DESCRIPTION
After a young boy by the name of Timmy Hutchinson falls into a pit and is rescued, circumstances arise in Blackberry Village that none are prepared for. Read and you will not be disappointed. [7,440 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
African American male. Accepted Christ as savior as I have been born again since August 1st of 2002. I have been writing on and off for about 10 years though I'm pretty determined to keep at it this time. [August 2012]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (24) Alone With My Sin (A Collection) (Poetry) This is a collection of poems wherein I express the stinging loneliness that sin has caused in my life as a Christian and the fallout of those transgressions. There is also a long poem expressing what... [2,477 words] [Spiritual] Attack From The Beyond (Short Stories) A guardian race recruits human beings in the defense of the Earth in the face of the Aelkighted. The fourth tale in what I'm calling "The Adrian and Lucalan Saga." The first story is called "The Riv... [11,647 words] [Science Fiction] Chronicles Of Zefaria: The Plight Of The Free Peoples (Novels) These are dark times for the people of Zefaria. Lord Osmadaan's provinces are causing havoc throughout the land. Tonomoli Foster embarks on a quest to attract help from some of the bigger countries ... [33,846 words] [Fantasy] Chronicles Of Zefaria: The Realm Of The Ancients (Novels) Here follows the first four chapters of the continuation of my Chronicles of Zefaria series with a bit of chapter five thrown in for good measure. This installment of the series follows the exploits ... [8,455 words] [Fantasy] Here And Thereafter (Novels) A young, dirt poor African American couple struggle to make ends meet. The husband places all of his beliefs in his unfinished fantasy novel, while the wife struggles with the everyday realities of t... [12,076 words] [Drama] Journey To The Planet Merridion (Short Stories) This is my third tale in what I'm calling "The Adrian and Lucalan Saga," unless someone can come up with something better. It follows the short stories "The Rivals" and its sequel, "The Arrivals." ... [8,445 words] [Science Fiction] Octavia's Obsession (Short Stories) This story is about... Octavia's obsession... [2,237 words] [Drama] Star Saga (Screenplays) The year is 2120 and colonization of space is well underway. Thanks to the unlocking of the human genome during the 21st Century, humanity is experiencing a time like no other. No intelligent life h... [11,766 words] [Science Fiction] Star Saga: A Clash Of Empires (Screenplays) Sequel to my sci fi scipt "Star Saga: Swarm of the Bulgata," which came after the script "Star Saga." Two months have passed since the conflict on the colony of Dorridion ended, and now the Earth Emp... [22,716 words] [Science Fiction] Star Saga: Swarm Of The Bulgata (Screenplays) Sequel to my sci fi script "Star Saga." The Bulgata have been beaten back on the alien planet of Unisee, and the Earth Empire watches over the people. However, a new conflict soon surfaces on the co... [17,954 words] [Science Fiction] Tales Of The Horror Inducing Kind (Short Stories) Three short stories documented by a horror enthusiast whose attempting to collect supposedly true stories, and told from the perspective of those who saw them. "The Centipedes" - A story about a man'... [12,838 words] [Horror] The Arrivals (Short Stories) **********WARNING*********** Do not read further without first reading my short story, The Rivals, unless you want to be spoiled**************Adrian Belfast is suffering through events that took place... [10,381 words] [Science Fiction] The Caged Introvert (Short Stories) A shy, unattached man's journey for love... [3,644 words] [Drama] The Deluded Youth (Short Stories) A boy and his dreams... [3,699 words] [Drama] The Exploits Of Tal'on Kepp (Short Stories) This is a short story set in my Chronicles of Zefaria series. I hope that all enjoy. [2,542 words] [Fantasy] The House That Bernard Wellingsworth Built (Short Stories) Eli Wellingsworth travels from upstate New York to Manchester, England, to take control of the estate of his deceased and demented uncle, but he could hardly be expected to be prepared for what he is ... [5,645 words] [Horror] The Man Who Walked Unseen (Short Stories) An account in the exploits of the life of the unseen... [1,457 words] [Horror] The Menace Of That Most Demented Order (Short Stories) Eli Wellingsworth finally comes face to face with the horror perpetrated by his demented Uncle Bernard. The third tale in a series that I am calling "The Perils of Eli Wellingsworth." The first one ... [12,529 words] [Horror] The Path That Eli Wellingsworth Took (Short Stories) Sequel to my short story, "The House That Bernard Wellingsworth Built." Eli Wellingsworth travels from Manchester, England, to New York after resigning defeat in garnering the attention of anyone who... [9,402 words] [Horror] The Rivals (Short Stories) Adrian Belfast, a young and aspiring author, chances upon the works of one Lucas Slaughter, a person whom he considers his rival. Sequel forthcoming. [5,415 words] [Humor] The Struggle Within: Sestina Number One (Poetry) A sestina is a poem where you interchange six words at the end of each line in six stanzas. This is my first. [258 words] [Horror] The Suffering Christian (A Collection) (Poetry) These are my very first Blank Verse poems, Heroic Couplets, and a Stanza in Heterometric form. The Blank Verse poem possesses some rhyme, and is about being Christian and a selfish sufferer (wanting C... [528 words] [Spiritual] War Of The Writers (Short Stories) This is my first fantasy themed short story. I welcome any and all comments. Thanks in advance! [1,955 words] [Fantasy] We Storymaniacs Should Be The Best (Essays) An essay dealing with why I believe many of us Internet writers will one day be a cut above the rest, and what it will take to get there. [1,101 words] [Motivational]
READER'S REVIEWS (18) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"I think that it was a very good story. I liked the part when Timmy fell into the pit and the grunting beasts came and tried to communicate. There isn't anything that I disliked. If it was a movie I would give it two big thumbs up." -- Brittany Harris, Detroit, MI, USA.
"Hey, Brittany! Thanks for your comments and I'm glad you liked the story. Hey, have you noticed that we live in the same city? That's quite a coincidence, isn't it? For those of you who don't know (and that's everyone) Brittany and I are siblings. But let it be known that I didn't tell her what to say in her review. These are (at least I think they are) her true feelings about the story. Hopefully seeing this review will give more people the gumption to want to read through the story, as it really is one of the best short stories I've ever written. Please! If you're reading this, then read the story!" -- Michael Harris, Detroit, MI.
"I can't wait for the sequel "Evil's Toes"." -- Bobo.
"You just couldn't resist the urge, could you?" -- Michael, Detroit.
"I really liked this story! It had a neat little moral about not destroying what you don't understand. Very interesting! One of the most interesting things I have read here! Imaginative, pretty good dialog as well. Keep on truckin'!" -- Collins, in, in, us.
"Hey, Collins! Your comments were greatly appreciated. In fact, I hadn't even noticed that the story contained that moral that you mentioned. Nice analysis. Thanks a mil!" -- Michael Harris, Detroit.
"I liked it too. Hey, it would make a good movie. " -- km.
"Hey, km! I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks a mil for your comments!" -- Michael, Detroit, MI.
"Hey Michael, I enjoyed the story as well. It read like a story I've written about eight years ago during my freshman year of high school. Nice work!" -- Skyler Drevan.
"Hey, Skyler! I'm glad you liked the story. Take care." -- Michael Harris, Detroit, MI.
"Great introduction to the story - it kept up my interest and drew me deeper into the plot. Wonderful descriptions keeping the story moving along at a good pace. Once again, excellent use of dialogue, as you've demonstrated so many times throughout your work. I'm very much impressed and enjoyed reading your stories. You have a vivid and fertile imagination. Well done, Michael." -- Gregory Christiano, Hopatcong, NJ, USA.
"Hey, Gregory! You're the first person to remark on my introduction. I was going for a Lovecraftian feel with it. Thanks a mil for the review!" -- Michael Harris, Detroit, MI.
"Your voice has certainly matured but I fear that it could have grown a little too formal for the subject matter - this could easily be made into a children's story (ever considered the market?). I'll start with a couple of notes that I picked up on. Being overly specific with the time, the time of day and which day of the week takes away a bit of the magic of the piece. I think it might be better left 'timeless' - you can say 'the next day' and 'yesterday' and what not, but don't give it the particulars of Monday, Tuesday, five o'clock etc. This piece of dialogue "I just told him to be safe, and he said he would, running out of the house in his customary manner with his arms splayed out mimicing a bird." doesn't sound realistic, and it would be better if changed slightly to "I just told him to be safe, and he said he would." Timmy then ran out of the house in his customary manner with his arms splayed out mimicing a bird. Where Timmy's mother and nanny are talking about him suddenly being social, shouldn't they be pleased rather than quizzing him about it? The mayor sounds like he naturally speaks like he's making speeches on the election campaign. I like how the story begins centred around Timmy but is then confined to the parents - the bunch of innocents. Who were the creatures who chatted at the top of the pit? Good description all the way through - this is a very good piece of work. Just keep polishing it until it sparkles - good luck." -- Jack Brown.
"Hey, Jack! My father wants me to write children stories and I've even taken a children's literature class but I've just never got the gumption to write children's stories. The creatures who chatted at the top of the pit could either be orcs or goblins depending on your point of view. Thanks for the review and I'll be looking forward to your Goblin sequel." -- Michael Harris, Detroit, MI.
"Yeah, that might take me a while but I'll keep you posted, lol. Just posted the Happy House and have started a romance novel (eek) so we'll see how all that goes." -- Jack Brown.
"Yeah, I was intent on reading and critiquing your newest story too, just so you know. Until then I guess." -- Michael Harris, Detroit, MI.
"Do you use any pen-names, Michael? http://www.fantastichorror.com/06/byron-evilsfingers.html ... We would like to straighten this out." -- Fantastic Horror.
"No I don't actually. That's pretty shocking. I contributed to this guys horror emag a couple of times in the past..." -- Michael Harris, Detroit, MI.
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