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This is my first song. I guess it's about saying something you regret and wish you can take it back. Especially when it could hurt somebody. [372 words]
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If Only I Hadn't Said A Word Alicia Marlene Dean-Hunter
You are my angel that fell from the stars
you gave me a gift of true romance
but suddenly you were gone from me
and left me in the dark
Maybe it was me
I am a thorn on a bush tree
you gave me a heart right from the start
I am sorry my angel
If only I hadn't said a word
You gave me a chance from the start
you lifted me up high
I took your gift and threw it into the sky
I said something that made you wanna cry
I told you something that screwed up my life
I wish I didn't say a word
that said something that was true to my heart
my angel all I said
was I Love You
I guess I was stupied
I guess I was dumb
You were young and fresh
you and I were new at this
I knew from the start you wouldn't break my heart
You were scared of starting something new
I wish you were right here with me
I am sorry
I told you something you weren't ready to hear
If only I hadn't said a word
You gave me a chance from the start
you lifted me up high
I took your gift and threw it into the sky
I said something that made you wanna cry
I told you something that screwed up my life
I wish I didn't say a word
that said something that was true to my heart
my angel all I said
was I Love You
Oh please I am sorry
I guess I knew that you weren't meant for me
my angel I release you
you are free
to fly far away
to somebody one day
I thank god for you
and the things you do
I am sad I lost you
but that is how it goes
God wanted his angel back
and took you back into the stars
I wish I didn't scare you
that made you drive away
you crashed into a another driver
and you died that day
Im sorry I told you something I regret this day
all I said my darling
was I love you
You gave me a chance from the start
you lifted me up high
I took your gift and threw it into the sky
I said something that made you wanna cry
I told you something that screwed up my life
I wish I didn't say a word
that said something that was true to my heart
my angel all I said
was I Love You
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"I really like your song. Has a flow to it, and the lyrics are true and sweet. Good Job :)" -- Dennis Kanan.
"Your song is poor in style and tone. Words like SCREWED are out of context with the other words. These are poor style and tone skills. I learned to read and write music and you have to use the same style of wording once you start your song. E.g., "I love you and I always will. Your love is all that I feel. Don't leave me now can't we work it out somehow?" All the words have the same style and tone quality. Now read this comparison: "I love you and I always will. I ain't feeling yo stupid thrills. Gown fool you's crazy or on drugs!!!" The first line of the comparison sets the tone and style after that the tone and style changed completely and is a turn-off!!! " -- Wesley McCants, Cincinnati, Ohio, USA.
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