DESCRIPTION
This written song is about a girl I am currently having an intense crush on. Her name is not Daisy, but I don't want to mention her name because it is a very unique name. I am writing this song at a time of constantly having to deal with numerous crushes in the past that turn bad. It talks about why I really like this current girl and mentions that my chances of being with her are slim to none. I would say it could be played as a country or alternative rock song. Any singers interested in playing these lyrics please contact me. [632 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
My name is Charlie Bates and I am a freshman at Kutztown University of Pennsylvania. I am going to be a psychology major next year, but have considered majoring in writing. Despite the grammar errors I communicate best in writing. I get my point out on issues I talk about very effectivley. My interests include watching movies, listening to music, travelling, and studying the lottery, and finding true happiness. [February 2009]
You were there just relaxed talking on the phone when I first noticed you. Within a second I had this weird feeling you might just be the one. Then a moment later I brushed it off, snapping back to reality.
At a time of crisis I too was relaxed. Then you came and we talked and talked for a few sweet minutes. In the end it was just a simple conservation, but I thought of it as meaning more for better or worse. Time went by and I tried to forget you, but I couldn’t get over this simple crush that was developing more complex by the minute.
You were there just relaxed talking on the phone when I first noticed you. Within a second I had this weird feeling you might just be the one. Then a moment later I brushed it off, snapping back to reality.
A few weeks later I am caught in a dilemma. I still think about you on a gradual basis, but it’s taking me away from reality. I succumb to the smoke that flows to my lungs and up to my brain…..
I have reached the peak state and I am united with you. You are like the perfect flower picked from a field that extends to the eye can see. We are together and fully understand each other. You are just like how I picture you in my dreams from back in reality, tall with brown hair and dark brown eyes. Nothing could possibly stop us from being together forever except reality…..
Back in the real world I feel like shit once again. Left with no one by my side because I stay obsessed thinking about you and thinking how great life would be if we were together based on the very few facts I know about you and your good looks.
A few weeks later I am caught in a dilemma. I still think about you on a gradual basis, but it’s taking me away from reality. I succumb to the smoke that flows to my lungs and up to my brain…..
This time I forget you for once and for a few sweet hours I look for other things to look forward to in life. It is a time to truly relax and not think about soul mates and crushes gone bad wrong in the past, present, and future……
Back in the real world I feel like shit once again. Left with no one by my side because I stay obsessed thinking about you and thinking how great life would be if we were together based on the very few facts I know about you and your good looks.
On a Monday during a week of recovery, I realize that I like you more than ever before and it hurts me that we may never be together because of different sex appeal levels and a committed relationship. But despite that, I stare in awe of how tall you are and how you look perfect in every way to my eyes. I for a moment or two just think of what life would be like if we were together.
Now I wonder and sometimes fear that you will forever be on my mind, but you shouldn’t be if I find a girl that I truly love and come to believe along with her that we are soul mates. But until that day comes if it does, I will just be filled with sorrow and hang on that very small hope that maybe things will turn in our favor were meant for each other.
You were there just relaxed talking on the phone when I first noticed you. Within a second I had this weird feeling you might just be the one. Then a moment later I brushed it off, snapping back to reality.
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"Oh my gosh! My name is Daisy. That is really sweet! She would absolutely love this!! It's great!!" -- Daisy, Nashville, TN, America.
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