me. Let me posted on the progress of your novel! I will buy it!" -- e. rocco caldwell.
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