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TITLE (EDIT)
My Last Night With Her |
DESCRIPTION
A quick story.
[448 words] |
AUTHOR
Rae |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Scars were her poison
always ugly in day
ripped her own heart out
as if to say:
sing not to me
I care not at all
I am who I'll be
or I'll be not at all
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AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (66)
A World With You (Poetry) - [49 words]
After Dark (Poetry) I used to really like the nighttime... [74 words]
As Bad As I Make It (Poetry) - [51 words]
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Beauty Of Horror (Poetry) - [87 words]
Begging Forgiveness (Poetry) - [60 words]
Broken Tears (Songs) Had a weird afternoon... inspired a song... I hope this one is less confusing to everyone than the last one I posted! [279 words]
Canyon (Poetry) More adventures in cutting. [18 words]
Caress (Poetry) Took excerpts from In Watermelon Sugar by Richard Brautigan and The Knife by Richard Selzer and made them into a poem. really focused on style in this one... [76 words]
Comfort (Poetry) - [120 words]
Coming Together (Poetry) For now I am calling it a work in progress, but would appreciate feedback on whether it sounds incomplete or not. [109 words]
Daybreak (Poetry) - [75 words]
Devil Screams (Songs) I don't like it. maybe you will. or maybe i'll just delete it tomorrow. [130 words]
Doomed To Be Free And Fanciful (Poetry) - [75 words]
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I Hate Making Titles 2 (Songs) Song. [128 words]
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Once I Hit The Ground (Poetry) - [99 words]
Passion's Ruins (Poetry) - [56 words]
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My Last Night With Her
Rae
I dreamt it all before I woke to the faded murmer. Before I turned to her I wrapped my fingers lightly around my penis. I thought of how many times we had made love in this bed. I opened my eyes and looked out into the dark. It was thick and silent. The hand on my penis twitched and I rolled to my other side to take it in. She was nude on her back and the cotton sheet covered her from the waist down. I left one hand to stroke myself as the other reached for her chest. My fingers trembled as they traced a line between her breasts. She was sticky; the feverish sweat beginning to dry. I cupped her breast and it still felt alive. It was warm and I squeezed it. I brushed my fingers on her nipple. For once it didn't rise up to meet my touch, only stayed soft. Now I rose up and straddled her naked body with mine as I had done so often before. Except now she wasn't writhing beneath me. She wasn't stroking my back or kissing my neck. She wasn't reminding me to be quiet or gentle, she wasn't begging to feel me. She only remained motionless and let the moonlight from the window illuminate her face and shoulders. I lowered my head and kissed her mouth, letting my lips linger softly on hers. I couldn't feel the warm breath flowing from her nostrils. One of the many things I took for granted. Moving the sheet out of my way, I spread her legs. The smell of urine floated up and I ignored it. She was still wet enough for me to slide in easily. I pushed slowly, mesmerized. My mind was gone, not here. I kissed her nipples once I was fully inside of her. There was no rising and falling of her stomach as she breathed heavily. Her hips did not thrust up passionately. And yet, with my cock inside of her non-responsive cunt, with my tongue encouraging the hardening of her ever-soft nipples, this was more erotic. This was her when she hadn't the ability to hide or cover up. This was her stripped from everything and I'd be damned if I didn't feel how simple she was, how uncomplicated love could be.
I finished and covered her. My hand rested on her ribs, just below her cooling breast. I fell asleep with her as though it were just another night. In the morning I'd phone the hospital, in the morning I'd grieve. Tonight was still ours and I stroked the bottom of her breast with my thumb as I slipped back into sleep.
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"Rae, you write beautifully. This was a sad tale and it even angered me that he was so cold and self important. But I reminded myself its only a story. It that which makes you such a talented writer. " -- km.
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STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
December 2004 |
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