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A true story as best remembered. this is my first attempt at a short story so any feedback will be truly appreciated. apologies for the gay slang but it's more realistic as to the way it was. Thanks for the help you know who. [1,739 words]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (23) A Bit Of A Rude Awakening (Essays) Not sure exactly what this though I called it a poem. oh well. [255 words] [Psychology] A Passing Moment (Poetry) - [63 words] [Relationships] A Vampire Tale - Well, Sort Of. (Poetry) Seeing Harvey's piece brought to mind one I had put away. [93 words] [Humor] Ain't Politics Grand (Poetry) It's that time of year again - VOTE or don't. [95 words] [Humor] Another One Of Those Days (Poetry) - [61 words] [Mind] Can't Find The Way (Poetry) - [81 words] [Relationships] Damn Words (Poetry) - [80 words] [Romance] E-Mail Blues II (Poetry) Been experiencing a rash of this stuff lately. [68 words] [Comedy] End Of A Long Day (Poetry) - [147 words] [Relationships] Here Kitty Kitty (Poetry) Had this up - it disappeared, must be a damn cat lover in admin. I'll try again. [129 words] [Comedy] I Wonder Which (Poetry) - [109 words] [Relationships] Isn't There A Better Way (Poetry) - [108 words] [Relationships] It's The Devil's Fault (Poetry) Ok admin - I offered a bribe, that didn't work. Next comes the threats! [149 words] [Romance] Jag's Random Thoughts (Essays) Just some wanderings of the mind. [263 words] Just A Bit Callous (Poetry) Not to be taken too seriously. [106 words] [Relationships] Just A Little Dream (Poetry) - [139 words] [Relationships] Maybe One Day (Poetry) Thanks to administration for finding this, thought it was lost in space. [118 words] [Romance] No Light At The End (Poetry) - [68 words] [Relationships] Not All That Easy (Poetry) Patience, i'm almost finished. [113 words] [Relationships] Still Happy To Be An American (Poetry) Wrote this the day the statues came down in Bagdad and with the events of yesterday thought I'd bring it back up. [181 words] Take A Chance (Poetry) Something about something. [170 words] [Relationships] The Dreaded Word (Poetry) Dusted this off, made a few changes. I really don't recommend using the word guys. [88 words] [Comedy] Why Don't We (Poetry) - [102 words] [Relationships]
READER'S REVIEWS (7) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"Well Uncle Ed! Now this was truly a delightful read! Entertaining, Honest & downright kick ass good prose. You really need to start writing more stuff like this JAG, give the poetry thing a break for awhile my friend because if this was your first attempt short story writing, you've done a jam up job & are missing your calling! Trust me on this one! " -- Monte.
"Monte i can't begin to thank you enough for your kind words. never having done this before my nerves were a wreck wondering if i could do this sort of thing. good thing you're a guy or i'd give you a big old kiss. thanks again." -- JAG.
"Goodness me....I am in total agreement with Monte ...skip the poetry let's have more of this...definitely a compelling and erotic read. Loved it." -- taylor.
"Wonderful! I like your poetry too but this was very good! " -- e. rocco caldwell.
"a very funny story with a lot of real feeling and wit...nice job" -- k m.
"WOW, this is more than i hoped for, well more than i expected is closer to it. when i put this up i had pretty much the same anxiety as last year when i had written and posted my first poetry and it's nice to get a favorable reaction. ERC if you'll duck i can give the girls that big old kiss and a hug. Thank you all." -- JAG.
"I can just imagine you like that, haven't really changed have you." -- Steffe.
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