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Blood Of Tears Christcross
As I a was awoken by the beam of light that made its way into my room. I aross to a sitting position as I glaced around my snowy room. I knew that it was morning but I could'nt get over the image in my head. At the corner of my eye I saw something that made me dread. The spheric blakness that layed against the corner of my room. So the torment has just begun.To be continued...
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"Normally I wouldn't even bother to comment on something so poorly written as this and your other offering. From the spelling and grammar, it appears that you may be from another country and have obviously not yet learned English well enough to write at an acceptable level. I applaud your effort but encourage you to improve your English and check your spelling if you want others to read your work. " -- Grammar Detective.
"Just to let you know I am only using the browser of a PlayStation Portable, and it will not display spelling errors." -- christcross, somewhere, United States, Kentucky.
"You are in trouble if you have to rely on spell-check to teach you to spell. "As I was AWAKENED," not awoken. Then you need a comma after my room, not a period. Then... "I AROSE" ...then... "glaced" and I assume you mean GLANCED. Then.... "I saw something that made me dread".....dread what? Then..."the spheric BLACKNESS" If you want respect for your submission, at least take the time to review what you've written before you submit it. If you did review it before posting, all I can say is... God help you. " -- Grammar Detective.
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