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A Gun On A Summers Day Jessi
A summers day pure at first The perfect sunrise awakens the world Nothing stirs till the birds start to sing then all is a blur of life Something different is in the world of peace and nature today Something small and shiny Like the silver from the ground or a lovely stream sparkling in the sunlight But this thing is not beautiful It does not make you happy to see it The shiny thing is a gun The creatures of the world wonder what this thing is doing here It has no use for them You can not eat it You cant make shelter out of it You can do nothign usefull with it So what is it for? Only one creature made in the hands of god knows the answer to this A human being
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"are you saying man hunts animals down. " -- Bug off.
"no im not. i dont know what i was saying. i was just typin random thoughts that came to my head. and humans made the gun. and i dont think it has any practical use." -- Jessi.
"I don't know how old you are but did it ever occur to you that the Police and the military need weapons to protect its citizens. Indians used to kill deer and buffalo with bows and arrows before the gun was invented. Would you feel better if humans went back to hunting with bows and arrows instead of using guns and rifles? Put your random thoughts together, perhaps in an outline form. Then reconstruct the outline into a poetry or story format before you write and post. " -- Richard.
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